 Alrighty, let's play this here. There's sound as always It's very cool. All right. This is the new version. There's also an old version. Let me look at this With a side-by-side Wow, that's a Tough side-by-side here So you have The hit We can see how lingers longer The head more in frame. This is super minimal But I got to say I prefer The newer version even though it's it's minimal. It's almost like this is, you know the pickiest thing Is that like in this one how? Visible the hand is compared to Right there that being said a tricky tricky thing So here's my honest answer It's a mix of both I know this is horrible to say the thing that I like about the head here is that even though it gives you a bit of a Line of action like this. There's something a bit more tense, especially on the exit like that Whereas this almost feels I know this is ridiculous, but the head is straight and with this down It feels like if there's a bit more tension to it. I do prefer this in terms of how clean it is But I will probably go With that hand up here up here with a Fist with maybe a split between the relaxed fingers. I know this is incredibly hair splitting But there's something about The tension of the exit it just feels a bit strobe and fast on the right one It's still fast, but I can see it better, but then it has this a bit of a staggered Down move where I feel like we can streamline this and make it a cleaner exit in a line and not so because it's the hand pointing This way, but we're going this way And it almost feels too relaxed. I know this is ridiculous, but I would keep the spacing But keep this on a straight a line like this Kind of like that, but lower so it's not hitting here. It's incredibly picky and And the head touch the head again, but I like to with that exit is how it's slightly and If I'm contradicting so what I said before I apologize And there's just something about this with the head down and the shoulder up giving is a bit more tension and with the head down still trying to hide versus this head stays up and Less of a hidden hiding aspect again. I don't remember to be honest what I said before Will prompt this will prompted this this change. I believe it was the the snappiness of the exit on where It could just be a bit more relaxed, but I think you went slightly too far and by slightly I went a couple percent I know this is ridiculous. It's a ridiculous picky thing But that is my honest opinion and you can go with what you obviously prefer if you prefer this that's fine, too I don't think it's a shock killer, but since you're asking that is my Preference now looking at the whole shot. I want to bring down the sound just a tad here It's all great Great timing there. I don't know. I didn't see on my viewing. I didn't see anything Crazy town. I need to be fixed It's a nice grab on the fingers on that door This like tension there That'd be super picky super picky super picky that door opens and then see how the door ends and we have a bit of a A frozen hand. I think I would just ease into this stop So that there's not even like a little bit of a back you mean like there's a bit of attention there You can keep that door going a little bit with a slight relaxation on that hand to exit So it doesn't have that moment of of an IK arm. That'd be my picky thing And I wonder if on this you could probably already bow Relax one of the fingers like a jolt. I know you have it here and again another shock kill and it's so fast But since I'm framing through His face is great swatches again. I love the walk out That's great The only thing I would say here's a picky one To really not lessen the impact of that punch. See how much we see over the face and Then it's already sticking out And I will personally go with He steps out and not that you have to turn the head against the punch But I wouldn't go out because it kind of lessens the impact where you really want this whole Thing being the first thing To see went to your teeth. Oh, there you go Again, you might be like, I know we talked about it too potentially But that's the only thing It has a slight ease into that punch Now question for you since it's such a violent punch, do you have controls on this hat? Could that Hat stay in the same orientation as this on this frame And then recover and get into that and this orientation but higher And then maybe plop down on here And I think on the exit should be fine. I don't think it needs to float off But that could be something cute It's such a good The exit is great to speed I've happy super picky again because I think this is pretty much done So I'm giving you my extremely picky notes that you can decide year in a and then be done with the shot Since you're initiating a rotation like this in the body In that hold you hold a bit and then as you drop it continues so that we are a bit more You know as it turns this way, we are a bit more This side Towards us, so it's not a straight down but has an ever so slight continuation of their rotation again. It's super picky just because We're starting and then the exit is a bit one axis down and they could do a little bit of chest rotation Just wondering that's all cool. Let's look at this Oh, that's great. I love this Again because I'm in picky mode. Let's see what I will probably No, you do you do have Eyebrow raise leader with the eyes and then That's good. That's great Oh, I think we can slightly push to beg your pardon into beg your into a narrower shape and then pa right Thank you pot and pa beg your so you're Just have a little bit of I know it's all mushing into one And we see beg pardon But it would be interesting to have a little bit of a win there just a bit of contrast I'm just reacting to This white shape this white shape being a purely a reversal And with something a bit more refined in there And also could be if you just do Beg and you only have an offset which is good You're part and like your partner wouldn't wouldn't like that you Means that you're doing a bit narrower and doesn't have to be like an o shape But it means that you narrow the corner so that part and would be Narrow as well So good. Yeah, it's great. Love that. That's really nicely done here Nice stuff on the jacket Head forward to this is great The stretchiness relaxation on the arms is great And that look with that and the fleshiness in the eyes a little bit of move in the head. It's great So I have extremely picky Use adjust my two senses always but other than that pick and choose what you need and what you want what you can do Other than that. I think this looks done to me Isn't this here? Watch out just a little Must be a crease in the shadowing there It just kind of pops in the pier so watch out for that That'd be super picky again because I'm in picky mode as you come up You could even instead of just doing a one axis thing here It could be since it's kind of coming from here This move could have a little bit of an arc like that Imagine that nose coming a bit towards us up and then a bit away from us into that So it's a bit more, you know, wait All right comes over and jackets type of thing So good. All right. 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