 Alrighty, this has sound let's play this in full. All right, it's gonna sound off here. You're mentioning here This is part of something larger. This is just one pass seven touch the fingers and You can add a street with buildings And a bunch of no-smiling signs and posters as if living in authoritarian monarchy that bends Smiling what are you thinking about? The set I think that could work. Sure. Why not? My bigger thing are is the mechanics of the robots I think this could be a fun idea leaving this kind of cool how this kind of deflate. Why not? Yeah, why not? But my thing is And now this is just the first pass. So I'm just gonna mention what I'm seeing here. You will you're gonna have to look at Breaking up the moves a bit so they're not supposed to pose as you move forward Thinking about leading parts. What's the energy of the shots in terms of do you want a specific rhythm? Right now it feels a bit and one two three and four and five and six and seven everything feels very Even in terms of timing. It's kind of kind of just moves forward and it's kind of it And on top of that just your pose to pose. I look like I keep arms When you have moves like that where it feels like that arm is stuck in space there That's why it feels like an IK arm. I think you can Push the hips a bit more in terms of the weight shifts But then you have moments like these here where the arm just feels or the arm that leg feels like it's moving separately There's no weight shift. There's not really a big impact on the rest of the body and the arms just feel very floaty This is kind of cool. It was you got it's like a jet ski thing here jet ski like Thrust there's not jet ski but it's like a couple pops there and again It's just your first pass. I think my main concern is just the mechanics even how he lands here It just feels it just lands and then comes down in a fairly straight path Versus there's forward momentum. So as the robot would land they will continue to come forward a bit Potentially giving us a bit of a step. This feels a bit twin. They're kind of broken and it feels a bit Stiff and it's posing That makes sense Even stuff like that where it just kind of rotates pivots off of this Where this just feels slightly Again, there's no I'm missing in terms of the mechanics as you do something like this and the robot looks over there That could be a bit of a straightening the leg with a lean over for weight shift as this Fook gets up in the air. So he's not staying or it is not staying in this squatty position all the time And then potentially more leading with the head if I look at this like that whole turn It feels like the body and the head turn at the same time same thing here and I think I would look at in terms of is this kind of a security robot that has to ban and destroy everything where there's a smile and Have that a bit more active not has to be panicky but sharper turns always scanning always looking Where's the next one? Where's the next one? And it's kind of that that drives the action that could be your your constant look and search and give it a bit more energy and Then in terms of the rhythm it could be You know if I count like one two three four five six seven eight Nine you mean like it's almost in sync there So I would look at in terms of just a more a different rhythm where you would have one two three whole four five six seven I totally make things up here, but something that has a bit more energy and maybe And it's not way too much work. I'm sticking out loud here Maybe it's not just that but maybe like you said it has signs and posters What if there's something small like a little robot that comes in that has a smiley face on there or something Something pops up and comes in or little flying drones like maybe it's not always this shape Maybe you tweak the size of it so that you can have Big shot, you know bigger slash quick quick quick quick little ones Maybe something comes out and has to stomp it. I know I'm completely changing your shot I'm just giving you hopefully some ideas where something where it may be the size change the direction to weight and Anything anything like that that would change the rhythm to give this whole timing a bit more Texture and that's so the evenness that I'm seeing. I hope that makes sense So I'm stop it here. Let me know either email or however you want to proceed Let me know how you want to make changes. What kind of changes and if any of this makes sense. All right. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you