 Alrighty, let's play this whole thing because I love Interesting, let's see. I like it, but I have questions the funny thing is At first I was thinking don't do that in terms of the the back neck scratch because it's a very common thing to do but then But then she says that so it's actually Actually, okay. I mean you could potentially do a different Thing just because it is so common just like that one arm down and then the other arm is you know scratching that side But I'm not there's some nice contrast And I'm not totally against it now My questions are There's something interesting where he's already Pretty concerned. Uh, just got to work on your eye line But he has that concerned look Already has that reaction It's it definitely feels like a shot out of a sequence Where I feel like something happened before and he's still reacting to that hence that first move And then she says that It's kind of neat that she says it on the podium to an audience maybe she had a speech before and now she just Thinks about her, you know her own situation and says it out loud in front of people hence being embarrassing But then she goes back and says it again to make sure Everybody hears it which is a bit weird again. This is very subjective But these are my my strange thoughts on this I'm wondering and I hate to do this again because it did already that previous shot where I was just Coming up with other ideas, but I would love I would love for uh for you to send me a Uh some more reasoning Or just your thoughts behind it because I don't want to destroy this because I think it's a cool idea I'm just curious what your thoughts are and what your um thought process in terms of why is your acting like this And then she why is she saying it in front of the public? You know, uh audience there and why does she get back to it? because it's almost like she She has the head forward and does her speech That's an awesome drawing man, right? As if she was saying something right? She she has a speech. She's leaning forward And then she stopped she stopped the speech because suddenly now she she speaks out loud about her thoughts and feelings And that's what happened in the previous shot and that's why he's looking like this Because wait, why are you stopping the speech? And I think that it's it's okay for her to go I'm just thinking out loud if it's if there was a previous shot for her to go back and realize wait I actually love you and that's why She does that assuming that that person is in the audience And then she goes that Then the guy is so mad here and takes Over I don't know. I'm curious to hear your thought process on this overall. I mean I get I like it Because I'm loving and I know he looks over there. So he must be looking at the same person that she loves And she tells him again Yeah, I don't know. Um Thoughts, but I like it This is a very strange critique Because my initial thought was oh wait, what if we change this where She actually loves him And she just did a speech or something and then stopped and goes back and she turns around was I love you and then But looks at him And then it becomes all about them and their connection and it happens to have The mic there And she would react when she would tell that to him and then look over realized. Oh wait, there's a mic Everybody can hear this and then she goes away And then she she actually goes like that towards him and then they hold hands Which is wholly different shot totally different shot. Don't do it So looking at this, let's say I like everything right which I do I just be careful with having him move Because then it takes the focus. I want to look at him And then I'm suddenly looking here and I might have missed that beginning So my question to you is why is your reacting early? And do we need it? Can it just be less of a move and just blinks and maybe a frown So there's still an action, but it there's not so much body movement that As an audience I'm looking here and I'm looking here at the same time. They're not overlapping He's doing it and then she's doing it. So there's there's a good back and forth So I have mostly more questions than feedback I think that's cool. I like your thought That works as well. You got maybe that hand could be a bit lower so that the tip is not right there I'm very picky here But you're gonna have nice color silhouettes because of the shirt and the skin coloring different And it's cute. I like the the you know the changes in terms of posture where it's like that It was straight. It was forward. There's a lot of You know silhouette changes which is great. It's great contrast The only thing is maybe this so if I had to give you two actual comments on this Curious if we need all of this movement with him at the beginning that might still focus away from her and potentially a different acting choice Um for the itchy part and it could be something and on their face a chin or somewhere else And not that just because it is a bit of a common move And then be careful again here when I feel so itchy like I want to look at her because she says it and she does that but just be mindful that That's a big move again, and I'm going to look at him So if you're okay with missing that reaction or that last moment here because of him stealing the focus Then that's okay I don't quite mind, but I think you could potentially delay just a bit so that he starts it right when she says itchy Because we still hear it the mind, you know, we just we still get the gestures We still hear itchy And then when he moves we still have itchy in our head, but we're ready to look over So potentially just to lay down a couple frames And then that happens all right so potentially slightly confusing Feedback again just to recap my main notes You might want to reduce this move You might want to find a different acting choice for this and delay this moment. These are I think probably the more clear pieces of suggestion Or just piece of advice or just suggestions in general Other than that, uh, my questions to you are Why is it reacting like this? What happened before? Can we use that history to inform? Uh, different acting choices to do something else Uh, or you want to keep everything the way it is just you know, give me some background on some history That would be awesome other than that that is it. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way the like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you