 Alrighty, let's play this in full as always here we will risk our lives blah blah blah. Okay done. I did my part Cool. I was a fan of nice short shots. What is this 150 frames? Nice bring down a volume just a little bit We will risk our lives blah blah blah. Okay done So my impressions were overall. I like it's cool As you move on with this I'll be careful with you might have to rearrange some of the set pieces This is extremely picky, but yes stuff where they start having tensions there And I would just finish up the animation and at the very end we can re Shuffle some props and you know some colors and things just kind of You know, I'm very much drawn to Can see this with this color here. Let me change to All that is drawing My attention to it. I know this is easily fixable. Let's be careful with all that It is it seems a bit distracting just visually just to start the shot like that But obviously it's very easy to fix now in terms of the performance here are my suggestions I don't think there's anything that stands out as being Horrificly wrong. Like oh this shot was never gonna work like this But here are my thoughts and as always you can agree and disagree And take what you need at first. I missed This because I'm looking at her the shot starts. I like that. She is finishing a move It's like caught on action. You can feel like this stuff happened before This is just a shot out of a sequence. She gets ready into her thing, but I'm ready to look at her It's also very appealing in character I just want to look there and then you know and the line starts so this actually also because of The coloring and how small this is and how he gets kind of lost. I Only noticed this on the second viewing now you might say that's good because I was drawn into this But here are my thoughts. What if you save this so you keep everything you have in terms of The gesture just imagine the thumb is still there But she can she can still do all that stuff and she does the popping at the very end when she's done She can just through here, and I know it's a different pose, but again, it's just a suggestion that she's done saying all her lines Then pop and then drinks. It's kind of the last thing she does I did my part because also I Think somewhere around here even the eyes will go towards there We're a bit more aware of this if you want to make a moment out of that. Just a little suggestion and body wise I Mean I like I like a lot. It's a really cool stuff I like that till had wiggle even in this early blocking phase and set mode You can you can see what's going on there and you got little detail there on the legs. This is all really cool What if again, it's totally up to you. What if during the blah blah blah? Blah blah blah, so she gets she turns around gets into this position and then blah blah blah She would actually lift up the root a bit more Maybe the fingers would be here in the hand comes off a bit So she gets just a bit higher. She's a bit of a blah blah blah and because the body Rises a bit raise a bit rise raise Okay, and then so she has a bigger drop on okay Because the only concern that I was that once she turns and gets into this When you screw up. Yes, there is movements, but it's also kind of it She's kind of locked into that not that I won't do some crazy things where she walks left and right But I wonder if that could be interesting just a little bit of an add-on of blah blah blah Because she looks up and she has all those cool moves What if you can accentuate this a bit more with the body going up as well and then and then if a bit of a more of a plop down And I wonder even if when she plops down imagine So she goes like this and maybe you might have to lean it forward a bit more or move that body over So that when you go blah blah blah again, she is maybe not angled so much Maybe she's just angled a bit less and goes up with the body. So when she plops down imagine she is she is maybe you know 25% less of this meaning the shoulder is a bit lower. She's not so leaning over just a bit less So that So during either done or I did my part during this it's her final final settle into this pose And my my thought process is that she goes around says all this right goes up and when she plops down Like okay, but she's she's still talking that person She's still invested only when she goes done or potentially even afterwards during this She really disconnects and you can see that by her looking at the bottle and drinking which I'm not really looking about but she's done Why she she is not holding eye contact and she starts drinking I wonder if this could be the moment to really get into this pose and again I'm only talking about you know lowering this a little bit head Maybe a bit less and just lessening this pose by maybe 20-25% to then get into this last pose During this section here to really finish that just looking for some subtle changes In the body to kind of accentuate the mood but not going overboard and adding too much movements, but also trying to get out of Bam once you're here again. It's just and especially once she has that shoulder up here I mean, it's kind of it and I feel like we could push even in subtle ways The emotional state and how much he connects with that character. She's talking to just a bit more But obviously there's totally up to you We can have a little bit discussion about that email if you want to but that is it from me at the moment. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you