 Alrighty, let's watch this here. There's no sound you got this here cool So there's a section that's slightly confusing and then I feel like the end Needs another beat. So basically we get this focused on something Take something out Wondered I know this is this is like a bigger Bigger change, maybe you threw there It's running if you can keep that arm big cleaner or clearer As it takes it out, but you also want to cheat where it takes it. I think it's okay this into that Maybe that hand that will bring up a bit She is a we can see help part of that on there And then the fingers come in so has a bit more of a nicer line versus bam, and then his block is right there It looks at it. I think that's okay. It's reads long enough mostly focusing on here. See some symbols there relentless Grabs this Now you're doing a throw in front of the body So we're starting to have those because of the color a bit of a silhouette problem And then we're here where that's the only thing that breaks free So the question is could this be done? I'm totally breaking the shot apart Could this be done with Throwing it up this way for a nicer cleaner silhouette with the arm and the object and just doing this The other way. I know that's a big destructive note. Just throwing it out there Or you do this but then you go a bit further with a slight pivot so that the foot ends up here With almost like one actual step So it doesn't feel like we're doing this while being stuck to the ground so that you can have This actually here much smaller. It's a lot more at us And then you can be a bit more profile so that arm ends up being More like that if that makes sense turn The thing that's confusing to me is then this section. So throws this up Waiting for it to land in his hands and it's kind of missed that he does a little adjustment with the finger And just for clarity. This is the framing there. So it's kind of like a I guess so like once I frame through and I see it and then I watch it. So, oh, okay That's what he's doing. I kind of missed that at the beginning Also, watch out. You don't quite want a straight arm towards camera We depend this straight towards or away from the camera So that we still understand a bit of the structure either down or up It starts to feel like a very short arm So that to me was a bit of a confusing thing and then I'm confused because this That's my dog in the background This feels more like he gets hit by it Especially in terms of how long Like was that an accident? Is he doing this on purpose? Like this really confused me And then he goes back into this and watch out for a bit A little bit twinned. I know there's an offset and all that but this has a slight twinned Mirrored feel to it and then he gets into like a very bored pose Sometimes it's I don't like is that is that expression for him like is he bored Waiting for this change to happen. Is he anxious? But does he know it's going to happen and He is anticipating like almost with with some sort like a giddy pleasure that ha I'm about to turn into this so I can fight this guy Like I'm not quite sure If you just watch this neutrally without knowing anything what the storyline is and what's going on Especially this where it feels like a more like an accident Boredome Turning into this which is always great, but then immediately goes into over there versus Do we want a bit of moment of Goes into this land settle a beat then move over So that because this also feels like did he just grab something Through there. He was very quick in doing this and he's looking down here But I guess he didn't grab something like what just happened and then Brings up to this and right before the cut there's one more move over here And you don't want something right before to cut like a big move. It gets very jarring So I'm just kind of confused as to what is happening Throughout the shot to be honest I think this could be just a bit clear beat-to-beat stuff like that Could lands and get ready. Maybe you can still have his head down Maybe arms are a bit lower Look up straight again And then bring the arm over while the head is still fixed on Whatever was fixated here just do that, you know the object is still I'm still watching you While the arm goes over so the head still here looking over Then it's ready then the head turns and then this happens A gift is another beat so we can have this land and settle basically and watch our eye lens that's looking this way All right, hope that makes sense Uh, let me know in the email if you can we can chat about all of this And that's it. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you