 okay let's check it out cool nice finger stuff if I be incredibly picky potentially the closing of this is maybe too smooth and they're all all the fingers kind of hit the same pose so wrong and I hit that you know so maybe offsetting maybe the index hits a bit later some duration and timing I'm slightly the impression was it was cool and then hmm that's a bit even just how they all move and potentially to even in timing where it's almost like a creepy guy vampire coming into the room but already so much better it's cool detail cool this is ever so slightly feeling a bit broken that wrist be careful it might help you to bring that elbow down a bit more so that wrist is a bit more lined and in that way you also don't have that foreshortening where when you don't see where the bend is either up or down and you squint your eyes for a silhouette test then you just see a short stump with a hand careful just through here there's a lot of elbow movement going this way but the wrist is locked in its orientation making this very very IK and probably if I would push this around here during this area it feels like this would be the biggest amount of pressure on the hand and the fingers pushing the door in so to me around here I would see a start of flattening of fingers because of the pressure point there that's cool though the ending school timing there just watch out you got some intersections and some detail work that I'm in piggy mode here feet are cool this you could probably push the orientation where the foot be just ever so slightly more tilt this way up this way so that on impact it's a bit more offset and then just over two three frames it flattens just during whoops during that section through here just there it feels a bit too like there's not enough going on where it's almost sort of an IK foot the same rotation values there like I said super peaky peaky peaky it's cool though and you're asking about performance and things keep practicing hold on alright so performance wise you know potentially through here I don't sure how far it seems like his eyebrows are pretty contained for such prominent ones could easily do all this that's so cool like the blink there and then here as he's trying maybe then he could raise his eyebrows a little bit of a change and then come back into that concern because nice bit more in his headspace of okay I'm in here and well it's there and then potentially just through the section because this seems like a bigger change mentally and they're like something's going on in there so another brow change could work here to kind of mimic not mimic just kind of reflect that change there then so by now it could probably change it again because now it's a bit different where okay hold on to this and be quiet and look for things it's cool if I'd be 5000% picky I would say not that much raising of the foot if it's to me like short steps they're almost flat but that would look weird in CG so it's almost a bit more toe down first I don't sense where but like the foot that goes up and then flattens that to me is always a big step and something small the foot that's on the ground kind of gets up and kind of drags the whole foot so it's not really a step just kind of an adjustment I mean I know it is a step but it's not like a walk step I don't know if that makes any sense but and that's why it feels like you'll be almost toe first again super picky this feels like you're doing almost like a mini step again just in terms of foot orientation this one is a bigger step so I can kind of get it there and this one's cool although probably minimize that one a little bit that's great there but you could argue that he might just get there and get toe and ball first and then as it goes down you kind of pivot the backside over giving off of the front part again 5,000% picky this is ridiculous but just something to think about and now the picky thing totally distracted not looking at performance this elbow goes in right there it's a bit of a it's a bit slower than a pop but it still has a bit of a like click there watch out for that this is a tricky one it has never so slight hint of floatiness I will potentially try the root the up and down your T why on the route just when it gets down I know how it is for you how smooth it is potentially break those tangents and just give it like 15% break so it's you know if you would zoom into this it would look like this but they will in a grand scheme would never stop the route that abruptly but really just a massive hint of a sharper impact on the route just a bit it hasn't ever so slight floaty feel performance myself like all this was to me that's more the mechanics part but I like that the slowdown performance of this how you slow down and over looks around that works all really well now the end who I like this I like that pause see it not a lot of people do things where you can't see the head and it's just body language I'm massively generalizing but I think this is cool because now you're just playing with timing and the timing means hesitation or thought this is cool big fan of this so picky things as you move forward it's contact points and it's mechanic stuff all these things but in terms of deposit is great I still wish this was a bit more uneven I still feel like this is just in one axis back maybe like favoring mamba cheek or slight rotation in why globally just give a bit of a change that just feels a bit simple so it feels like that's an awesome performance thing waiting but then the mechanics of this to me are almost distractingly simple this sounds super harsh but there's there was so much good stuff here that feels like now suddenly it's a bit too simplified ooh but I like this I think performance is great you could almost shave out two frames out of this race two or three to give a bit of a thinking thinking and then just a bit and not like a host there but just a hint again I'm talking extremely subtle just a little bit of a fast and move just a little bit there's ever so slightly even during that last part so just there's a little bit of acceleration through this section just a tiny bit and then you ease into it that blink might be just a tad too slow especially the up here I know there's something that's a bit too soft and slow and I will probably cheat your pupil this one a bit over this way actually I don't know how that work so I know if you have a big I box and you got separate I boxes here so we just move one out just fills at this point he gets cross-eyed just for couple frames there might also help here to see the pupil a bit more but I love the timing there there's some good hesitation in the fingers they're just a bit slow the gets it gets a bit swimmy and on the watery fingers are usually move that slowly even if it's a cartoony thing you want to get a little bit more there's you know that this muscles everything tenants it fires pretty quickly so when you start getting so slow and that's like super evil alien type of movement that's cool that's maybe a bit much at the end that adjustment it's cool to see though it's just a slight thing of kind of a pivot kind of a sticky point through there where I feel like if I go through this here it was like this part is almost not moving there's some movement but it feels like this move this moves goes down and there's a weird pivot I want I know if it's a pivot but just seems like it sticks right there and you got some intersections as well but performance wise I like this you could potentially play with what's the word I can say lip smack it's not a lip smack it's kind of it's a compression of the lips so if I bring in my tired face here so it could be something where he looks down and goes this is the moment of more open mouth closing compression on the lips and then opening again just for some changes take my face out of here so that could be something just to add to the performance so like the detail in here it just seems then mouth wise it's just shape wise on the lips it's a bit simple and potentially since I like this so much here that'll pause there it's so great what if once you get into this you could almost hold this for a moment and then do a potential little inhale shoulders up and then long exhale like as if you found peace so after all this ordeal you could show in his performance that okay okay I'm ready and now he can relax you know he can pray you can you can think about things and that could be cool it's almost like you're getting there now we cut out but yeah that's it thank you all right there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome all right thank you