 All right, I haven't seen this yet. This is gonna be a fresh impression on the shop and you're asking The background I plan to put like just a skyline, okay Things I still need to do is mess with graph editor offset facial and hands. Oh, it's working. It's not All right, so you just a general impression Check this out Holy moly You are saying you started this piece because you really wanted to quit my job, right? Well, it Hey, I'm sorry that that's how you felt back then. It clearly is not a very uplifting piece I personally would not do this. This is a very very depressing subject matter. Not that's one that you technically ignore I mean, it's I'm all for discussing things. It's important, but on your demo real piece. I'm not sure how much Value you get out of showing someone who kills himself without anything I mean, even if after a while, he suddenly floats up because some hoverboard, you know, it's saving him It's just It's not like he has a funny face looks around someone someone was chasing him when he jumps down It's kind of like the back to the future thing this is just purely Very very it's very long and you don't quite know what he's looking at and They were I'm sure what this is and then suddenly holy moly, especially if you have a skyline Yeah, me personally again, you can say, you know, I really want to do this I'm personally of the opinion that there's a lot more you can do That's a bit more uplifting unless you send it to a company that Deals with this, but you know something like that you would go. That's a strange set of minds To send this to Disney to Pixar, you know or Dreamworks or whatever, but they don't they don't really usually do this type of thing in their movies Nothing they shouldn't saying that's it's a hard sell for a personal shot again if I would watch this I'll go wow That's really depressing And let's pretend we are actually doing this right? Okay. Well, this is just a suicide and that's what she wants to animate fine But if I stop until he actually does it There's not much going on This seems more like a layout take in terms of I mean like you said, it's a rough It's the offsets and everything but just in terms of what's going on You know, like you would have to if you would take a lots of little steps in here Right steps a little bit stops that's a little steps a little bit Maybe couple side steps just from mechanics and presentation point of view that could be more interesting Then as he turns around he might stop a bit look back then turn around again And then as he maybe that's like a sigh He goes out. No, but then he could maybe play with those fingers a little bit like he's kind of antsy And then he looks up and I know what he does here It's a strange thing and also he looks straight at camera that which makes it more depressing because at this point He's connecting with us And you have that slight smile. That's also like hey, I'm actually okay with this Hey guys, watch me as I'm killing myself. It's just not it's a uncomfortable piece And again, I'm not sure what the value is In terms of sending it to a company. So I Do like the piece, but if it's not working, do you say where? So I'm not sure if that's just a an exercise you want to do or you just want to tackle that Difficult subject matter, which again you can It just feels to me like you want to you can be in this and you can to me feel like you want to have stronger poses in terms of Changes visually it looks around looks left and right hesitates Looks around and then there's all facial stuff looking around biting his lip thinking. It's just more going on because right now your Contrast is just all slow slow slow at the end really slow and then what the fuck just because not visually But contextually so to me it seems like you want to do looks around looks around Tears turns around facial. I don't know. I don't know and then Then you go into this moment. So I wouldn't look around like you might To me it's more like you look around look around turn look back a bit come back in all in the face all in the face thinking I thought process and cut all this here and go straight from this To where is it here? Alright, so you go from from this to that and then you just hold And then you have that little smile and in this because that would be the big contrast because you realize Okay, we're he's stopping stopping. What is he gonna do? What is he gonna do and then? That's the big ending versus all this seems just very very drawn out and Slightly boring. Oh, there's not much. I mean, you might argue. Well, he's looking at this guy No, that's nothing. Yeah, it's just as you watch it. It's just not It's it's a hard sell to do almost nothing for so long So long long long long long doing nothing So, yeah, these are my thoughts again on a personal level I'm not sure I would need more information to know what you want to do with it If this is just purely to put on my reel I would say no just like you don't put anything sexual political cursing or whatever races There's some things that just companies don't do anything like this You know, someone probably knows someone in the room Where's that kill themselves a friend or family member and you know, that could be An upsetting thing to watch and like, well, why would you send this that we don't do this? Why would you do that? You know, there are lots of problems that come with this Now if you say that's an exercise then that's totally different, but then it really comes down to well Are you just doing this to be depressing? Why not right and then you do want to do the whole feeling of slow meandering His last feeble look at the beauty of life and then no more But then that's different because it would be just for you like you want to do this And that's how you want to present it If there's any 1% inclination of you wanting to do this for someone else in terms of entertainment value Not that you will put entertainment value on this here. I'm just saying that it's just not that interesting to watch So I have almost more questions than you And again, if you want to do this because of the important subject matter And you want to just present this as a long take because you want the whole clip to be about that then again That's totally fine Then I would just say Like you said offsets and stuff like this But once you turn around here, then you're gonna really have to put the facial acting there because he is processing I mean he is thinking There's gonna be some stuff Even through here, there might be a couple darts look down Blink look up look around couple darts, you know, you might look over here over here over here and around just a bit more That's gonna be a lot in here You know, even if this was a PSA like something for Advertisement or you know like some lecture about suicide and that's that's how they want to present the beginning Maybe it's you know to make it more accessible to kids or something Who knows you still want to make sure that the character looks like he is thinking There's a thought process going on. 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