 All right, let's watch this here. There's sounds towards the end All right, one thing you are saying you're gonna Fix the chirping and cricket noise stuff. Just watch out for the end There's still a sound here That could be something where you do a bit of a butthead and a good bit of a Cheek puffy nose flurry thing at the end or to take that sound out slowly up to you There's something in his walks. I don't know why Here that feels like it stops too much going in screen space this way and Kind of has a bit of a hiccup there Now if that's too much of a side to sign move Right there something weird weird It's tiny, but it's kind of there so watch out your curves Hmm even here if you look at this how it kind of pops up in slides Even here watch out. It's something in a cycle. Maybe funky for that something strange there and then It's cool. I Think it gets a bit too big in the Breathing there on that stomach too high frequency out to me. It's more like and And It's almost holding Breath and do like what you add to here. Like you said an email. That's cool. I like that. I'm still somewhat in the camp of Exaggerating the side to side at you know the take the headache take in about 10% maybe That's cool. Like it to me definitely helps out that pause The thing that doesn't quite work is the mechanics of it in terms of the weight When you go in and you initiate this it's it's this Right there. Are you stop and then it goes? back Like what I would do is Roll but this is the part that struggles right so imagine it rolls this section here rolls down But then keeps going as this struggles. So if there's a way to then have this line here And then that here if that makes sense So that this section Can't make it and collapses back down while this this area Slowly stops this Roll kind of clockwise momentum there right now what I'm seeing is a lot of movement and then just stops going this way And then watch out I will probably give this one frame to the lay where it goes down and it pushes Where you want to feel that push and even if you push it out over one frame I would just have it concentrated here and delay that section. So this to this A bit much so you really feel that how it's coming from this section first and then you continue So I just again here That's cool, I'm not sure about the end right there. That's so cool. That's so cool. That's so cool Hmm, I think I'm also reacting to how long this neck gets It might just be you're here And then this and then that Can you compress it? So it's almost like this kind of stays here But almost higher really really pushing almost into You know a seeker of this way, but with the head now scrunched with a squash there So you're starting and this is really what gets going this section is delayed So right now everything moves as one here and this feeling feels like you're extending and stretching this That's probably what I'm reacting to there. This is a bit poppy on the saddle This I will actually bring these if you can flare them down or rotate them down if possible Flare down Then maybe come up here probably still down a bit here then You overshoot and then really flare up And then come down here I think I'm reacting to this this whole section Going down and up where I will keep this structurally You know in terms of bones and everything and I know it's kind of also a fine balance between squash and stretch and cartooniness and and still Paying attention to anatomy and bones and what the the heart structures are to me That move down here. I would concentrate that in the nostrils and the lips All the soft tissue stuff and not so much this section here That's probably what I'm reacting to there. What are you looking at butt head? And I will probably cut out sooner and right after that 226 227 That's for me when I'm starting at frame one Which you are too. So that's good. So Because now otherwise we're lingering And then that lingers feels like suddenly you're in a In a character select screen for a game and just kind of does its its idle cycle Even though I like all that stuff here, I just feel like we can cut out sooner because you have that punchline Cut yeah the 226 to 29 something like that and that's that all right. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way the like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you