 All right, so I took a look at this. I'm gonna play it again Just and I'm gonna narrate my impressions. I was a bit confused about certain actions. So basically He's here with the sign is a bit unsure which I kind of get I mean, that's what I'm getting here from those quick looks. I'll just watch out for This all feels like it's one piece that goes up and down. It's very twin at the same time It's this whole piece versus the wrist for arm Arm are different shoulder offsets. All that stuff could be slightly more Broken up because you're mentioning that you splined half of it and last part is step mode So I'm not sure what your workflow is if you can if you want to already put in offsets at the beginning So I'm not quite sure how Set you are in your acting choices. So If that's kind of like a past just kind of pitching acting choices then this thing is fine But you can still start to think about certain offsets and you know, if you move all of this that chess would also be involved Maybe slightly the hips as well the roots Stuff like that just for technical purposes You can bypass a couple steps when you move from walking to bluffing plus and so on and anyway He does all this here Then this gets a bit weird. So he has it's a bit more of a Not that this is subtle, but it seems you know a bit more contained and guys are quite sure and then suddenly he moves over big lean Looking over here. It gets very cartoony and Then He's looking over back in shaking his head, but I'm not quite sure why it was his inside Right now from this point. We don't quite know where he is. It's not quite clear Where that character is this could be anywhere with long benches at town hall meeting. You don't quite know that it's a church So it's just kind of looking there looking over Back shaking his head not quite sure why then this move here. It's really really fast. Is he suddenly freaking out? Why is this move so fast? Then he puts the hat on and The camera goes in here. I guess to show importance. I'm not sure if you need that camera move Especially this move over here. I'll probably just keep the camera the way it is And we can always work with that later on. I would just really solidify your acting choices But again, he puts the hat on really really fast not what you're why And it sits down and notice it's just stepped but make sure that even in step mode You want to add a couple more breakdowns to go from here to here, you know, is he Not that he's fainting. I'm just saying like what if something happens to him and he's trying to regain balance That why he's so quick in this because you can still add a couple breakdowns to ease out of this pose into this So we understand the timing of it was right now. I'm not sure if he's in a rush All the the slow movements, you know, how fast some moves and how slow someone moves you can still indicate in stepped keys It's gonna work on your ease in denounce. That's also really really exaggerated. I'm not quite sure why he has such a bend in his body And it sits down and that feels very uncomfortable like you're breaking his wrist a lot here So why is he staying with his arm there for so long and then Doing tricky I would add different colors to all this here for the top piece here starting to Melt with the background, but I'm assuming this is here. He's not really resting his arm on it So I'm not quite sure what this pose is. Why is this so high up here? Why does he keep his hand here? This is he leaning on this. It doesn't quite make sense. I'm not gonna get I don't understand this move Right since this is not leaning on anything unless it's not that's the line here This is in the air yet. He goes down, but then this stays. I'm not quite sure what this is Then what does that mean? Is he holding something a prop you haven't put in yet? So why is he looking his hand then he looks up? It's something suddenly like dripping on his hand. It looks out What's going on here? He still has that pose in the hand and goes all the way forward. I don't know why And then same thing here. Oh, that's such a quick move Is he super desperate and he slams his head on there like you gotta add more breakdowns to tell us What is the timing? What are you trying to tell us in terms of emotion and action and attitude? Like what does this character do this doesn't tell me much except that it's really really fast and He slams his head and then we cut out of it Like there's not enough time to linger on this how long do you want to stay on this? How important is this and why did he put his hat back on? So I'm not quite sure. I'm usually it. I would assume at the church you take your hat off So why does he why is he like this and then he puts it back on? Because even when he has it back on when he do this, it's gonna crumble the head I mean the hat hat might fall off all that stuff you're gonna think about so I'm mostly confused I'm not quite sure what is going on in here What the acting choices are what what is acting is you know in terms of his feelings his emotions What what we are trying to understand as an audience so lots of questions So maybe you melt me back with your breakdown Maybe what you wanted what you're trying to say with those poses and all that stuff here So we can work on making that a bit more clear. All right. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way the like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you