 Okay, great, hey guys, this is Dr. Nancy Lee, we are live on both YouTube and LinkedIn. If you can see me live, please comment on the chat, what's your name, where you're from, what you go for 2023, and we are today we're doing live resume review. Let me double check, we are actually live on YouTube, yes, we are, perfect, okay, so I got it, I see Bin Chen is there, hello, hello, welcome, welcome, yes, so comment on the chat, what's your name, where you're from, and what you go for 2023, and we're getting started in one minute, awesome. Okay, so now, quick introduction, we already have three people with me today to do live resume review. Also going to share it with everybody regarding how you can submit your resume live with me as well, okay, so quick introduction, my name is Dr. Nancy Lee, Director of Product and Future Enforced, I've helped 100 people land their dream camp job offer in fan companies and unicorn startup, and continue to get promoted as a product leader, and right now we are in the primary recruiting season, also lots of people do not know, hey, how can I really capture the right timeframe, and make sure I'm landing lots of great interviews to eventually land into the job offer, but step one for lots of people who enter this recruiting season, they always feel very confused, saying hey, I applied for lots of jobs, why on earth, I don't have interview opportunities, here comes the resume problem, and maybe something wrong with the resume, or networking strategy, or your portfolio, these three, these three must go wrong, that lead into not having interview opportunities, okay, so today we specialize in doing live resume review with someone who already present, and also people who is joining us live also have people who is part of our masterclass training tomorrow regarding portfolio, here is a quick instruction for other who want to receive resume review, anybody who is part of my masterclass, you are able to get free resume review, and you just need to email my team who ever finished your masterclass or before masterclass to email my team regarding the day you registered for the masterclass, and all of you guys will receive free resume review just like today, we already have three people joining me live right now, okay, so what is masterclass people don't know, and this is also pre-event training, if you already registered you get a link, join me live right now to do your live resume review, so now let me show you how to submit your resume live, give me a second, cool, so let me do this, there is a there's a contact information you can use, let me show you my screen, my screen right now, okay, so okay, here's what to do, email me live whenever I'm live on YouTube and LinkedIn, email me this Nancy at darknancy.com for people joining me Zoom, please email me as well your resume, I seen some of you guys already email my team, so that's why she sent you the Zoom link before your resume, when I go live you send it to me, okay, so your resume in your email title should be resume review, registered masterclass, and your email description should tell me which day you registered for the masterclass, okay, so one of the priorities people who is already part of our masterclass, the reason is when we go for a masterclass we're gonna you already have resume ready and we teach you how to do prior portfolio after you finish it, you're ready for job hunting right away, okay, so make sure email me at nancy.nancy.com when I'm not live, email my team, even for PMSI, oh okay, but when I'm live email this one so I can pull up your resume right away, okay, just email title resume review and also tell me the rest of the masterclass registration date which day did you register, okay, so let's get started, now what is masterclass, okay, this one, okay, go to darknancy.com and home page, then there is a button, the biggest button ever on the home page, you click and then you come here, that's when you start the time to join us, okay, so whoever joined us you have free resume review with us and here we teach you part of portfolio, I don't teach you resume on this training, so that's why this is a pre-event training, before you join me in the masterclass you already have your resume ready, okay, so the purpose of pre-event training and also in the description of this live training right now on YouTube and LinkedIn, there is a link, we can go to the masterclass as well, the same contact, same information or just go to darknancy.com which is right here, okay, so let me put up people's resume right now, give me a second, so I think somebody emailed me your resume this morning, let me put it up right now, hold on, oh we also see people already commented on the chat, Janish from London looking for part manager for the next opportunity, welcome, welcome, awesome, and Janish I have your resume ready as well, cool, cool, now let me see Eugene, Eugene from Nigeria, Rainford, you are in Rainford from Nigeria, welcome, welcome, your goal for 2023 is run a part manager role and also activate and achieve an impressive level of career growth, I love this, awesome, awesome, so Faye, nice meeting you, okay, so let me, I have people's resume ready, let me share my screen, show you how to improve your resume, so then let me find, let me share the right tab, how many tabs ready, okay, Shaye, so Faye is from Master of Honor with 17 years experience at Tesla, welcome, cool, software software, this is very good actually, I think you are, you already follow our template, this is great, cool, sorry, actually change it, move this around, change product owner, certified product owner and scroll master, oh you say product owner and a certified scroll master with seven years experience in Tesla, looking for, this is great, a lot of businesses and stuff, did you review this with Daphne already? No I haven't, I just saw one of your resume samples and just made it