 Alrighty, so let's check this out here So let me just check here The tricky thing is you have your I'm not sure if you If you address the iDart tips, I don't see any Jurassic iDarts as he darts through there, but not when he's actually looking so I'm not sure How much this is updated you have some good stuff on the finger, so it feels like it's an updated version Some changes there. I still don't really see anything in the shoulders So I'm not sure I mean you are writing that this is and you may change this to excuse me shot three But anything you you're fixing some part of shot one and two, so I'm not sure which parts So again like as you move up you got to move move that aspect of the shoulder up here And you have it later on I'm not sure I see a rotation overall. I don't see a change in the actual shoulder controller And there's still not much going on in here and here is where she feels still very stiff, so Sorry, I'm just seeing huge difference and then The confusion that I have here when we play this Is that it goes from this right? straight to this and the shot in between It's missing It's also a very very Interesting file to play like the the file freezes. I'm not sure what you sent again. This could be because of What's it called? That download link I mean it did show up eventually, but So if I'm imagining that she turns around looks to the right and then it cuts It feels like she's going to be exactly in the same spot, which might be a bit jarring You know, she looks over when it's almost like the room just warped into this So I'm not sure so I'm And now you let me know I know if that's the file that you wanted to send me so I Will leave it at that and see what you say. Maybe you can send me another file. All right. Thank you All right, so at first The new clip was the same. I just have to open it in quick time and then it worked There's some there's some weird pauses. It feels like this might be See how you have that white border Here it looks like Potentially you copy pasted multiple quick times together and save it and maybe you know the way that compresses That's some fun funky stuff there So it feels like that first one has the same problems. I was talking about with the shoulders and the fingers Well, let me just look at the excuse me at the cut so she opens this rams Cute closes it. Oh Hmm, it's a bit fast. It's not too bad. It just feels like it It is oh What's what's going on? It's a tricky cut because you know, you're really she's pretty much the same angle She just pops to the left. It's a tricky thing. It feels like It really feels like you want to cut to Her not being in the scene. I think what we could do you can try this It's basically the same animation, but you can just try it out. What I like about this here is that when you end Go back here. There you go. You are here Right. So my mouse is here and as we cut over the phone is in the same spot, which is cool. What I would do cut to this Say This is your framing. Maybe oh, maybe you can't tricky thing basically what I'm trying to do is You're closer you're in closer and And She used to be here in a phone is still here, but then what happens is that it's empty and Then she enters so imagine, you know, this was your framing But your phone is actually here, right? And then she enters and it's just bigger in frame and then grabs the phone So ends up being just a close-up. It's like it's not like we need to see all of this the shock could easily be That could easily be this close and I think then it could work I Would just Bring the camera closer or just putting in the lens a longer lens. I would just change the lens I don't know what your lens is here if that's a 40 or 50 you might have to bring it to a 70 or an 80 or something Which is better for close-ups anyway And then you only have the phone in frame on the right side here Just like the girl exit it so the audience's eyes here and then empty And then she enters ends up in this composition I think I would do that which eliminates some of this stuff, which was a bit stiff in the animation I think you can get away with a lot more We don't see any of this All right, let me know what you think All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want to get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you