 All right Let's take a look Whoa, whoa, like the root. I'm gonna go in a layered fashion there That's not too bad. My reaction to this is that I Know the chest goes towards us and the arm goes away from us But I wonder if doing this section where the upper body really feels stiff That's when the chest comes towards us and during This section you have a bit more involvement where the hand goes back the arm goes back the shoulder goes back which takes the chest back with it and Then you start to counter if that's That's all possible and then speaking of waiting to go back there again See through moments like here. I think I'm probably Flatten the palm so it's flatter to camera And especially mainly because it's it looks like it's IK I see a lot of arm movement and elbow movement But the wrist is kind of locked the fingers feel kind of locked. They don't really feel like they are On some and it's like the middle part of the palm is pushing the door and the rest of the fingers I'm not really reacting and then through here. It's again the same thing. It feels a bit too IK You see all that elbow movement there and then the wrist is kind of stuck It's better here just on the push Well happens after this, but I think you had it where you want to push out the fingers a bit more to get some compression in the fingers Look is cool. I think it's a tiny subtle thing I'm about the head turned through here all the way back there seems a bit even in timing and And you could potentially just give it some texture where he starts through here And then you through that has like a two-frame three-frame slowdown like really just subtle and then that way that part is just a bit Accelerated. I'm really talking subtle stuff Like you want like a crazy pause. It just feels a bit mechanic. He goes back and then comes back here excuse me Get a little bit more Texture in that your hand is cool like all that Feet are cool what he could put in when he goes over through here Excuse me. Let me see here. I don't know. I see a foot roll, but through this section here Don't forget to put a little bit of compression. So there's a little bit of a rotation Twist tilt somewhat there until until they lock that side pivoting Just to get some polish in there same thing on the other foot as I go through here. That's a big change So you want the same thing where you have a slight rotation Twisting over tilting over this way It's all a bit stiff Like here when the translate starts first you could almost have two three frames earlier a rotation in Y and then the foot comes over and The same thing here as you and maybe the last couple frames to so our slight rotation So it doesn't feel like it's a very clean Translate on off everything. Yeah, I think that Yeah, so picky picky picky things we're getting into polish because it's awesome as always any questions. Let me know. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up You can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome All right. Thank you