 All right, let's take a look at this here. Thanks for all the notes. I think it's very cool I think the only thing that stuck out was this shop being a bit low in energy. I Think the hookup is cool But it's almost like she could turn Just a tad faster and get there a bit Obviously sooner then you could have you know that'll ease in and then shoot one more Sharp return in the wine of it up. So it's kind of like a turn back and then up and then realizing up that thing is right behind me And then it cuts to found And then maybe on that just a slight reaction on her She said it But I don't know depending on your story telling me Maybe don't want to really you know save this for later, but they could be something Just have a little bit of a reaction there, but I like how all that stuff is pointing towards her. That's pretty neat This is really cool. I mean, I like all of this. It's great. I Think the hookup is great. I like your camera move. I would just go I Feel like you want to be overall frame a bit higher. There's something about this almost feeling At times a bit too close to the top frame We get to this here. I don't know. It's a little thing Totally subjective, but I mean it is you know, it is coming pretty low here Maybe it's not that bad. That's my initial action and watch this first Maybe a bit bit lower And a bit less of a drop here. I felt like that going down especially when you look at the spacing Boom suddenly she shoots up. So that just felt suddenly really really harsh And then the turn was a bit fast. I would probably not go further than this And then on this shot Watch out the hookup is weird. She's leaning forward and we're leaning back Um Arm is back arms forward. So does the hookup is a bit weird So I would just not go as far which has a really really fast move right before the cut Excuse me. So I would just go maybe not put in this Start this shot with the head a bit more towards us And if there's anything you can do to make that hookup a bit more seamless It's all really really fast. So it's not like you massively notice it when you watch it for the first time But still maybe just something where you can just kind of cheat something when arm straight goes back You know, and maybe we are in a this type of pose arm wise You know, it almost feels like she you can cut into this later Get into this Like that the head is a bit more towards us maybe double cuts or You know, maybe just something here Imagine cuts here head a bit towards us boom and then by now she would have her head here Does not but that shot is cool. I love Arm stuff is cool. It's just a little bit moment here when you start hitting a very twin W pose We've offset that a bit more Yeah, it's cool like a little stuff in the legs steps Yeah, I just suddenly felt like that could have a little bit of more complexity towards the end And maybe on like I said on that On that, you know tightening up the shoulders arm was up a bit more just like a little slight change But let's get up to you. Now. Maybe you wanted to stay like that It's mostly about the foot and I mean, she knows what's coming and that's just kind of like, all right. I'm ready type of thing um But yeah That's about it. So I think overall huge progress. I like it. It'll pick you things on On shock ups, but other than that, I think it's super cool. Thank you All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you