 All righty, there is sound here. Let's watch this in full first Looking at this let me just quickly check something You have movement through here. It's for the biggest. I feel like we can Reframe and actually it will be a bit more I like that so she's a bit more in the third somewhere maybe around here in my awesome scribbles Something like that because if you go through she doesn't really break from that box Although I do have comments about that so to me I would kind of maybe reframe a bit closer just because so we can see the awesomeness There's so much negative space. I don't think we quite need but the other thing is I had created a website with as many problems I kill myself That woman here I like that she has that reaction Right after questions goods and immediate thing where she listens. Yeah, I have a lot of questions number one How dare you? Now so the only thing will be is that she is constantly in that box And I think the biggest thing and now this is will be very Destructive note in terms of you reworking this but I do want to throw that out there Now what if I had created a website with as many problems. I'd kill myself If I had created her and she is It's okay straight up there because she is typing if I had created a Which I think that I is a bit much in how much he opens him out there I had created a website with as many problems. I think that is great. I'd kill myself Do you have a question Kelly? Maybe the moment will be for here. Yeah, I have a lot of questions when she does that even on this She would already start to kind of Lean over to have a bigger attitude Questions number one. How dare you? I know I'm thinking out loud. It's not very exciting to watch but I'm thinking is there anything Because there has so many good moments here with this That and then getting into this and I'm wondering if there's anything we can do to spice up that ending That's basically the summary Of my thoughts right now. I have a lot of questions number one Because I do like that a lot, but then then it kind of gets into Acting out words. I know she says number one and she wants to count But that doesn't just feel like she says how dare you right, but it's the movement is towards us Either I would go even further into something or How dare you you know where she's like She looks away and she's kind of annoyed. I know I feel like there's something at the end That I was gonna say that we can push we as a new Since I'm not doing anything But that's that's the biggest note here. I know you're asking for polish stuff But this would be something I wanted to throw out there What your thoughts are on potentially changing the ending if I had created a website with If I had created a website with this money if I had created a website with It's nice to have a little bit of right through there. She really comes to full stop And I'll give this a bit more of a moving hold right through when that Move dies just a bit. There's a little bit to the left. I would put just a bit stronger up into the left And I'd be stronger meaning like five ten percent really tiny if I had created a web Just has a slight feel of locking created a website with as many problems. I do love the rhythm Her going up there. If I had created a website with as many problems, I'd kill myself I'd kill myself Do you have a question? Problems I'd kill myself Watch out this moment Feels a bit strange if I'm looking just at this section It just kind of travels and translates over it feels like here's a controller And you translate that over where it's not A rotation It feels just really Broken through there Tell myself Do you have a question? I do love this The change here you got your hand pose changing into that and then relaxing a bit and changing that for polish. It's great I think if all for this we can go even a bit lower again just a couple pixels Where it would just give her it's a fine line between picked up between sleepy And annoyed, but I think we can go just a bit lower on those lids Do you have a question Kelly? Yeah, I have a lot of Question Kelly? Yeah, I will Okay, I love that a little over there. It's just a bit. Yeah, I have a lot of questions Same thing here. It's got the beginning It feels like you're Moving over that and it comes to a fairly quick stop not that it's completely frozen this time But I would just have a little bit more with two frames a bit of a soft ease in As you go down here, we can almost do something like that Not super super archy, but just a bit more. Yeah, I have a lot of questions Yeah, I have a lot of questions. Number Again, lots of great stuff here Yeah, I don't know I think to me this is is looking really good as I'm getting there. It just feels like the quality of all of this The looks here And it's the body movement. I even like this here. That's like twists and the wrist. It just starts Here's the bummer. I don't to me feels like that could just be stronger And a potentially different ending so I'm gonna leave it at that instead of rambling I think this is all working really well. You have really Nice polish and details. How dare you if you keep this and how dare you Then I would the only thing I would say Is locking As much as I talk about softening the holds here, I would I would hold it stronger and have less of a recovery here How dare you? Because if she's that she's not super upset, but so she says how dare you I will keep her body a bit more tense And that relaxation here as she goes back with that whole head move, especially the shoulders Kind of softens that I would I would tighten that up a bit Yeah here too where It's good that you have that arc there But watch out it comes again to a bit of a hard stop, but you're moving also straight away from camera Which gives it a bit of a weird ik translate back, but also doesn't finish that arc So if you keep this then I would just give it a little bit of an overshoot there Into a nice arc, but I did not go back as much again. I would tighten that up a bit for tension If I had created a website with this many problems, I'd kill myself. Do you have a question Kelly? Yeah, I have a lot of questions Number one, how dare you yeah going through I don't I'm gonna stop rambling and you watching me Silently watching here. So this is great. Um, just thoughts. Let me know you can email But the ending if you want to keep going or change it brainstorm some stuff, but that is that all right. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you