 All right here. Let's go back. There's no sound depends if I'm a shot Coming in here and as you see in your email, there's this pudding. She's happy not so happy grabs it anyway It's a bouncy pudding and That's that all right. So looking at this you you wrote down an explanation for what is going on and to be honest I didn't quite catch that Without I think quite on the center without your email. So basically when I was watching this going okay, she's mad and This could be like a crime scene. This is something that happened I don't know if you want to add something. I know this is pudding But no if you had something that spill or something whatever it is it would give us some history Maybe some more context. Maybe the the pudding is flattened or we can see the pudding here You know like where are we that might help right now? It just looks like mad That's probably something she did just because I'm a parent and I'm gonna deflect on it's the child's fault I shouldn't but like to me it's like angry. She looks at this Something happens, but we don't quite know what but I'm gonna connect these to that Something happened. I don't know we don't know quite yet. Then a person comes in That opens or show something doesn't quite open anything right just kind of does something We don't quite know what's happened. Well, we don't see anything Opening here or holding in a hand. So I'm not quite sure what he did Shows that she looks at it Definitely happy But then she's mad and I don't know why so okay, it was not a girl there Okay, but then she takes it anyway, so now I'm slightly confused but okay, she grabs it and it falls out and then ah see to me Not knowing And I'm gonna read out what you were in the email But what could be funny is that when she's like this she would just kind of open her hands and go ah Like maybe I grab her hand or like grab the sides of the table and and this would fall over and Then it would roll next to this and it's basically This is version one. This is version two like this happened before and then to me would be like Okay, she was clumsy the first time and now she's clumsy again with the second one And then maybe he will come back with the third one and then we cut out You mean like that's kind of how I would look at this what you're writing here is that Basically the little girl was mad about a guy ate her pudding so the guy ate the pudding We have no idea that he did this the guy came with a new one Okay, now we can see the little girl was not happy at first because he was the guy who ate her pudding We have no idea that that happened But she forgave the guy when she put the pudding on the plate the pudding fell on the ground Yeah, so him eating her pudding is just not clear So it's it's you almost need something where this is way too much animation Don't do it But in my head like he would be sitting here finishing this puts it down and then you know Like she looks at this looks at him looks at this and then crosses her arms. That's a whole other animation You know early story of hey, I'm looking at you. You ate this I wanted this but then you would walk away and come back into the scene and then give her this and Then then I would get it and then it's just the bummer that that it falls out But then it's almost it's almost mean like he ate it and then this still happens So she still doesn't get it like she doesn't have a lot of luck. But anyway, so not super clear to me Might just be me But it's not to me if that's already a set up there and imagine she again She let's go over this and how some cute acting like where she's frustrated and this rolls over and then at the end They end up being here Maybe I know that's we don't need the but they would be kind of funny things then it shows Oh, that's what happened before. This is why this is here. She is just constantly clumsy and let's just fall out Might just be me. Anyway that to me is what I have in terms of Kind of the story of what's going on. So what wise watch out. We don't quite see what's going on here Do we need this hand? If so, then I will bring it up here. So it's a bit cleaner. I Think that's cute and that works Hmm, I think that's really cute if you do something like this I see some residual movement in moving in here. We're just cool But you could probably drop that shoulder bring the shoulder up and have a bigger twist Like that head is really twisting her body, you know arm kind of lean over this can come down of it It's kind of pushing this what's not just in here And then when she grabs that No, once we find this like a proper grab with the fingers, but that's like later on the tricky thing is here If she grabs it that closely, I mean it's a quick move and that's why the thing comes out But it it's a bit of an intersection there. I'm not sure if that's super Clean and how we hmm. I'm thinking in terms of how could we have this gag of her taking this I Understand that that quick move is what makes it fall out It's not like you can move her over and then she holds it More like this and then we have a cleaner silhouette in terms of a almost profile, but then it wouldn't fall out It would be a total change where she would be profile and then lifts her arm. She you know, she brings her her Head back to tilt this but this thing instead of flopping into their mouth Kind of comes out and then just falls down straight and she just miscalculated the distance here and that could be something I know it's a big change. I don't want to be that destructive. I'm just worried about the size of this pudding How it intersects here the pudding barely has room to go through but I do like the bounciness and squishiness through there It's almost like a cheat. It has to be that squishy to do that But maybe you can you can do something where she goes as she goes back But that she brings up the root a bit higher and then you can you know straighten it up a little bit So that her chin is maybe here and then keep the cup here, you know, I mean can add some distance and Straighten her by that. He would also straighten her arms, which would give more room between the chest and this That'll be my my bigger Concern there and after that Tricky was such a big head like the silhouette. It's not super clean. I think for this I would have Potentially different acting as he goes again for me like what could you do? Like this is your big moment of outburst and something how would a kid react to this? Could she like I said, maybe hold on to the table stomp her legs Could she bite into the side of the table could she pull on her hair? Is there anything you can do that will go beyond that almost twins mirror pose? That's a bit more original. I'm just one of those lazy feedback things would be more original But that's just something I think you have such a great opportunity here to show her personality and this is a bit Default a bit simple. I think you could do a bit more even if you just like I see she's suddenly so mad She has so much strength that she she pushes the table away and then turns away from from the guy I don't know. It's a bunch of stuff you could do so that would be my My last comment kind of like an open thing for you Like would that be something for you to explore basically? I think this is great opportunity to be a bit more original quote-unquote at the end there with her Alrighty, that's that. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you