based on that, very good, it's already very good, clearly you are using our thing, template, this is very good, no need to say promoted, are you saying that you're promoted from a software engineer to this position, actually I got promoted from senior software product manager to a staff software product manager, definitely, oh, staff software product manager is higher than senior product manager, yeah, yeah, it's the highest level, yeah, it's not, it's not obvious from the outside, oh okay, yeah, it is obvious from you guys to us, this is lower position, oh okay, yeah, yeah, yeah, to us this is, if this is senior this should be principal, oh, from the outside, this is not senior, from the outside he is just a guy, a PM that's it, okay, it changes title, it means something different outside, oh that's why I said why this is promoted, you promoted staff from software engineer to staff, okay fine, I said no, you promoted from senior to this, okay, you need to find the equivalent title outside, you can cut the level usually outside the level above senior PM is principal PM, oh okay, okay, so you can, you can, you can just say principal staff, software product manager, okay, okay, if people ask you what is this really principal say, Tesla is weird, senior, anything above senior is called staff, I want to make it clear to people outside, anything above senior it is principal just like anywhere outside, so you call yourself principal staff, software product manager, so the oh you have senior and you come to principal, that means something very different, oh that's that's important thing, but the rest is good, oh okay, okay, let me see, no need to say promoted because you're clearly this is principal to senior, no need to say promoted, okay, agile, using agile methodology, keywords agile, okay, move down below, this is this is most grandmaster, move it down below, move plus strategy up here, have you conducted voice customer interview, yes I have, yeah, where is it, I added that in the in the in the next experience, the senior software product manager, yeah, I have one more point here, okay, repeat the keywords again again, repeat the keywords again again right here, okay, so move down and also define parametrics should have should happen before user acceptance testing, define parametrics KPI, okay, and to qualify success of the error procedures and perform user acceptance testing, move, swap the order, we need our keywords upfront, design plus strategy, move plus strategy upfront either as well, did you did you work on GTM at all actually, actually mine is B2B, that's why the GTM was not like a B2B, they'll also have GTM, GTM means you make your customer use it, oh yeah that that I do always do like basically that's the, you need the holy point about GTM, create a GTM, create the GTM strategies and funnel for B2B enterprise customer to adopt ABCD kind of jobs, oh right no no ABC kind of product, okay, so at here we discussed last time, you need to think about your specific product domain, it is automation or it is enterprise or B2B, so you can change according based on the type of jobs you apply, okay, but you plug in those keywords for example create design plus strategy of B2B enterprise product based on customer requirement, okay, first strategy B2B, off ABCD thing, so you describe your product, right, could be B2B, could be a platform, could be supply chain platform, right, so you can change the specific keywords of your product to qualify the the relevancy of the future job you want to apply for, so for Meta and TikTok what would be the like enterprise, would it be like enterprise software or no, TikTok B2C, you should read the job description of TikTok, sometimes they will be very clear that we're doing creators, creator B2C, Amy joined TikTok working creator manager, creator B2C, right, it's different, so read the job description, some of them they make it very clear what type of product, so if it's a creator, so you don't say B2B at all, you just say platform because creators still use platform, right, so strategy of like a whatever platform product based on current requirement that the different things, you also need a bullet point regarding road product requirement, so I think this is redundant, I think this is spring, this is too redundant, okay, I will change this one regarding requirements, you can say road product requirement documentation, okay, by communicating developers and balancing developer springboards, okay, so basically I was, yeah, okay, the springboard you show show up twice, we don't we don't need it, is this mainly changed to the requirement, you also add GTM, create GTM for what kind of ABCD product, then the rest is good to go, before that is senior PM very good and then oh this is very nice, I like it, okay, so let's read the senior PM very quickly Cloud Empower, very good, if you want to go for cloud company, you book cloud as well, okay, for AI, last mile, so charge, yeah, do this up there as well, this is good, okay, this is fantastic, how many senior managers, how many give a train, six, five, okay, good, this is very good, this is the quality we're looking for from our students, no, no, no, no, no, so this is something about agile, okay, okay, all your like agile engineering team, like scrum, you should put it here, say something about agile, create a system, this is the last one to keep, whatever others, you need to say something about agile, avoid hitting a lying down situation in the factory, this sounds weird, bridge calls, you need to say it differently, okay, rather you talk about creating like agile methodology with the engineering team to quickly develop five different product features that come here with this one, because this one sounds weird, we don't understand what the bridge calls, you know, all of this is more in the factory, okay, okay, I'll change that, yeah, technical skills and