 All right, let's zoom in here and watch the whole thing. There is no sound. All right Good to see that one again. It's been a while. So you're saying here I'm trying to make it look like she sees something tries to play it off and then pulls out the gun Yes, I mean to me it's more like She is she knows what's there and just plays it off as in okay. I'm leaving But I'm not really leaving and then it's shot. That's kind of impression that have versus She is she is moving and it happens to see something Oh, oh, and I want to go back to this like this to me is an intentional Look over So I'm not going to which in which direction you're you're leaning In to whatever the English of it Way is there what I would say This feels a little bit like there's a director off-screen and clearly off-screen They're always off-screen where he goes and action and then this happens mainly because it's besides that slight change This feels just a bit mirrored and default and then they start moving as Opposed to maybe cutting into something earlier or just having a different pose There's a different action like this subjectively as always the other thing is too is when She looks back like this. Just watch out what her eyes are doing. She has a clear look This way like slightly down, but then as she moves over and I should probably change Right when she does this now suddenly she looks down Then she has a big look up and then looks really down again And then finally looks there like this. This is the first to me intentional Look where she's doing something. All right. I'm deciding where where to look with this intention behind it Whereas the beginning again as she looks here She's kind of all over the place. I'm not sure how how to feel about that It's she feels more like a lifeless doll And now suddenly she's alive looking again This might be the intention but that's just to me how it reads and then she comes more alive where she has kind of like Hey, it pretends my everything is okay clean silhouettes That's all good Bit tricky to read a bunch of stuff, you know with big sleeves all that hair In terms of what's going on, but there's some good in-betweens and breakdowns and like that reads clearly Like to me everything is working fine You know, you haven't gotten to the hands yet So that just feels all default to me. It's the biggest thing It's just the beginning how she looks and what she does it feels Almost in a way overanimated in terms of that big drag and look down and then up but at the same time Not animated enough where she doesn't feel alive because just the eyes are just parented to the head and only here It's almost like you you would start here and that that to me works would work just as well If you're starting here up Hey, I'm leaving but I'm not really leaving and then this happens if that makes sense There's I don't know if you need all of this and I don't know what all of this means in the context of the whole shot Other than that, there's some fun stuff. Once you spline this out. It's gonna be interesting. It's a nice little pop feel Swooping so you might have to have you know another breakdown once you're done with this leg comes out just a bit more a bit of a moving hold and then come back down and then I think you can start getting into Ham poses And I don't know if you have Controllers it would be great if this sleeve would be you know dragging So it's just not this tube. I don't know if that rake has those controls, but or Scaled them down. I know this would change your character design, but it's just it's a bit It's a bit wonky with all the big shapes watch out for this You want to move that wrist forward and adjust the finger poses This feels too broken at that point there and that feels almost a bit too broken the fingers as well See here So you might have to scale the gun around a little bit or something You know scale this down so the finger can come up here and then you got Index there. This just feels really spread out there. Why does this mean I changed the timing there you go Yeah, I mean that's kind of that the rest is is clear My question to use more like what's your intention at the beginning Could we also just start here? Does it tell the same story just at the beginning to have that and then that's it? All right, thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you