 All right, that's better than full first. There is music not really sound, but there is music playing That is the shot bring down the music a little bit and you are saying here You are probably going to add some drones to this. I do like this Definitely cool stuff would be kind of fun to have little drones coming in there. I like it I will probably say There's a little bit of a feeling of an action and then go I will probably cut in around For me, this is frame three or four for something that starts a frame one So it starts a bit more on action and then The main thing I'm seeing here Just a lot of leg pops A bit of a slow timing there and it's some repetition there It's cool though, but again all very subjective So watch out. There are some moments where your Leg kind of overextends and then pops into a bend So if you go through legs, there's just some moments Or it's just a bit especially this one is the big one where the ik foot either bring in a foot roll Or change the weight shift so that it doesn't overextend like that Or you have moments like this knee goes back Pam and it goes forward a lot of harsh hits Same thing here. You can see How the knee is popping in this one These are just technical cleanups basically The other thing was on you know, there's some tiny dust off like as you put your hand down It would be flat fingers and not curl here. So just a little detail Work on that. I think in terms of This feels a bit odd in terms of how it stops. There's so much forward momentum and roll And then once the character gets to this it just kind of stops And to me it feels like at that speed with that roll There would be And that step would be up to here With potentially another step with the other leg so that the character might potentially end up here So you really feel that For momentum down there will continue here Probably go up to around here with a leg that's here to stop that whole for momentum. So that to me is the bigger change there Then watch out. There's also some issues where this arm is kind of goes left right left right left right Some of that stuff same thing here. I don't know if it's just because it's That chest is moving where everything's kind of Moving and stopping at the same time, but then also seeing Then the bends it looks like potentially an ik arm Just because of this here how it just moves straight without without an arc while the body is moving there And it seems like where here you leave your ik control behind and that's why this this arm over extends both of these Feels a bit odd. So just overall timing and spacing Mostly spacing there and then for this jump I think it's not enough anticipation. It's such a small Move down to go so far back with so much energy and watch out some pop star in disney as well But I would go lower near in your squash. You can go Down anticipation squash maybe bend over arms forward and then the arm swing back Into something so it's not trailing so much, but the arm swinging back help with that turn And then it gets a bit repetitive where that arm is here And then goes straight over there. So watch out your arcs, but positionally it goes back to here And then kind of goes over there and then back to here and then back to here And Then it rests there, but then again, you can see kind of the ik arm When you have chest movement, but the arms don't really that that moment is pinned there that that area So I would say watch out animation has to minimize how this works Same thing here technically, but then quote-unquote acting for the robot here I would do something where it could land And then you might turn around Pivot off of one leg turn around and then take a step over this will also all depend You know what's put in the drones and where it has to look so just keep that in mind that I will tweak this So it's not so it's almost like Saturday night fever that some dancing thing where it's constantly going back and forth So I think free up this leg. This seems like once it lands there It's like it doesn't want to move anymore So give it another 180 a bit more freedom to roam around there All right, well that's kind of that. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you