merge your technical skills, okay, okay, so there are two skills, those are all the skills, department management skills and also technical skills, technical skills are, this is all technical skills, just call the skills, skills, department management skills and engineering skills, with the requirements here, user stories, all the keywords they gave you, okay, module one, I see you're good to go, this is very good, you have minimum working to do on your resume before you complete another version with Stephanie, oh, this is very impressive, it's change principal, principal for the manager, I think you are at least 200k job, cool, good job, okay, so yeah, Ashay is our student, that's why his resume is significantly better than other people, okay, so just one last question, so I'm working on my portfolio as you asked, and I'm adding a lot of stuff on it, but as I said, I cannot add too many details because of the NDA, but having said that, should I still go on ahead, I know I'll be working on the portfolio, but should I still go on ahead and start applying with this resume at least, or do I have to plug my portfolio and resume all the time? For non-party companies, you can apply right away, but you still need to use an African script, it will lend you so many job interviews, just say, hey, I'm a principal part of manager at Tesla, I'm interested in your company because I have seven years experience in doing this, this, this with five million dollars in whatever you have so much, 250 million dollars, those kind of impact is you'll lend so many interviews, okay, you should use networking strategy for all of them because you practice, your practice, your goal is I just hit all the hiring manager, whoever has opening for practice first, then use networking strategies, and then we go to a fan company, your pitch is already refined, okay, I still need your portfolio because we need to lend high-paying job offer, we still need it, but right now for non-party companies, I don't even want to join them, I don't use them for practice, and you go without portfolio, no problem. Okay, my 32nd elevator pitch is ready too, I got that reviewed by Shirley. Read it out to me right now. Okay, all right, just give me one second, bring it up. Remember your LinkedIn outreach message is even shorter, the first 300 characters on LinkedIn is even shorter than your 30 seconds elevator pitch, okay, you pick the best one, we have sample template in module two, okay, because you can fit everything there, but once they accept the invitation, you can send the whole script regarding who you are, you have longer version, so let's review your pitch right now. Okay, okay, so my name is Akshay Murley, I'm staff software product manager and I have seven plus years of experience in launching. No, no, no, not staff software, your principal, your principal product manager. I will change that, yes. Staff rate is low. Okay, so let me add that. That means low, that means lower than senior. Oh yeah, I didn't know that, so yeah, Tesla does like things in the opposite way. Oh yeah, okay, I added that. So I'm a principal software product manager and have seven plus years of experience in launching products and programs at Tesla. I also have masters in system science and industrial engineering from State University of New York and I'm also a certified scrum master and product owner. I have developed four major technical products from design to delivery, primarily in Tesla's supply chain and factory software portfolio. I recently launched a mobile application product called Synergy that streamlines the process of receiving fulfillment orders and delivering directly to customers. This product was adopted by over 1200 Tesla energy, e-commerce and service facilities across the globe and is being used by 13,000 users every day. Because of Synergy, Tesla manages to deliver over 500,000 destinations globally, where the legacy application before Synergy was just delivering less than 200,000. This is equivalent to around 350 million revenue per month and this is the biggest product in Tesla's factory and supply chain software suite and has increased the customer satisfaction rate from 58% to 90%, leading me to get promoted three times in the last four and a half years. I'm open to new product manager opportunities because I am very passionate about bringing business needs and customer needs together and I'm extremely passionate about so that is. Okay, very good. The impact you have is already impressed me. Why you want to impress me three times to make it true. Okay, let's start off. So you said the thing you built is whatever five times better, whatever something you said in the past, they delivered this number. You delivered this number, right? The sentence can be rewritten saying that this new invention is 10 times more volume, whatever, than the prior. This leading to, yeah, to say it faster, this leading to how much whatever more money this is for Tesla, that's it. Okay. No need to say more than just a few bullet point you had and you know, you say, oh, this also has significant customer satisfaction, but before that, you said has been used by so many million, whatever billion, whatever, how many Tesla users, which is also good as well. But you say make it short, you have number of users and 10 times better than prior version leading to how much revenue for Tesla, that's it. This helped me promote it three, four times, whatever, three times in the past four years within Tesla. And now I'm looking for my next adventure to join the industry, whatever you want to say. For the company you want to pitch, the rest is fantastic. Okay, so now for your shorter pitch, you just say, hey, I'm a principal partner manager in Tesla with seven years experience in launching global successful product, in launching successful will be to be product globally. And that's why I launched whatever, synergy, whatever, fuel