 All righty, let's check this out. Let me just play through the whole thing There is no audio It's a new added excuse me beginning It's coughing season now. It's cold. It's cold It's cold where we are right Cool Super cool. Yeah, I really like that beginning that you added there This is super picky, but and I know this is in rough stage But you could probably delay the bowls. It's just a hand It's nicely the first thing that we see silhouette it and maybe change the coloring of both We don't think it's also part of the character since his skin tone is a bit similar And that way immediately we have this and you can even have in your polish a bit of a playfulness With the popcorn holding it because you are doing this which is awesome. I love this. I Think yeah, it is all very visible. I think at one point Maybe you should make the smaller lower it the difference, but same time I think as long as this Enters first. I think it makes it all very clear and do this. That's cool. And I like that. There's a very clear look of excuse me Looking at the TV then over and then the stop and then oh she did it again and I can absolutely Identify with this My wife has done the same and she is super cute when she sleeps Yeah, it's actually really great. I really like this. You got some New reframing. I think this is still a bit top-heavy if you look at you know a classic action safe type of framing I think you could either explore a stronger tilt up Which a danger is that that sudden aggressive camera move might take away from the Sensitive nature sensitive as in like, you know emotional Aspect of the shot. So you might have to explore just a different mechanics here She's already lowering himself and then maybe it would just be Again, it's totally up to you, but maybe pushing that aspect of Arms out hands up kind of like I gotta sneak in and be quiet, which will help you be a bit more Bent over so you don't have to do that crazy reframe. So to me ideally I Will bring those glasses down to here if you could lower it that character by this much And I think I would try with a post change versus the camera I think it might be too much because right now I like the somewhat looseness of the camera following the action I think it's it reframes it nicely. I mean except here, but it's just it's nice and loose Without drawing attention to itself and I'm concerned that this might be been too much if we suddenly tilt up too much In your email you're asking about this and that was my thought too that at this point. We're just covering the face too much You know it might be different pose with the fingers in and he just does it with just with his index you might just hold The side here. You might just do it with the other hand holding this side putting in And the thing is if you need the thing is That to me covers the face too much and there are ways to make it better like different finger poses or Hold like I said holding either side again changing arms potentially, but you could also technically Explore the idea of not doing this at all and using that time for more Emotion in the face right now. He gets down here. He has that This all works. This is all great Like all that works So maybe you want to just cut those frames out to go straight from this to you know a faster Transition from this to this so you don't need all this moment. It could just be something where I'm adding stuff that you don't don't do this But I'm saying he could come down and suddenly make a noise where she has a bit of a Kind of a readjustment and reshuffling and Then he stops a bit and then she goes back to sleep and that's when he does this You know, maybe there's a bit of a back and forth. So my question to you is do you need this? Do you need this adjustments? You can absolutely change the hand posing like I said to not cover the face as much Yeah, those are my thoughts there Maybe you want to use that moment for a bit more of a connection or you could do this where he gets closer And because he touches this it kind of disturbs her a bit She does a bit of a cute you know some cute acting with someone sleeping and then kind of readjusting Maybe you know, maybe it was more extreme where the tongue is maybe it's a bit more out and then Adjustments ending in this pose tongue was in a bit and that's the final pose there So maybe the head was you know slightly more profile towards us and that's how we end So, yeah, I think overall it's great I would just adjust my main thing is adjusting this down a bit other than that Love this beginning. It's great. I Love the ending and I just have lots of questions for you for this and slowly up to you and that's about it All right. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you