 Alrighty check this one I get here checking no one's here. All right, let's go down Cool cool cool looks around to make sure alright Nice, okay there There's still something and I know I'm being extremely picky about this I know we've gone back and forth and yet some other notes as well. I Think this is cool in terms of like basically my reaction is this goes down looks. There's nothing There's nothing here like up until now it feels like no one is Chasing him no one's there. He's just casually looking. I like that you have that look and that leg already goes out Like the animation is all cool. I love all this Then this feels suddenly a bit fast Again, not the animation is wrong. There's something about the feeling. Okay, and then suddenly gets really active with this Running away And then with that stumble again like the animation is fine if I just look at the animation from here on Goes over here. That's cool. You get your jump there and watch this again here. Chow. There's a little bit of a harsh hit Boom right there the amount of movement he has the momentum going this way I mean, it's only you have a bit of a pause stop through there. That's all cool The tumble is cool. I like this like that you move the space over this way Looking around really checking because we saw this here. So it's really going around and looking around all those elements. That's cool Happy about that that's cool This is that little up and down is maybe a bit fast right there Even it's just by one frame. Maybe two. It has a slight pop to it. Maybe a little bit fast That's all cool. Then this feels a bit slow right there That step to me feels ever so slightly slow just a little bit faster. Also the head Through there feels especially through this here with all that movement and the jumping and everything the head feels a bit locked off You have that turn and then bam, then we hit this and you can see especially through here Add some more or rotations in there Then this is cool and I like that you get into like whoa, no, no, no, but I would probably Keep this arm a bit lower. This is a bit higher I know it's always kind of the key until the cliche thing to do offsets in animation and it's not like you can't have twinning ever But this just seems ever so slightly too Straight and similar Whoa, but I like that and I like that you start going with that hand still there and Then watch out as you get over there There's a little bit of a Right there a little bit of a speed up Through there and then a bit of a too much of a slow down and then too much of a speed up again Just a bit I don't mind the variation in timing, but there's something just a bit too much in there So speed up stop speed up Subjectively of course always Now I'm saying all this like these are for me my technical notes and I know we've wrangled this a little bit but It seems like no one is chasing him. He's totally fine. It's relaxed and from here on it seems like He thinks he's being chased someone is still there and he has to hurry and only now he's checking It's interesting was we talked about that before I think the only thing you would have to do is you can start doing this That's fine. And when you do this you would have a little take Head up eyes wide a little bit like whoa someone's there and then you go into this You just you just make this faster. So less of a pause you have a take here like whoa That actually that person saw me and goes straight into this you go straight into that and into that So it's not that relaxed stops. You really want to go into this If that makes sense That's the only thing like subjectively when I watch this he feels very relaxed everything is fine And then oh, that's fast. Oh, why is he running like why is he suddenly in a hurry and Feeling especially here. Oh gotta check gotta check gotta check when beforehand nothing was there now again I know we talked about this before but I Feel like if someone was watching this for the first time that will be their reaction potential confusion And confusion quote-unquote, you know like super confusing, but that's kind of impression that I have But I do like to pose it's like all of that especially this that one arm get away. I think that's very cool Doing that is cool, too. It's a bit light if I be super picky The way this moves around I'll give this a bit more weight just a bit more I know it's a lot of work there with all the detail stuff and the spinning, but it just feels ever so slightly light That's it. Yeah, let me know. Let me know how you want to proceed with the beginning. All right. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you