charger, it doesn't matter, whatever the in your pitch, we don't need to say words. No need to say the city where I launched in Tesla, I launched automation, product, used by 100 million drivers, something like that. And also got promoted four times, three times, whatever, in Tesla. I love to, that I like to connect to, I believe on top 1% candidate, I connect, discuss my candidacy, that's it. Okay, your top 1%. Okay, pitch already, this the 30 seconds I'll be the pitch or make you top 1%. So definitely interview. Okay, I just need to show concise, get to the point with package will be top 1%. But you have to be like, you literally say it in the interview as if you're top 1%. That's all the interviews coming up. But the packaging is perfect right now. Okay, so basically, just climb it down a little bit. You know, the numbers that are too much basically just added on the legacy product, how much better it is from the legacy product. 10 times better than the legacy product period, that's it. Okay, this is the this is 10 times better than the legacy product. No need to add and then which has, you know, gain Tesla $350 million worth of revenue. We want that part. Okay, so add that. No, no, no. When you're 30 seconds elevated pitch, you cannot add all of those. Right. Okay, the number of users. And then you got four times. Okay, so only number of users. And you promote it four times. Okay. For your whole pitch, you can add all of those up there. And the whole pitch is used for the. Give me one second. I don't know. I don't know. You moved it. You can find it. Okay, cool. Yeah. Your whole picture. Your shorter one is very short. So you cannot write everything. Just just write some users. Use the numbers, get promoted four times within Tesla. I must say that your principal, principal PM in Tesla and people go on your profile. Okay, okay. So basically the 30 second elevated pitch is only for when we talk about it. And at that time, you know, do not add like so many numbers. But for the networking pitch, which is shorter, add these numbers, how much it is better. And then basically just say that B2B globally and talk basically even for your whole pitch, you still say 10% better. Okay, got 10 times better, whatever. The whole thing need to be 10 times better for networking only 300 only 300 characters. The first message is sent out to other people. We cannot fit everything. Okay, got it. Okay. So that's why so once they accept the invitation, you can make it. You can send a longer pitch. We'll we craft for you. Okay. Okay. Which is which is what Sherry gave me. Yeah, with small modification, I just told you what to do. You're good to go. Ah, you've learned so many interviews. Speed, speed, speed is king. Okay, I have lots of crazy stuff going on. I know, I'm not, I'm not gone ahead and started applying it because I wanted to keep that package ready. And now I think I'm, I'm almost near the end. So I'm almost ready. So I'm like the best for the, for the last time, just kind of putting the whole package ready. Once the portfolio is ready, then I'm almost there. Then I'm like, good to go. Yeah. Once before, really, you can apply for target companies, none matter, none. You need to improve the interview skills first. Okay, but the larger, a little bit larger. But right now for like any, any random company startup, whatever, you don't care. Let me just practice, send it over to them and pitch them. Okay. Okay. And then, yeah, we'll talk about the, the actual networking later on. So that's totally fine in the office hours or something. Yeah, you can come to office hours. We'll discuss more. Awesome. Ah, you're ready. You're ready. I like it. I like it very, very sharp. We'll get paid significantly. That's, that's exactly what I'm looking for. So that's very sharp. We'll get paid more, significantly more for sure. Okay, cool. All right. So let me know the next one. Who you should use? Janish from London. How are you? Can you turn on your camera? Hi, yeah. Okay. Cool. Have you sent me your resume? Yes. You have. Hold on. Slow down. Let me put it up. I have a lot going on. Janish. Yeah, I found this. Okay. Resume. Cool. Let me share you my screen. Nice meeting you. Let me do this. Okay. And also quick check regarding messages, people message us on YouTube to make sure we, slow down. Slow down. I need to see. I'm going to go to my YouTube channel. So message us there. Okay. This is my one. We have messages here. Let me, hold on. Let me pull this out. Okay. Alex. Hello, Alexander. I'm not a student. Can you read your mind? Yes, I can. Alex, you can directly email me. But we prior has people who registered for our masterclass. So that's what's going on because we have live training for part of a photo tomorrow. So that's why I want all your resume to be ready. Okay. So now, I need to review your resume right now. Janish. Okay. Here is what's going on. Here's what's going on. You have so many years experience, but we need to make you stand on one. We need to add more things here. So question to you. Have you done any product strategy work? Role map and strategy? Yeah. So yeah, it is for not for pain attacks because pain attacks is very recent. It's a freelancing part-time opportunity. Whereas for World Cup or yes. So basically done a growth strategy for them. And leading three cross functional scourge effectively delivering enterprise paid digital asset custody. It's not well written. So assuming this, we don't have enough time to work on stuff. So I don't touch it. But for this one, it's not well written. I should talk about the creative part of strategy of ABCD product. Growth strategy is fine. But do you create end to end part of strategy? If so, you have a bullet point around it. Okay. And then you have some interview, no problem. But you have 30 years experience. I want to hear more like strategy work. Role map. Did you write