 All right, there's sound here. Let's watch it in full Very cool. There's also a reference. So here's the original Definitely see that you made some changes Cool cool cool. All right, so I watched this side by side to see where you made the changes And I really like where you deviated from the reference So here are my thoughts. It's cool, and I definitely need to review this rig This is part of the look rig that comes if you get the bundle get discover free Now question for you Do you want to or would you consider? Involving the sound a bit more So right now you got that explosion Gunshot, whatever the characters just going back Again, not that this doesn't work. Just question for you. Would you do something where maybe the character is Maybe in a less, you know some that's static pose, but something where it could be in a more engaging pose So what if you know that leg will be will be further out and there's there's more There's more of a anarchy with a certain pose like whatever it is, right? And then you can snap into Into that and it may be pushed up for silhouette Push that leg out with my awesome drawing here. So it's not that kind of it's not muddled I mean, it's clear to but I think it could be as opposed push potentially But the reason why I'm saying the thing about the post change is that That's on that also the the sound and the snap into this pose It would be more combined and in sync if that makes sense Now this is still in Step so to me, there would be something really that's in the reference. I would probably Either go back with this and add and then flourish in the hands Maybe or there might be something and bumping the mic mic here. It's like goes back and something more with the shoulders. I Know you won't contrast and there's different movement here But it's also a bit static through this It can also be going back and then going back and then the head does like a thing on one point I would still look at some flourishes here and there and break away from the reference Like even on something like this you could have I don't know if you if it starts here Spitball in here is completely wrong, right? But the head up and as you go back the head goes down Restart to install the latest Windows updates I don't want this and it still does it and then everything gets messed up. This is not part of the review so imagine towards the end the head is down and then on this it's more of a head-up arc Into this so we can kind of Transition a bit more strongly more strongly or that's English Same thing here. I like that. It leads with this And then you're gonna have that flourish with that hand and that's not too long goes into that. That's cool See that's cool BAM where that pose is timed with the sound and I wonder if after this here We can go to something strong and then just that I know he's stomping that leg but Goes into this and then fa-bam where it's again I don't know if you want to go higher with the with the roots for more stretched out legs and maybe arms out Hands out something if it's a person. I feel like something a bit stronger there And here's the only thing which is also not super clear in the in the point of view of the of the reference camera That works you got the crossing and maybe I should change my colors Can still work it gets a bit muddy there in terms of the silhouette Especially through here with all the same colors and stuff. I'm not sure about that that gets better I do like that with especially with the twist in the body and This maybe once you spline it it will be more clear, but then it gets a bit like what is this Elbow it's not the best little bit for an elbow straight a camera And then just the arm goes up a bit and then goes back to the head. It's just not as interesting This is where I would completely deviate from the reference and do potentially something different the way it's like Madonna and vogue style where it's like more circling with the hands around the head Maybe I was throwing the things out there That gets better was you got a twist get a nice silhouette. That's cool. I love that swing around that's great I love that. It's also more pushing in the reference. Love how far low down you go. Love this here That's a really nice line of action all the way into the fingers. It's really cool. And that's great Somewhat time to the sound that's cool. I think That could still have something a baby Almost reflecting this pose where you do this, but it's a bit more of a twist with This arm then for the back with maybe the head up more, you know something maybe a bit stronger So you have that last energy and like full pose That then drops into just falling versus you're already kind of oh like almost like I got shot versus that's my last dance pose. That's a crafted pose If that makes sense And that's that It's very cool Lots of nice poses. Yeah, so thought suggestions and all that could stop email me Let me know what you think and let's move on from there. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever beyond you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you