 All right, let's check this out here So I see in your emails rough pass timing issues just trying to knock down the key poses and not Polish enough and coming out of the sit pose. Yep. See that With sound all right, I'm gonna sound off just for now I think this is all a good start if I watch this As you continue forward, I would just watch out a couple of pops As you go through here a little bit linear key popping out into this there's some moments The knees as well that feel a bit wiggly it could give it stabilized all comes out of the roots. I Like your pause. I Like that moment there and the sit down timing is cool I think that feels all very very good. Be careful how much the root is going back and then forward This is a Picky note, but it has a bit of a boop. I would say a pop. It's slower than a pop a bit of a wiggle I'll probably go here and then if it goes back instead of going this way The root comes up this way not straight up a tiny bit to the back just a Little bit was he is going back here. So there's the weight shift You're going backwards a bit versus going forward and left and then you can work on the On your next pass just how how does arms and the hands go on to the legs? So like your attitude here a bit of character stuff here So I would just add that here. So it doesn't just feel a to be So I would just go all the way and just add a little bit in there Careful also as you continue like it's a linear key Moving down here, but also watch out. I know this is just rough. I'm just mentioning I'm seeing Some delay a drag or whatever attitude you want to have in the head. I'm also leads Just some sort of movement. So it's not just one unit one big piece that goes down And then continue here Like you said, it's not done yet. So whatever attitude you want to have here. That's cool The only thing I would say is if you go Are you gonna push? You're gonna have a thing where maybe the legs come out and then kind of Go this way staying on the ground pushing him back because of some frustrated reason If I look at this it would maybe roll till here. It's just an interesting wide Like a long distance to roll For someone that's not coming from here kind of plopping, you know with a lot more momentum backwards That's the bigger thing that I will question here, but I do like your rotation It's good that it started all in one axis The only other thing I would say is at this point either have him bent over this way or the root My awesome drawings a bit further down. So more screen left I mean if there's a slight off-balance feel to it Even as he gets to here it just feels too far backs either leaning or forward or the roots being a bit more screen left to A more balanced pose there just feels like he would already falling back onto the chair But yeah other than that that whole section here the Plop the pause and the plop is cool So child as your head goes back Right here, right? Everything goes back. Boom. You just hit Seems like another linear key Because your arms just look continuing. It's not like all of the animation stops Here it is continues so watch out that you overshoot come back of it Just loosen up all that stuff, but I know this is rough past like you said again. I'm just mentioning what I'm seeing good stuff on the chair as You continue. I see you got some detail on the wheels, which is cool Now you can follow through with that and then as it rolls back The wheels will turn that direction because it's going through the right That's about it It's all cool stuff And yes, you know you're saying here I was going to end the shot with the emotion frustrated totally fine I love it anything that you want to do in terms of adding character is to be fine with me. I Think that is about it. All right. Thank you All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you