for a role map? Right. You must write those. You need to add more bullet point to those experience. You're lacking because I have 30 years experience. I'm looking for strategy, role map, like mentor people, leading a team, leading a team of 20 engineers, and 20 engineers, designers creates ABCD kind of product with those kind of impact, something like that. Or you cannot qualify for senior. Same thing as well. The problem with your resume is you have too much years experience. You're competing with someone that you already have 30 years experience. You're already a principal or manager. You see a J himself. He's already a principal or manager in Tesla. You're competing with him. You're 13. He has seven. He's already a principal PM doing this impact. That impact different things. So that's where we are competing against. If you're a fresh graduate or you have two years experience, this is fantastic. Two years experience have something that's good enough. Now, 13, your bar is significantly higher. You must show me in the first two experience, many different role maps, strategy, leading to how much money was in the company, like leading a team of 20 engineers, with those kind of big scale projects, something I want to see that or you're lacking in the competition. So add all the keywords I asked were in those two experiences, hopefully here, if you don't have time, it's okay. This is understandable. But these two, I need to see all the those kind of big words as well. Okay, so if they experience whatever cool you can keep this with but you're missing what was looking for. Just to highlight, so within that 13 years, seven years is primarily what about five years is primarily software engineer. So that's the bottom where I've combined about various companies just before the director JTG. So that's primarily five years with software engineer experience and then product management experience. I see, let me see your distance combined. Okay, for the combined one, you need more regarding writing requirements. This is more junior role, right? So when junior agile, you write more agile and writing requirements at a more point there. Your director as engineers, your director of software engineering should make it clear. Sure. All right, if your software engineer makes it clear, the problem is up here. I want to see all the strategy work right here. And even this one, I don't like it because you talk about collaboration. This people, but where is the still roadmap? Okay, cool. Always writing requirements. So this is more junior. This is more senior, right? So for more junior, I'm looking for requirement stuff, right? For requirement, user stories, conduct voice, customer interviews. I don't see it in the junior thing here. So you're missing what I was looking for for the level you're going for. Okay, that's what's going on. Okay, cool. Yeah, please add it back. But you have those experience, you already, you have advantage over others, we need to use wisely. Okay, but anyway, good job. You already have those experience, you're adding what I was looking for. Okay. So now, who else is here? Anusha? Are you here? Hello. Hi. Yeah, I'm Anusha. How are you? I'm great. And great. So did you send me your resume? Yeah. Slow down. Let me find you. Anusha. Cool. Okay, let me share the location. So you're getting a bachelor's degree. Yeah, it's kind of my first attempt at making your resume tailored for this job. So yeah, exactly. What did you do? This is testing. What is a PM intern or software engineering intern? Software engineer. Do I not put that in or is it a prototype? It's weird. You can directly say software engineering intern because it's not right here, which we did. Okay. Google summer. Again, they all need to have a title if it's software engineering intern. You're missing all the PMT words. First of all, the title is weird. And then your PM keywords should be the employment plan for tests over a course of two months. No problem of what kind of product that's missing. And then you should also end the process. You talk to customers or end users. If so, you should talk, contact a voice customer interview, right? Or agile methodology. If it's software engineer, you should talk about ABCD things using agile methodology. You're missing all the keywords I was looking for. Lots of software engineering become a product manager. That's no problem. You're just missing all the things. At least I didn't want GTN. No problem. But you're working agile. You're still missing agile here. You didn't use what I asked you to do. So let me show you guys. Anyone who registered for our master class will send you a template. Resume template. You can also find our template here. You're missing significantly. Our playlist, these two. Those keywords are here. So those are the keywords in the description. The description is right here. Okay. You can download the template yourself. You're not even doing the basics. We'll ask you guys to do it. When you guys registered for the master class, we send you those templates and also videos. We should do basics. And then you do some more advanced review. You're missing significantly. Okay. So please rewrite it. And then it's just a completely missing big time. You're not doing anything I asked you to do, which is here. Please watch again. I'm putting the chat for everybody. I'm putting the chat for everybody. So that resume is not going to land a PM job at all, or intern anything. Significantly missing. Sorry. I'm very straightforward. So put it here. I'm putting it in on YouTube. Let me also put in the Zoom chat as well. You can watch. Okay. So let me put in Zoom chat. Right here. Okay. Cool. All right. So Alicia sent. Okay. So my resume. Alicia, you're late. So let me review everybody how to send your resume. You drew. Can you have me share my resume? I registered for master class as well. Okay. So here is how to review your