 Alrighty, let's watch this here to sound. Okay, turn off the sound. The sound was a bit late for me like especially doing the steps here, but you are asking here an email the Thoughts about the shot in general. I think I look at this in general. I think there are a couple things where I don't It's like an extra layer of Spline past you did but everything feels a little bit spliny in terms of everything is very soft That's probably the main impression that I have now and then you have something where on that head turn like there's a lot of Flattening here into more into squishing here and then Going back to normal and even here flattening to Squishing in there. I think you squash and stretch is a bit too much in the head Don't forget that this is if you have, you know, however, you want to construct this here the skull is is Hard like this. I would not really influence the squash and stretch to me is here in the cheeks What a good face view there you go So to me is like this can go the jaw can go down and it can really bring those cheeks in and You can maybe through the temples a little bit, but I would be careful in keeping this volume here fairly the same Unless it's like a super fast move, but right now those head turns are not fast But they're not super cartoony and I see The squash and stretch versus feeling it I think that like during a lot of moves You just want to feel it let's get super cartoony then, you know, so you get like smear frames You get some some bonkers stuff there, but that's probably the biggest thing in terms of like little subtle Things you've added like even when he plays here if I look at the feet Or the knees there's constant Movement there watch that again and then look at the hands See that there's a there's a constant wing wing wing wing wing and I know he's playing But it just it adds a Repetitiveness on top of the smoothness versus playing Where you have like he's he's smashing buttons and then he moves over and then like like And then ooh this little I feel like there's a certain Tightness of the timing that went away in this in this past watch out here at those arms feel very IK because you got a lot of movement in the back here while the arms or the hands are stuck especially here Almost stuck into the space that feels very IK and this is a bit straight There's no arc and it kind of drifts a bit Even at the end or the drift down a bit It's my general thing this everything feels a bit drifty even here when he goes like I gotta play some more you Still have you watch his arms up and down like that feels soft But this is the moment of I gotta I gotta get in there and it's even like pose wise I would go if he's like this and then goes And then he goes I got the play I would move him forward and jaw forward Like you're like almost like legs can be can be tight like I gotta play gotta play gotta play And then he goes back into straights. You have a bit of broader back and forth, but it just yeah It just is an overall Softness even if you look at the toe of this I'm gonna take my drawing away, but look at that look at the section here of that boot We are is a little bit of that move up that feels soft Even though this is a moment of panic or even this the throw of this arm This feels a bit straight again. It feels very IK And then it's a bit like a moment of overextension almost And then we're kind of locked Keeping this arm up here, and then it starts to go down, but then this feels again very very IK there But also too slow Like this arm back this feels too slow the heck. I don't know. Maybe it's maybe I'm forgetting what the what the shot Looked like before but like right now watching this There's just an overall softness and then what also strikes me as new is when he lands here Now it looks like he got shot and he he has no more control over his legs It's just what happens this is suddenly not panicking what is a war zone where it's like Oh, I can't move my legs anymore, and then he moves them And even then those legs are soft how they go up But he is it's like the last moment of I gotta get a place and then now I'm pretending oh hi What job is blood tangent right at the end as they connect so this move up. I would also speed up pop up And even then again, they get very spliny. I don't know. That's my that's my overall feel And I don't I don't have you previous ones save I don't have that email anymore, but I got those little a little side to side side by side just comparison But that's my main the main feeling and then watch out. I think you can Is there so that some of the ice stuff could be tighter as well No, is he moving his eyes? No, he was part of that squash and stretch again. Oh, do I see this this one moves More than the other one. I mean you can do a even this how many frames is this? See you're you're almost easing in and then two three Almost four like this. I will keep this this he's playing and then something catches his peripheral view out there And then it would be a like a two-frame Like a quick dart and go oh into this Yeah, there's a little drift and that I over I Think your iris change. I will keep the iris Small so it's the oh Panic keep it small keep it small keep it small Then as he goes into this they can grow Through this invisible Moment through there like I think that also adds to the softness of Sunday morning and the eyes are in and out in terms of size And then this is the part where you look over this is walking here You look over and then up and then higher To the left where we're almost into camera and then it darts over as he does his head turn I think I would I would have a moment where he goes He sees her and even this could be you might even cut some frames out of this It's more like it's going on dart over Like this could be your big sudden jolt of energy of whoa What's going over there and then you can even if you hold that long If you keep is a bit more still you can have a big dart from here to here not up, but just sideways like oh Boy, she's coming and then through there Something this feels very unfocused where there's so much head movement But then the eyes seem to be doing a lot of stuff as well where I would have a very clear Like a quick look over and then back and even this one You're going one Kind of even this I would do a one frame With maybe a half blink That's three frames again almost looking to camera at that point. It's really just one to two frames. I Think that it just all adds to this softness And even this could have a blink because now it's just he's panicking his processing is a lot of stuff going on So you can absolutely have More blinks to give him that that frantic feel a pink pink pink pink pink and even this one I mean here's he's concentrated on Playing his game. Hold on. I'm trying to My hockey's there. It's for four times be here And he plays the game. Let's go back. I'm gonna do a cleaner zoom by Like that is a bit soft because he's not he's very concentrated so that would also have a fast blink So this also feels soft and it's opening Don't mind don't mind your half blinks there and this is your panic Or even that feels too slow That's that's my main impression is everything for some reason Unless it's me and it's probably just me and maybe it was before like that And I'm just seeing it and now reacting subjectively in a brand new way But right now there's an overall layer that was added that that makes everything soft Like the eye darts are too long by a frame or two the squash and stretch makes it wobbly The iris stuff and then you know the IK arms and just everything has just an overall softness that took away some of the punchy timing and the panic This oh my legs fell asleep from all the playing and I can't get into anything. I Don't know that doesn't make sense. I mean you are working on the shot You know better what you did in terms of the added changes But that would be my my general feel and you're asking here again Shots in general before you go into polish so maybe like the polish aspect would be like this to me There's nothing really wrong Besides that just fills off how they just they're just completely dead here That would be the bigger tweak But the rest would be for me polish just to tighten up that timing taking frames, you know out here and there and then tightening things like the Squash and stretch it I wouldn't really add that at that point there Anyway, hope that makes sense. Let me know if not we can always discuss via email All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you