 All righty, let's watch this info first this sound But accepting help is its own kind of strength Cool cool cool. I turn off the sound here. You have a couple caveats here in email You work in IK so they need to be like a pass Yeah, like here It's stuck, but you know that and you mentioned that And you feel like it's kind of stiff or too flat and smoothed out It's pretty cool though. I like it I'll be careful when you have something like that when a character goes forward and starts to ease in where we have a little tangent right there on that nose But then makes me think about That where you could have Yeah, I was just thinking that could there be a progression where there is distance here. Oh And she says that you don't go as far but you close the gap a bit And then when he gets up, then we are here I'm just wondering if he can play a bit more in terms of body distance But that it's not like there's anything wrong with this. This would just be a different version There's always a difference between actual notes and like well, let's do this and it just makes it different because again, there's a lot that I already like The animation is ready in a good spot all the thing I would I would change stuff like that where it just feels like such a soft nose It almost kind of distracts a bit from the seriousness of the clip It's almost like you go bomb that nose But there's a good change, you know in contrast and posture. I Like that she puts her arm around him and then they get closer here And I like that he looks up at the end there and There's a good separation of he looks we look at her. She has that expression. I look back at him He has that That change there. It could just be maybe a Slightly bigger and with maybe a slight head rotation over again There's something for me where and you do it like if you look at this, right? You have this and then you have that in terms of how the gap is changing and With that smile it could also also be a little bit of rotation in the head over So we're closing that gap even a bit more. I'm not sure if you need that many Solver reactions. It could just be something where it's He's like that with his ginormous hands and has one sob like that and Then it's more smaller tremors Going forward. I'm not sure you need those that old big one Those two right bump bump without the sounds Unless you can find some sound and add that to it One thing you can also play with is potentially this is going to break things But you also mentioned email that you're okay with letting go of keys, but They could be something where you could have the knees closer together. He's more closed off and as it As it continues even with like some changes, especially doing this This is slight. There's a big change in there in terms of posture and all the movement And it could be interesting that during that time imagine these are a bit closer together He opens them up. So like he just visually opens himself up to to her feedback And then when he goes back down, it's almost like, I don't know like he's like, oh Yeah, what I don't know about this and then his knees go back closer together I mean you want to avoid like massive in and out in and out But that's potentially something you can play with and then when she does that that push over here Then that knee comes closer to her this knee will go out a little bit You have that That could be one way You could even experiment with having her arm Down like lower. It could already be behind him, but it could be There and then when she does that that's when she brings it up. Although I do like this She's already comforting him again. I'm just throwing out different versions. Like to me. There's nothing massively wrong with this is really kind of depends How far you want to go and how how big you are In favor of changes. I mean you're mentioning that you're okay with all kind of changes, but Like are you open to things where are they or is he seated? But she is not she just finishes where you know, she is just Like that. There's about to sit down Arm down and then sits down into this Like maybe they were you know, maybe she was observing standing and She realizes oh, he's he's about to break down and that's during this moment and then she sits down So you have that that sob then she finishes the sitting And that could almost lead into this like she finishes her sitting While she starts that line and that's where she ends up and that's why he has that big look of hey You sat next to me and then she does that. I mean that could be interesting too You can almost experiment with a slight a camera adjustment where she sits down and the camera kind of falls a little bit again I mean there are many many ways to make it Different and that's the thing. It's not like Like you have to do that, right? These are just suggestions that make it different That's kind of like my current fault on this What accepting help is its own kind of strength Because I think after that her energy not being too high works with her tone of voice Accepting help is it's own kind of strength and you can experiment with that. She with the end here Where instead of her just smiling she could as he looks up again get herself closer Just kind of bridging that gap a bit more and then so that they end up, you know, maybe this close But when I leave it at that I feel like so let me know what you think about this Because I'm not really concerned about your animation skills. There's a lot of cool stuff for it It's a nice, you know, they're nice poses. They're nice hand poses. The facial stuff is already there like this There's nothing where I go like oh, okay, okay This is also your first submission where I feel like okay, but you need to work on pops and arcs and I don't think there's anything technically Wrong where I'm not I'm not concerned. You already have nice details here You know stuff like that for me. It's more like an exploration of ideas So I'm gonna leave it at that and then you let me know what you think about those ideas And how far you want to go with things without you change things or leave it after hearing all this where you go You know what? I'm just gonna leave it to where it is and just finish and polish it Which is also fine. So let me know what your thoughts are on all of that. All right. 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