resume. Let me send the instructions again. Let me do this. Here we go. So everybody see my screen? If you want your resume to be reviewed for free, put it here. Email me right now on the nc.com. If you watch replay, you should email my team at 4 p.m. at Thursday. Either one is fine. So when I email this one, we're not live email my team. Okay. So find out the right email. And also who do we prioritize to review? All the resumes is people who is part of our master class right here. Go to docnancy.com, my homepage. And click this button. And go to master class. We can sign up. Okay. So the reason is this is pre-event training, which means that before they come to our live master class, want to have a resume ready. Okay. And then we teach you how to do a product portfolio, which is what we're going to cover there. Give you two different type of product portfolio tools you can create right away. And then you go for job hunting. Okay. You must have your resume ready. That's why I give you free resume review. People who is part of master class, you get priorities if you have extra time. We can review other people's resume as well. So when you email me, tell me when did you resume review as an email title? And also email me when did you sign up for the master class? Okay. So let me put people up. Next resume. Jill, let me bring up your resume. One sec. Can I mute her on zoom? Let me mute everybody. So Jill, I have yours here. Senior marketing manager. Jill, are you live on YouTube or LinkedIn right now? Come on on the chat. What type of role are you looking for? I assume PM. I'm looking for your job in the US or China. Come on the chat on YouTube. So I can see it now. Very weird resume. What kind of job are you looking for? I couldn't even tell. I look for PM job. Are you looking for PM job or not? Jill, come on the chat of YouTube is weird. Okay. So quick overview. Assuming this is for PM job, I assume this resume is missing significantly. It's missing everything I was looking for. Significant is like completely weird. Let's ignore part of marketing for now. Let's just talk about part of manager. This is a real part of manager job. So this has nothing to do with what exactly you did at the PM. And you launch another feature. Okay. You have so many fans. Okay. This launching something is fine. It's all so weird. Are you looking for job in China or US? Maybe in China, they're fine. I don't know. Sounds really weird. Maybe Chinese PM and US PM are very different. I don't know. It looks really weird. Okay. So now what's weird is you're missing everything I was looking for. Assuming you're going to work for a national company. It looks like you work for Amazon but the way you describe it is also extremely weird. Okay. So now you should have talked about if you're already a part of manager for Amazon in the past, you should talk about role product requirement of ABCD things. It should also talk about product requirement, not product roadmap. Like Joe put a roadmap off ABCD different things. Define value proposition is fine. This is more part of marketing but Joe put a roadmap of ABCD things. Conduct voice of customer interview is also missing. Okay. Is this maybe your value proposition marketing channel? Those are GTM. You can write a body point regarding GTM gold market strategy. This is also missing. You're missing significantly almost everything. Everything I was looking for is not here. Please. It's crazy. I don't even know what you're missing. I don't even know how to rewrite or take me an hour to rewrite everything that had nothing. Okay. So here's what to do. Come here. Come here and watch the basic training. When you register for our master class, we'll send you a link to different free training and also there is a resume template when you register for the master class. You use it right away. Okay. You can watch a replay at the beginning when exchange. He's one of our students. His resume looks significantly better and different from yours, Joe. So you change it using our system. Okay. Right now it looks very extremely weird. Just doesn't have things I was looking for completely. Just don't even know how it's matching to the international company level. Very confused. I don't even know what kind of countries you're looking for job. Maybe it's okay in China. I don't know. Cool. So let me let me do the next one. Let me do the next one. So hold on. Slow down. Cameron, you register for now and I have sent the resume to email. What's wrong? You could give me some advice. Cameron. Okay. Cool. Let me go here. Let me find your resume and share. Okay. Let me do it by sequence. Let me put on the resume one by one. Okay. Eugene. Eugene, when did you register for the master class? Your email didn't tell me when. Reply to the original email. Tell me when did you register? What session? What time? Which session did you register? Okay. So September 12th. Okay. So I have, I think I got your resume. Cameron. So it is your furniture, product design, digital marketing specialist. I'm going to conduct an interview campaign. The language was wrong. Interview campaign is not called interview campaign because you mismatch with the marketing term. Voice customer interview. Contact the voice customer interview with so much users. Okay. And then developed paid ads, product vision and roadmap paid ads. Is it a go-to-market strategy? Paid ads is marketing. Ads doesn't have a vision. Is this a product or what? If it paid ads, you can say design the go-to-market strategy of your product. Well, small collaboration, team effort, design execute, online shopping experience, drives and increase amounts in orders. I don't like this word spearheaded, something. It should be, this sounds very consulting style. We don't like consulting style. We like directly what did you do, which is, for example, collaborate, I led a team of 40 experts, 40 engineers, designers, operations