 watch this here cool actually let me bring my face to the left now I receive these back-to-back and it's going to be the same comment in terms of presentation it's not too bad seeing it from this angle given that we have multiple different balls here but what I would do is I would still have an orthographic side and then present these like one by one you just go one and then the next one and the next one is it's fun to see them all together but in terms of being able to critique them I would prefer to have these all separately and you can do one long clip where the first one comes in you know cut out second one comes in third on blah blah blah blah that's no problem and looking at what they are doing a bit of an evenness and a bit of a slowdown almost in there towards the end here on the bowling ball and it feels like there's a slight curve out this way so watch out for that I really want to make sure that this everything has a bit of an arc and it really accelerates because it's super heavy and then you got like one and a tiny bounce at the end and you got your potential going a bit higher that first one but it's not too shabby but I will probably go a bit lower and a half of that on the second one because you're only having a one frame up one frame down it will feel very poppy it's not super bad I think it's it's almost there but I would reduce the height first one by 20% and the second one by like 10-15 I don't know this is extremely picky but so you have that not that strobie effect and it comes to a very sudden stop you might have to reduce the overall transit forward so it just doesn't roll as strongly but if you keep that speed right now it would have to roll just a bit longer and come to a stop this one for all of them since all of them for the one that have textures you're gonna have to introduce the roll or just turn the textures off if you want same thing with this I was talked before the stretch will have to go towards the point of impact or from where it came from stretching this way stretching more this way but there's something again this might just be the angle but there's ever so slight feeling of of the distance increasing but it might just be the angle it's mainly through here compared to the rest but same thing as before the impacts are a bit too strobie too fast so I would lessen the height and maybe give them a frame or two more just a bit more that's it and you don't have that don't you know and strobe now this one and the basketball are fairly similar I mean I would love to hear from you what you're looking for like all of these they're kind of the same rail in terms of how balls are now I do I mean I'm sure how much different they are from the bounciness probably I don't know I mean I'm gonna confess complete ignorance the bounciness between a soccer ball and a basketball I would feel like this would be bouncier than a ball and a basket then a soccer ball also soccer ball is not smaller than a basketball it's a little bit and I'm not quite sure what this is just any other types at a volleyball the main thing is that this one just feels a bit slow in its drop they're gonna to me they're gonna be fairly similar it's interesting to see them with such a delay because the bounciness on that the middle one feels as the same strobin is towards the end feels fairly similar than the other ones but at the very beginning there's quite a drag where this feels too slow the middle one the soccer ball is a bit better I kind of prefer the basketball the most it's interesting that slight differences but I don't mind them being slightly different but I'll just watch out that on the drop they don't feel slow and draggy and then what's up for the strobin is on the on the last ones this being a beach ball it's going to be much slower it's going to be the last one that bounces around and right now it has a bit too much of a squash and and the stretch it's just it's such a light air-filled ball that it's going to have a slight squash it's but it's going to be much lighter this is a kind of a mix between a beach ball and in the basketball almost you mean like where you have the size and weight of it but then we want it to be much much lighter so really push that a bit more the strobin is on on the I would assume it's a tennis ball it's not as bad as much better but there's still enough energy there to have one more tiny bounce at the end and I think you are just a bit too fast or too high basically you can take the the height of all of the tennis balls and go down 20% and I think your speed will be better because you are fairly strong in your squash and stretch at the heights of this but it feels the most cartoony which is cute like there's a certain energy to the little balls but then again I mean my question is like how how accurate you wanted this to be like you want this to be really let's just go for physics and I know you're pushing the squash and stretch so it kind of be on the physics there but I would still push this to be a bit more really in terms of a beach ball air where a big airfield filled ball and I think the thing that sometimes happens with bouncing balls is that like for this and I know we're running kind of out of space but you could start further back where the there's a lot of up and down but the forward momentum is too small where you know I mean not to say I can drop from really high up and do this but there's something about this in terms of the energy and the force of the up and down where I feel like we just want to go further back and have just a bit more forward momentum but I mean I understand that you want to keep this within this section but feel free to start a bit further back and then really give this enough room this one is really enough a lot more time which out for the ball that this isn't just a properly stop you know even if you look at these they're kind of coming to an end pretty much at the same time despite such a difference at the beginning and that offset and then the weight of it so just kind of watch out for details like that and then you want to start with the rotations as well since you do have textures there alrighty and for the next one I would love a side view we can always have that somewhere in the corner and then you can have a side view one by one if you want totally up to you let's email we can discuss things how you prefer this how you prefer to learn and all that alright that's it from me thank you alright there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome alright thank you