 All righty, let's check this out here. That's sound nice a question for you. Is that a repeat I Mean it sounds like it, but the weird thing is can you re-edit this so that the This is not in there It feels like someone's jogging and you all think I can In there it feels a bit distracting. I think that works fine with the sound from there on I think what you can do is before we get into the the other stuff is Everything feels the bit one axis. I want to stop up here and then just forward. I think you can do something where So when it goes up imagine a bit of a just a little bit of an arc in there with a little settle at the end What are you looking at? I could be up here. What are you looking at a bit of a Rotation in y as well since that's just up so it's imagine like you have a what are you looking at then and then and then You have a bit of a rhythm like this So it's what are you looking at it can also what are you looking at? You can always like simplify like this where you have a bit of up twirl and an at is a higher moment there So you know what are you looking at but it like it down and then up So that you have this which is that with a little bit of up You have to exhale again. I know that would be for me for the ends This is a good start. I think there's a bit of some hiccups in your forward translates whoop whoop whoop so watch out it feels like you have a bit of a Yeah, but if something going on like that in your graph out of the way You know if you go forward you have like a sudden dip sudden dip Versus a bit more of a linear translate forward. I will probably make that'll double-take a bit bigger And if you can I mean it's already super wide But if you can make those eyes even bigger scale up the eyeballs and because it's There's a lot of movement and this gets very tiny and we almost kind of miss it It's there if I look at the horse. It's there, but I wish I mean come like 15% bigger I know this is a tiny thing, but Just a bit more and I will probably cheat this cheat the head bit more and why so that you have a silhouette where the You know, it's a bit more like that. That's my horse Almost like a dog but instead of that nose part overlapping there. It's a bit more Frame here. Hold on trying to find No No, not really. So I mean the furthest you have is here Where is he almost the gap? But now if now this forms a tangent with the section with the neck here, right this in the neck So I would just cheat it so that this black line here is around here The neck is here. So you have negative space between the lower part of the head and the neck So also my question is so I was looking at this here. This really looks like Of course looking at us Breaking the fourth wall here feels almost a bit off to the left especially with this eye But this eye feels like it's looking at me, but then you address someone here off-screen So I'd be very careful in mixing this So you might have to do potentially Staying there maybe a bit more of a Softer line in the head that gives you almost a change like that. It's my horse I don't if you can Where it's almost looking this way. It's I know it's gonna be too big, but I'm just trying to find a way where Or you keep it like that and then might also be more comedic to have really the eyes the people in the corners here We're looking this way This is a bit clunky there. I feel like We can make this a bit stronger a when you go Like you have got you know that stop here and as the horse goes forward. Could you Like it goes up and Down like this like it feels very linear in its path I think I would I would just cheat this a bit more with maybe even like this or it goes Back Into out of the arc where you really stretch out that neck forward so that that black section is here So you really have an arc that then goes Down into that. I think we're spending a bit too much time here It gets a bit slow and it's struggling now if you're if you want to do this because the horse is awkward Then I would do see her because the thing is it's quite You know clean with its moves And even though it stumbles on its face there. It's still With all this feels fairly, you know aggressive and and in control if that makes sense I'm just asking if it are you trying to make this Look at it like it's clumsily trying to turn around Or do you know to do a roll and if so if that's what you're going for That to me it feels like you want to do It's a wider arc with the head go into this and it's almost like you want to It stills all very Fast and like silhouette wise lots of stuff happening with the tail and the legs and the hoofs there So to me it feels almost like you want to go And if you can bring out that shape a bit more so it's less like this but bigger turn So that you can Yeah, you have more room with the legs here It's basically the head legs here legs up here. So it's really clear distinction not so much overlap here But then I would do like one two Not that many just have like a few very clear Struggle, you know moves here and then I will go almost Compress the body into something like this where it gets Down and then out so imagine he goes through and then Try it again Just kind of push and stylize that element a bit more versus just that struggle struggle quick moves Pause and then go might as well go. Oh, this doesn't work work Into this And then you have that I think as you go back here You can have like a slight rotation here in a slight turn and and it's serious in the face. It's almost like Face is ready to go but it long and it's the patient in here and then probably so it's not just this shape Staying put apart from the tail. It's almost like you want to go And then it's almost like a push-off where then the butt is up here Up here and then down you might not enough frame. Do you have to add one frame? I'm starting to get away from this feels like a 2d car. It's the same pose It's almost like I'm looking at that arc for your pelvis and then What I said at the end Hope that makes sense lots of rambling. I'm trying to figure out the shot Let me know maybe you have some thoughts as well, and that's it. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you