 All right, let's play some flow first ding-a-ding-a-ding-a-ding Ding-a-ding-a-ding-a-ding It's good change I like it piece falls out and Ding-a-ding-a-ding-a-ding it that's cool. I like it. It's good stuff. I have to say in terms of Just some of the moves and some of the posing and things what I would say I Give me when he wakes up like this maybe not have I'm not sure about this It just seems again. It's still a bit of that that feeling of reaching for something and Getting into I like this like once you're here going into whoa into that drop and That we still see the face here. I like all of this. I just wanted to visit a different way of getting into this This it seems so deliberate that it's such a Even if you go like oh, but then then it will go back and relax a bit more and then into this might just be you know turning or maybe it's like a thing of pushing himself off Into that turn and then That arm comes up just as a turn and then you get into this just something so it's not so deliberately Straight, that's the only thing I would say subjectively. I'm not sure. I'm not sure about that. Is that a switch? Then that's cool, I like that I like that too, I think that's totally fine. We have that maybe This this might get potentially picky But if he will get up how I almost feel like it would hit this area of the head Somewhere from here to here and not back there. I don't know that may it might just be me But to me I would I would bring up that hand higher It would just be here you'd still have the same idea And then that is fine just watch out as you get into that we don't lose the pupils so much You might might have to turn the head a bit more So the concern here that I have is that it's straight on it's You got an okay silhouette through all of this here just watch out as you get into this how things pop and lock And getting in front of the face It's kind of clearing that up a bit and then you go watch out you got to take that PlayStation over there So it's not just give him some room and even here. I will probably turn more so basically For this I wonder if you could do something where it's a bigger change So I told them if you don't want to do it, but imagine Boom when this happens that clock was a bit this way and now lands here and Then it's oh And that makes it go over here, and I would also take this mouse and just bring it over here So then that thing rests here so that when you do this it's actually here and You have a bit of a Cleaner silhouettes that's Going to what's going to be the chin in my awesome drawing So you have something that's a bit more here So the nicest silhouette so you can also kind of show the curvature of the body Where's the straight on it's a fun face though, and then when you do this He would just be maybe a bit more here and just a bit more Profile to hold it, you know somewhere so that there's not this happening here or we cover so much Like imagine something like this, but just a bit lower and then the head would just be a bit more here Giving us a bit of a nice silhouette and then you have somewhere to go where you might start almost more profile Almost profile and through all that shake. He has a slight turn in why to end up here That would also be good so you're not stuck in this same rotation of where the body's pointing at throughout the whole thing Doing a little bit of movement and contrast And then same thing for this again You just you don't you don't get anything from the line of action of what the body is doing It's basically just this and then ends up being very twins See even that in three-quarter will give you even if it's still twin Just visually will give you a bit of a different silhouette of his arms and it could still be here You know, you can kind of almost lean back as he does this Into that you can see really that change in line of action and then He can kind of it would still be somewhat three-quarter and then get into into this I do like all of this. I don't understand. It's a pain to change all of this, but maybe he will get from this When he let's go then he gets maybe into that pose. I can see that it's still I mean it's a bit offset Concern about this straight on and then twinning aspect of it. That's all okay. I think that's cool That's cool. I Would just milk this moment more where it's kind of like pink and then you just have a bit of a Little shake and you could have kind of eyes widening maybe a one dart and then Just so you have I like that it's a one Two I think that second drop you exaggerate to make it a lot faster But it feels like the end is almost a bit rushed Okay, pink It's almost like it's very even one two three So I just kind of play with that timing a bit more and I think you can do this and you can almost keep the finger on on There and not leave it, you know, it's it's shaking And that's why he leaves the finger on to keep it silent down there And it's a continuous push. Maybe then you have permanent goes down Once that's when he brings up the hands and then it drops for just a faster faster moment there That's kind of that it's you're kind of some broader comments And I know some of these are fairly destructive in terms of, you know, overall body orientation changes stuff like that So totally up to you Oh, yeah, also the reason why I wanted to have that mouse here is because that is the thing and then you have it's fairly close And I just I would just keep it here in that way. This is it's nicely separated and I know I mentioned that he would have, you know slam the thing here, but It could still be somewhat room in between here and then you got that here Then the roll can still come back to where it is. Like when he lets go of the clock Pong, I could almost kind of slide over Well, it kind of depends how far you want to go Which what kind of changes you want to you want to have Not sure if you want just quick if you need this in the back Just because he ends up being there and I will keep things a as clean as you can into the silhouette I don't think it does you any favor to have those little things sticking out and then as you're, you know, as you continue Either changing the textures or some basic lighting But not make this so dark and start to kind of bleed into this and especially his hair into this darkness So having a nice color separation between foreground and background and that's kind of that. All right. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up You can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you