 Alright, I'm just gonna look at your reel quickly, which is really cool I'm gonna put down the volume just a tad so I can hear it But you probably know this all by heart. This is by the way, really neat I like how you immediately put up the software that you know I don't think I've ever seen this before not that I know if you're real, but I think it's pretty neat And I hope people understand what that all means So I remember seeing your first shot Bring this down even lower, which is really cool, and there's one part that I really really like This is all neat. This is all really cool Just to go through like quick things I'd be careful with stuff like that where you are very close to the actor's face here You're actually overlapping the mouth, which is already kind of a no-no, but you're also very close to his eye So I'd be careful about stuff like that That feels like his arm rotation. Sorry, I'm being an idiot here. There you go As that arm comes down and rotates, just how that wrist rotates down and stops feels just a bit mechanical Right there, and it also kind of goes with his head. I don't know if that's intentional, but it's kind of a It's just a bit too planned, I guess I do love the other guy, and what I love is that It's such a great moment. I'm a massive massive fan of head accents and head moves and stuff like that The volume is great. My only comment about this would be I don't know if you're moving him back on purpose because he thinks he's dying So he's kind of afraid of him or it feels like Time's over and it's I know it's kind of visual thing of dying and you're moving away from him It's it felt a bit odd. Um, I would actually do the opposite, but There's just something about this feeling a bit. It's just a bit odd that it takes to step back and Then watch out for some twin poses and timing like his arms going back at the same time and kind of resting and just Kind of swinging. It's a bit animaty, but it's cool though That stuff is neat. Um After all this though, and it's it's a tiny bit in here mostly in In uh, this guy, you know, I love that part. I think my overall feeling for real is that it's swimmy This guy's a bit better, but this feels just Like in terms of how much you have his arms drag here And the wavy motion And it's kind of slow You can see how those arms just kind of keep moving a bit and gives it kind of almost kind of an iK feel to it I don't know if those arms are iK, but they kind of look like it especially at the end here That arm goes back Shwoop right there That too. I mean it is slow motion, but it adds to that kind of swimmy Swimmy feel to it Same with this guy. There's some cool stuff though But I feel like there is there is a lot a lot of stuff moving all the time Or like the way he comes down here turns around and just Just that movement of this feels a bit even and I don't know. There's something Even here as you do your first push how that arm comes back the right arm Boop and then comes in. So it's just an overall feeling of Swimminess and floatiness like the way he puts The thing into his mouth here It's just all very soft Kind of an iK is an iK arm feels like again like wrists not moving while While the rest of the body is moving a lot That's all cool here Even that grabs a little bit slow movements here. It's just it's like an overall Overall thing though. These are cool Wonder kind of the head on the head could be a bit stronger And I wonder if that's kind of a headline thing where it feels like the head is very Moving a very horizontal line With not a lot of side-to-side tilt or rotation in the head Looks a bit locked love the shoulders there scapula stuff is great That's probably the biggest offender in terms of smooth wavy spliny stuff. That's mostly his arms Yeah, there's a lot of stuff going on there, which I get some leg pops Same thing here how that arm comes up here. Watch that guy Down whoop Not I mean it was the other harm, but see how that arm comes up here And then down it's very soft and swimmy same thing here overlapping stuff Love the set though love this here Same thing here. I mean, I guess it is part of the boards delivery of the line um And even though that as a standalone piece is cool on a lot of the tapping here, it is an overall feeling of Of slowness And again, this is not the fault of the clip and the clip by itself is is cool And you got the head turn here, which is neat too I think it's just as a whole when you then scrub through and you think about what have I seen there's just this overall feeling of Just swimminess and I wish there would be a bit more snappy stuff You know really hold your poses bigger accents to really drive home some points Um, but you know, you got great acting Get great body mechanics here It just becomes a bit swimmy and I like your the weight. I mean the weight is good See this watch this guy slow. It just takes a long time Even like the Suke's lift it doesn't really feel like it's tight to go to that Big pull there like it's better here and I like the movements that are tight to the body there So my thing would be you know watching you have a lot you got you got animals You got another weight assignments. I would probably take this guy out And do another one this guy's need to um I would say I would take this guy out this guy out Borderline keep this guy even though it is a bit swimmy Keep those guys take this guy out Keep that guy definitely keep that guy it would be neat though To add a little bit of a fix in there Um, so in terms of what you will concentrate on to me, it's almost Like keep doing what you're doing, but just practice, you know, it's not like I think the variety of your reel is great because you do have acting body mechanics weight and creature You know and even in your weight, there's a lot of pantomime in there So you're covering all that all the you know the checklist of things you should have on your reel Which is great. I think it would be cool to get Um, maybe dialogue wise kind of more emotional where you can push emotions but more subtle acting Definitely keep this guy though um since I'm hesitant in saying do another weight piece, but There could be something though that you could find where you combine things where it could be pantomime with a slight Little bit of audio dialogue when some guy running yelling So that you can somehow incorporate weight And since you've done this, I mean, I would love to see something that's always one of my things in reels is that Uh, you rarely see creatures. It's great to see this, but you also rarely see creatures applied to human acting So, you know, think all of ratatouille for instance So that could be neat You know where you can combine things where you might have, you know, what if you combine everything where you have a creature Walking doing its behavioral stuff that we know of animals that you can reference and then it goes into a more Uh, humanistic acting piece that might be a subtle sad acting thing, you know Something like that. Uh, I'm gonna cut this and maybe write the rest. So it's not a super super long clip All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you