 Alrighty, so I am finally checking this out first. I got a couple questions This is how I'm getting the scene. So is that is that where it's supposed to be cut off because it adds that black bar? And she feels ever so slightly stretched out this way. So I'm not quite sure if anything got cropped I'm supposed to see You know in and the movie is pretty small you can make it a bit bigger. I would say if we look at Would say is it inspector? It's 480 by 270 you can easily make this 800 by 600, you know like some of the bigger for details and stuff Other than that Let me bring that back You let's watch it one more through come on with time through here You were champion and you do what you expect. So the first impression that I had you were champion She says all this is that her eye line is Is looking at his forehead or higher? So that's one thing where she doesn't quite feel connected to the guy You were champion and you do what you expected to do You were champion My biggest thing in all this and it's usually with lip sync is that and there's something where The jaw is moving and saying things right dog was up and down and it doesn't really affect the head It always feels like the head is doing the body animation and the lip sync is kind of a copy paste onto it without really affecting the rest so in your case if you look at this and I'm just gonna Make this a tad bigger looking at her You were champion it's Champion see how it's you got that down and then the rest of this and doing all of this here The head is just kind of moving forward and it seems like there's a head of line like a IK head almost and I think when she goes champion on Pian like champion like it can have a little bit of a tilt sideways and a bit of a tilt out I will it'll dip as a little accent for that word You were champion and you do what you expected to do anything here expected to do you know it has that kind of smooth move here Without really being Yeah, you know effect again. It's just it's the main thing is the jaw affecting the head and having some of the words be a bit more Pronouns and with accents to the head and again here. I'm not I really don't know what she's looking at at this point And you do what you expected to do and you do but I and everybody else thought you should do that's fantastic See how here don't thought you should do Should do I have you you have those little things that's just fantastic Thought you should do and you want to tell me that those fights weren't real that you and then same thing here on real You can have real bit of a tilt sideways Maybe on a bit down real or maybe like a down up a bit of arc when you track the nose Because if I scroll through this you can see how the rotation of the head from here on is pretty much the same So be careful that it doesn't look like an IK head and that you do have Some rotation in there and again being part having the audio be part of the head accents This seems a bit See the action that you have here the else thought you should do great little sharp Moment here. That's really cool Now on this one you could It's all also very one axis again where there are no sideways tilts or something in why where she goes So on thought it feels like you're just moving it forward one axis in the head forward and the And the nose could do a little bit of a or the head could do a bit of a why rotation like that So thought thought like a little bit of a out and back in just to have a bit more complexity in rotations But anyway that action and intensity is kind of missing here You know, it's I don't I don't believe it and it feels like not that it's an even rotation But it feels like she just turns are too early almost Where it's almost like I don't and she's still looking at him head raised nose up still trying to look at him and Believe it. They don't believe it. She does that big turn You were champion and you did what you were expected to do and you did what I'm everybody Let's go Anyway, but that's kind of That is kind of what I have for the head here. It's very really good You were champion and you do what you expected to do and you do what I'm everybody careful movements like this You watch her hand going up the screen left hand to do and you do what I mean So if you do this here, this feels a bit like an IK arm Because I feel like the rotation the angle of the forehead for arm and the rotation of the wrist It's kind of disconnected and it all kind of goes up in a fairly straight line here See that there's no arc in there and the timing is a bit even So for this I will go You know slower and fast to get into that down for The else thought you should do and you want to tell me that those fights weren't real that you were carried well I don't believe it Yeah, it's great and the same thing here on that arm If you track the wrist up over It's basically doing this It's very very straight very angular whereas you can have a bit of a bit of an arc like that And then a hole here, right the arm goes And arm goes up hold it out basically mirroring what the head would do to a certain extent and they both feel a bit It's a lifeless, but just it just kind of feels like a move it feels animated and not part of the performance That's about it really cool job a little of it All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. 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