 Let's check out your mail. You are talking about potentially selfie because the other character in there is crashing Those are all good points. Um, what you could do. I mean You could just have a foot Not that it's gonna look too cut off, but I'm imagining something where basically just see an arm Ready with with a you know a finger pose. I don't know what I'm drawing here But imagine there's the finger and then somehow you got your wrist there again I get drawn an arm The arm comes out and maybe you know the beginning of a silhouette maybe a foot. So I don't know how Perspective wise I guess if you'd be here something may move more from the back But there's something where you don't have to see much and you can just imply that someone's ready with The photo taking and maybe then as he crashes all the hand is doing kind of like And it's all frustrated which actually reminds me of hold on if I bring up Cameron's reel Not the end of the awesome to work stuff There's this one and I'm always looking at This moment here Right so it's that type of off-screen acting where your character could be like this and maybe ready with His arm up whatever the thing is ready, right and then as he falls off That arm would slightly droop and just a little bit of acting just through that arm that oh again This character has done this again Maybe this is history that you can imply to be too fancy, but that might help you You know you can bring in any character so it doesn't crash the scene so that you just have an arm and Hand I think that will be my thing you also talk about Putting the banner that says best catch that sounds good. I'm always kind of hesitant About putting text in shots just because then you start reading and you distract them from what's going on I think you might be just as well off doing something where you have you know colorful stuff here Maybe you got some balloons attached and some garlands or whatever not garland or whatever you want to call these ESL here Which makes it festive right and then maybe flowers. I know what you want to put in but if someone that looks really like a shark mouth which could be that maybe that's what it is your eyes and teeth and it's a Standy thing where he just stands there because it's funny. He has a fish and he's surrounded by this big fish thing Right with fins and stuff and why not I mean that would also make sense why he's taking a photo there Now looking at the animation I know last week was add complications complications complications. I totally understand but I think what you've done here is great Now you are concerned about speed Which I agree, but I think you can make this whole thing faster. So if you take this That's gonna be okay I think once you're in here and I notice this is the heavy part Speed this up too much. Hey, I'm slightly concerned about how far over he is hunched there Excuse me, how's maybe the body might be more like this Pulled you on to it. So he's trying to get up not like this where he would just fall over and really Destroy his back. You can start with something like this But As he goes up you can go into the classic, you know see curve reverse Where you know, he starts hunched over and then leans back to pull this up now that you might say Yeah, but it's gonna take away from this sure, but what you could do is He starts the lift and you're starting with a You know a seeker back But there's still enough front weight on the fish itself Because it's so heavy Despite him trying to lean back and carry that that character of the fish It's still how it's still off balance enough for him to fall this way to take a step and This is where this is where it feels kind of slow like this through here Imagine you can kind of speed up a bit But that's cool all the steps forward using space like that moment I think you potentially speed this up where it's Tail so maybe that coming alive could be shortened And I'm shaving off a couple frames, but you know frames here and there might well So help See this feels long this feels suddenly slow motion where I think Once he does this what you could do is shake to shake on the tail Slight slow down We just kind of wakes up and shakes and he looks down going What's going on and then you go right into holy shit where it's just a lot of movements a lot of movements so all of this Happens and I know I'm going back to what I was saying But maybe it happens around here so that he goes this way now this might be in the way I know I'm adding complications, but trying to find ways to cut it down when I think this whole section is Very long and could be could be changed Probably this whole pause again. I know if you're trying to be in the picture again, but I think you can just go into Wakes up. He looks down. Oh what's happening to chaos chaos chaos into And that's it one more frame. I know it's stepped but one more frame where you see the tail So it doesn't completely zip out And I think for him you could play this that He gets out out of his grip and his hands are trying to hold on to it because of that He gets pulled with the fish a bit. So it's not just a fall back, but a slight Not jumping back, you know, but being pulled back by the fish a little bit So you have a clearing of this I know this is makes no sense that if you jump from here you still have that overlap But anyway, it's just a feeling of not just falling back but being pulled Because of that fish backwards a bit just get a bit more open there And then you could fall back here not visible but back there And then the water comes out here Anyway, that's about it. That's all I have. I think it's a great update. I totally understand your concerns So I think there's little fixes that we can Put in there just to speed up the thing. I don't think it's gonna get longer. I think you can actually make it short Okay. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you