people to execute this online shopping experience. You should also just change voice customer interview. And if you have down product roadmap or create a strategy, product vision, you should write a separate bullet point about it. I don't think you understand the differences between product manager and product marketing. You're using your product marketing team, product management style of things we're looking for. So your word choice was incorrect. Okay, so now let's see what Tima was talking about. You kind of website and user insight and trend. So rewrite this one. Those need to be rewritten. For example, you have some experience, but it actually, the way you write it completely off. So e-commerce website from zero point, you can say develop and launch e-commerce website by integrating different things together. And and then do you work with engineers? If so, we should talk about by creating user stories and UI UX design feedback to designers and the engineering team using the agile methodology. The way you write it is, it's not right. Same thing as this one. Okay, product designer, conduct marketing, technical expert, to ensure product delivery on schedule, and she kind of also want to increase. This entire experience needs to be rewritten to make more comprehensive. So for example, if you're a designer, you can talk about conduct, create a UI UX design and mock up to seek customer feedback and continuously enhance your product. So the way you write your past experience is very off. Okay, so study how we write our, how we write it is in a different video. So this one, the keywords in one video, the how you write it is in a different training. This is how you write it. This is how you write about your past experience right here. So make sure wash both of those. When you register it will send you those links for you to re-study. Okay, cool. So now let me pick up the next one. Let me also see the chat. Lisa, yeah, Lisa, you can email me. Hi Nancy, can I ask you a question if I'm not interrupting? Yeah, go ahead. Yeah, I just kind of wanted to ask your advice on this as an undergraduate. How could I kind of include those keywords, especially when I don't have solid BM experience, as opposed to the others that have been. Oh, good question. That's why you create a portfolio. Okay, so what could that include, especially if I'm not working? We cover portfolio in tomorrow's masterclass. You don't even know what is part of portfolio and you need to learn the basics first. You must create a part of portfolio once you've been able to create it and you can talk about your experience on your resume. And you don't even understand what it's part of management should do. You also need to take part of management courses and realize, oh, this is voice-to-custom interview. I actually have done something similar. Oh, this is what they do in the agile methodology. I should be able to talk about it and only highlight the part that's relevant. You're missing two things. You didn't learn part of management and you didn't create a part of portfolio because there's no fake it until you make it. It's all like you're trying to do something. You literally need to do it first. Okay, so we cover more part of portfolio in tomorrow's masterclass. You can learn more over there. We also have free training regarding what is part of management to do on my YouTube channel. You can start learning for free as well. If you're interested in Chemics Theatre, get more advanced training. You can go to my website and learn more as well. Okay. Thank you. I think you're missing so much foundation stuff. Let me show you the free training of part of management. Go to my YouTube channel. You don't even know what do they do, what are the skills, what are the roles with responsibilities. We have a playlist of different skills people need to learn about part of management. And the more skills regarding part of management to do is all in different playlists. Check out all the training on my YouTube channel. We have like 300 different trainings. Wash those first. Okay. Thank you. You Jita, did you send me your resume? So let me let me read out those people's name. Okay. I don't see it. You Jita, I didn't see your resume. I saw your email saying thank you. But I don't know. Oh, that's in the attachment. I found it. Okay. So you Jita, you are here. Is this your roles responsibilities? Okay. First of all, when you break them into bullet points, really hard to read. And you only highlight your achievement. You didn't tell us how did you achieve those? And you the way you wrote your use cases, use cases good, research and also it's all weird. They rewrite this completely made into four sentences. Do not just dump the keywords use cases, use the research technical feasibilities. Do not dump your keywords here you need to describe what they mean. How do you prioritize part of requirements, right? So those should be independent lines, each bullet point, product development and management. You'll have roadmap, prioritizing features, the technical satisfaction to user mattress API. Okay. Cool. Guru is technical specific technical requirements should be requirements. Okay. And also the font different things is very hard to read in the change it. I really think this this is so hard to read. First of all, the way you organize account to make it very impossible for people to really focus on different sides and highlight different things is very distracting. For example, double work efficiency of this starts your impact. So what did you do? You make this, for example, strategic prioritization resources. This is not what we're looking for. Launcher prior has part of features and roadmap. And so you don't have this, you have sprint, but we want to see prior has features roadmap, which you don't have. And you highlight something random, that's different than what we have. And then it's