 Okay, so checking this out. This is really cool. I really like the changes you made There's some really really neat stuff there, and I really have only minor notes. It's it's pretty much done Great moments there where things are much more clear in terms of silhouettes pauses are great That love this Love that. That's so cool. So my major minor things would be so this is all neat, right all that stuff here as he comes down You see how it pushes off if I be super picky it feels like this foot here It's kind of it all kind of pivots off the toe and Then right at the very end here. See how the body is moving, but the foot's not moving Just make sure that it continues to move and at this point, maybe the foot could tilt tilt over this way It's kind of the same thing here if it's like it's a big foot roll But make sure that it feels kind of like a push so you want to have parts of the toe still moving away As he's pushing down Just watch out for stuff like that or super piggy things where you see his knee Goes down down down to the right and then suddenly goes down to the left and then down forward again So this would be one continuous arc without that one last down move You know stuff like that for just your your final polish pass Love the stuff on the fingers here. It's all good. My first major thing would be this it still feels weird how How he goes back and both arms come up Hands I mean and then he goes down and pushes off and if you watch this in real time It's kind of it's like a weird anticipation where it's almost playful. It's kind of a I don't know to me It feels like you want to have That hand come down and then bring that hand up like this Much earlier so it feels like he's he's I think I mentioned before where he kind of pushes against the tree I make sure that he doesn't slide down and that's kind of what makes you have your wrist go up a bit It's not a shock killer and then you know, you can ask other people as well I'm curious about their reactions and stuff, but it's just something where it feels a bit off It feels almost too animated as in I'm showing my anticipation with everything including my wrists That's all That's all cool. I love the whole bow how he Settles here. It looks back and I love the timing of the head All right, so he comes down and goes, okay, what's over there? What's over there? Oh now the only thing this would be my second big comments So first the hands here and you see how your your head goes up here There's a bit in the head move with the body. So he looks over there. I Will make this just this section here in his head Make that twice as fast and maybe like 30% bigger. So it's a very clear I'm checking checking checking. Oh, it's over there and this feels a bit soft. It's like, uh It's not as as Revealing as of a take it's more like a as opposed to oh, it's over there grabs the thing And that that will be my third part of here where When he comes to a stop here First watch out you got your spear aligning with his thigh. It's a bit funky just for What's it called the tangent and your silhouette gets a bit unified there So you want to have it potentially bring that arm up higher which will make him a bit more alert Which is fine and then you can bring up that spear just higher above the thigh And I think reaction wise Watching it now the way it works when it's acting everything is great I would the only thing I would do is it takes that step and I like how he goes up, right the whole body here goes up, but it feels like your roots could be He's taking this step and he finishes that step by having his roots Actually here so imagine your your leg will come down to almost that far, right? It's gonna be a messy drawing and then he goes back into Into what you have So if I take this off here So he comes in root cause continues to go forward and then he goes back with the root going back here And the reason why I'm saying that is that imagine you're you're stepping and you're realizing for instance Like you stepped on a branch and it's really loud It's kind of like your step and you go back and it feels you're you're Like you want to stop you want to interrupt the move forward and right now It feels like you're taking a step, but your root is already not moving forward It's almost it knows too much. Hope that makes sense and Then So yeah, so he goes back of a root back and not just a rotate out of this And it was hiding hiding. Oh, what's this? I love this. I love also the timing here. How you go? It's kind of that lean over checking Is it good? Okay, it's safe and I love this has kind of okay one two and it's that that hop Into getting ready Okay, and I love the pause and I love the timing of the of the swing here Do and I love how it continues almost a couple steps And then how you go back with the root is that type of movement back that I'm talking about Here right so it's not just stop and rotate up But it's the it's that point of the roof being almost here and then going back here But again, you rest it and it checks and it's so good. It's a it's a huge Huge change from last time last time where you really nailed the timing and the acting and It's great contrast and big moves fast moves Yeah, it's about it. It's super cool. It's it's really really neat progress there Love it all all the steps there and love how that little foot slides forward If I pick you you could say that the angle position of the foot is kind of the same as it moves forward So you can imagine that at the end You know if it's if your foot Your thingy here and then your foot comes down to that, right? Imagine that it rotates this way so that when you move the whole foot forward The tip kind of drags it moves a bit back, right? So you don't have So you doesn't feel like that's a picture that you're moving forward So there's more dimension and more Perspective change as you move that foot forward as a for the slide then it brings it down here Okay, super cool. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you