 Alrighty, new version here. It's watches their sound. I wish I was the monster you think I am I wish I had enough poison for the whole pack of you. I would gladly give my life to watch you all swallow it Cool Now the main impression It's watches again here. I wish I was the monster you I think generally There's some good stuff in there. I'm always a fan of gestures. They're somewhat off-screen That was happily part of performance I think if you would spline this right now, I'm not saying you should I'd be concerned about some of those head tails where you are going this way and then This way and then back this way. I was the monster you think I am It's a bit better through theirs because I'm concerned about some of those wobbles I wish I had enough And moments like these where it's it gets very Locked in a way. Just be careful once you spline this Kind of looking at what the head is doing and moments like these where it's kind of a bit locked left and right in space And then arms take to feel a bit straight Up like an IK arm with fairly broken wrists Like that that feels just a bit broken through there Other than that, I think my main note is that And it's not that it's wrong You know, like this character could just be next to the chair chair feels a bit further away And that's just the performance there, but there's a certain Feeling that the character has to stay put here And that's all they're doing. There's not even a change in orientation of where the root is pointing Let alone turning maybe taking a step sideways or going front or you know using Basically the depth of the scene and and the space left and right. That's my main thing is that It just feels a bit Locked in there like you just you're trying to stay within this I know that's means the main comment This is also very very locked. I mean once you continue Questions of what are you going to add through there file process or not, you know, you could just start here I wish So watch out for that. If you do stay here at the profile, it's tough to see the eyes So just be mindful of what you're going to do performance wise from this angle I wish I was the monster you think I am I was the monster you think I am I feel like I am I feel like that almost have a little bit of a drop That's just because the the voice does it but like there's a lot of tension and then there's almost a bit of a release I was the monster you think I am I was the monster you think I am You know so it can be down here then back up. I wish I had enough poison I wish I hadn't to me during this. I had I had is so strong the way it says it I wish I hadn't This feels almost a bit tame. This would almost to me would be that's the moon of like a nice lean like a more Like intense little accent in the head or at least in the face, but being so still like people's blindness right now it would just be To me a bit too still give the energy in the voice And there would be really a big noticeable move in the nose here in terms of like the scale and stretching I had enough poison for the whole pack of you And then pack Feels like you want to go a little bit out and wide didn't come back or pack a little bit of a Hold and then snap the whole pack of you This pack feels stronger in the sound pack of you. I would gladly that's cool though this you I would gladly give my life But then life I would have a little bit of a Well, then why like a little roll there like a little tiny little accent there life to watch you all swallow it But like even here would be the moment even if you keep all of this here It could be the moment of to watch you all swallow. That's when he turns Towards us and the head goes from here to here because he's kind of looking straight it's not like He has a bit of a Add us bit to the left mostly add us add us add us so you can still go from here to a bit of a Straight on body wise open up like this that's his big defiance brought shoulders like this is almost like he is you know He's in handcuffs and smaller and in pain mentally and physically but at the end That's it a defiance. That's when he gets all straight brought shoulders, you know arms down here going Or See monster you think I am I wish I had enough poison for the whole pack of yeah, I think that's mostly that I do still want to throw out that idea of are you open to potentially having him Move around go back maybe even like you could start here And then he turns almost like three quarter away from us You just see kind of the you know just like the the head back the neck And then it's been like shoulder body acting and then bigger turn towards us again I don't just wondering that might be too much like too much that you want to do But at least a one point and if not just maybe at the end as a contrast in terms of Just changing like state of mind how he's just defined and then they're opening up and You know like here. I'm this wall. You can't touch me type of thing. I don't know. Let me know. Let me know what you think That's what I have. 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