really difficult to read. So it's not about what you put on your resume. It's more about how you organize it and make it more appealing to the resume reviewer. Right now it's extremely difficult to even hurt my eyes to see the font of size where you highlight your hurry around things and don't have what you're looking for. That's so weird. Okay. So yeah, feel free to go back and change it again. Okay. Let me pick up the next one. So let me do this. So that's one more. Alexander. Alexander. Let me see your resume. Let me review this right now. Okay. So share my screen right now. Product leaders and your director. Let me give a scan right now. Product manager, many, many years of experience, many years experience skills too. Okay. So you have so many years experience missing important stuff. If you have so many years experience, your senior director, you should talk about dry product roadmap, create product vision, product strategy. So this is a little bit collaborate with product defined vision or problem with this strategy. Where is the strategy? The strategy goes all the way to the top because I've already seen your director talk about strategy. Managing capital budget led a team of 20, 100, whatever number of people and higher lead and manage a team of how many people or mentors how many people, those are lacking for direct level. Execute high impact strategy. Execute strategy different from creating strategies. Okay. Joke or a roadmap. Create dynamic problem. This is fine. This is good. This is good. You should also delete whatever that's irrelevant. There's so much stuff without highlighting what I was looking for. Create training and craft documentation for stakeholder utilization. What does this mean? Do you mean exactly presentation? If so, you should talk about conducting exactly presentation. We don't need so many bullet points. We only need to highlight the parts I was looking for. Okay. There's so much stuff that's not relevant and not very well written. I also want to see more impact. If some of this is impact, you should put out front, put it like a line regarding achievement and then those responsibilities so they don't mix up those two and give me so many such long list of bullet points. We're not going to read all of those. You highlight whatever we're looking for for direct level. Okay. Put a manager and eBay. Okay. Incomplete. Create features and product from vision to launch of what kind of product of B2C eBay shopping product, whatever you should describe it, or create AI product. Is this list of product? You should plug in the list of product, name of product into those sentences directly. Execution, roadmap, test feature for payment, eBay, creating other stories which are as needed. The way you write it is also weird. Creating of those stories feature in JIRA as needed. No, you should write created the role part of requirement user stories and create and translate into engineering facing requirement and document in JIRA. How you write is also very weird. Okay. Same thing. Same thing as below. Give us so much without highlighting what the most important thing we're looking for. I suggest cut off something random and then highlight everything we were looking for. You have so many. The whole long, you have 20 bullet points. Get to the point faster. When I look for director jobs myself, I only have one page. I literally only have one page. But everything I put on my page is exactly what we're looking for for the new job. Less is more. Okay. Having more years of experience doesn't mean that you have advantage. To be frank, too many years of experience, people have age discrimination and you're in big trouble. Okay. So it's more about the quality. Okay. Quality is way more important. I think I finished all the resume review for people already registered for masterclass. If I missed you, please let me know. Someone email me saying, huh, huh, huh. Pervon. Pervon, would you please present me. Pervon, you doing your resume review, resume. Pervon, did you send me your resume? Pervon, you should, if alive with me, you should email me your resume to nancyadocnancy.com. I don't see your resume in the attachment of those emails, which is weird. Okay. And also, Pervon, my team should already send you invitation, join me live on Zoom if you already contact her. Okay. So, Alisa, I don't think you send me your resume. I didn't see it. Okay. Cool. Okay. For the ones, I, for the ones in my inbox and for people who are registered for masterclass, I already reviewed all of this. Interesting. I didn't see yours. Alisha, I don't think I hit my inbox. Maybe in the spam folder. I don't know. So email my team. Anybody you didn't get a chance to review your resume and you wash your masterclass, you need to email my team. Come here. You can directly email my team after today's session. She, she sent you Zoom link. Okay. And that's how you bring in, join the Zoom link, do your live resume review with me. Okay. For people who join me live, she'll already email me as well. Okay. It's right here, in 4 p.m. Excel everything's right here. Okay. So now, for people already finished your resume review, let's, congratulations. Let's get ready for your upcoming live masterclass with right here, docnancy.com slash masterclass. Okay. Or just go to my main website, docnancy.com. You can find all the information you need. And in the description of this YouTube live, LinkedIn live also have the link to my website as well. I should be able to find us very easily. Okay. Great. So, nice meeting all of you guys. We have weekly resume review anyway. If you registered for the masterclass, you didn't show up live. Feel free to contact my team. We're going to send you a Zoom link and double check your email because our team sent you the Zoom link before we start the session. Okay. Great. Cool. All right. 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