 Alrighty, let's play this in full first with sound I love you I've loved you since I met you I like this nice The only thing that Strikes me and I know you mentioned email that he is not really animated yet in terms of his reaction except for this You know head and face and and working on her as well. That's totally fine. I totally get it Even if you would animate this Being influenced by this and the head and blinks and all kinds of things you want to add That only I feel like I'm not super sure it is very subjective I'm not super sure about this pull back into a fist. It's awesome when you play backwards. I Wonder if it would be pulling the arm back Where then that corn is here and the hand but the hand would be just in a more relaxed pose, I mean it might even be Might even be this Maybe only this high Moving, you know, maybe the arm could even go all the way back here. You might not even see that That corner here, so this arm will come here and the hands would just be here or again a bit higher I will probably just go for that because I'm slightly This at this point looks like I'm just gonna Yeah So I would just probably Subjectively I feel like you want to turn that down and stay within something like this and I mean it could be like this with a slight Rotation this way so you can see maybe the thumb here. I mean they could be a contrast It's not just up, but it would be up and with a slight rotation over. I Personally, I would probably just do that, but I'm gonna leave that up to you Other than that this Very freaked out, but I like it. I have to say I like it. She seems very desperate there I've been careful with how low you want to go with those eyelids only because she seems pretty freaked out and Panicky and gets pretty like hmm. I'm not sure back to ah So these are very consistent and that one takes me out of it. So either you want to lower those lids So maybe there's not real a massive in between something between these two Throughout so this is lower and then you can go to this and then when you get back to this again It's a bit lower or you stay with this. I mean you go here You just go a bit higher so you can go back to this I would just that's the only thing that kind of strikes me at this point But I'm a big fan and I'm glad it incorporated this that she does start off She has a slight feel of being off balance still falling over. So I don't know if you want to Adjust slightly with the curvature of the spine and she can still she can still have all this I don't wonder if that with the head tilt might work better. There's something that feels as if the screen was off This helps stabilize the thing, but There's just something everything seems so this way and also careful if you do a head tilt that it's not just pivoting off of that joint Here is that you also have a slight move from the lower neck and then into that health head tilt It all subtle, but there's a slight feeling of this versus a bit of a nicer line through there But I would try Just to see what it is to have her a bit more You know, so it's a bit of a lean into the chair as she can still Have the head tilt it over. This just seems weirdly Maybe it's just me but it just feels visually like she's off balance, but I like to get like that. She goes from this to this I love you to me it really matches the tone of the voice the energy and Desperation almost I love you This might be a bit much once you spline this this might be slightly overanimated. Maybe We'll see also how far out she goes, but we'll see how that is once you spline it You might have to Reduce that so it's not super snappy unless you want to do it like that I'm something I'll just be careful about once you spline this those are big moves Within the one frame and you don't have you might have to add a couple frames in there depending on the speed. I Love you But it's great. I like this and then I like that she gets she grabs the hand and gets closer to him The recoils a bit and like this a lot that she then grabs it And again, I still think that even if that hand is a bit lower in a slightly different position that this would still work into that So it should still be okay I've loved you since I met you Yeah, I'm being so close Think that works It is so ever so slightly But to cut off I'm gonna have this a bit over there But this I would not have that ear here, and I know you're gonna animate this It's gonna change a bit of forming a bit of a tangent there Just curious how that's gonna look like once everything slightly animated, but it's that slight feeling of Being so heavy up here. You might have to zoom out the whole thing by maybe this much Just a tad give her a bit more room and him a bit more room potentially Might expose. I don't think it would expose the elbow Speaking of which you're asking about this. I don't know the answer to your question how you can See the frame by frame or you got an elbow pin. It's depending on the rig You might have to do something where you where you actually constrain the joint might have to go into FK mode I'm not sure because we do have tools for that and I'm gonna have to confess my ignorance when it comes to that But yeah, I think that's that's kind of it I've loved you since I met the only thing shape-wise. This still feels weird where I buy this but then There's so extended occurs if a camera is looking through this view here How pulled that neck is when you you'll be able to tell me I mean it looks like she has Heavy down there and a really long neck that I would reduce She just seems almost broken at this point. So maybe back off of that just a bit Eyeline seems good. I love you I've loved you since I met you Since I met you It's cool. You might even even though I'm telling you to turn it down here potential bit You might experiment by amping this up by maybe 10-15 percent I've loved you since I met you met you. I like that you go up and forward That little accent there. You might potentially go even further Further up and forward again not stretching the neck, but I'm moving her forward and I don't know just a little bit potentially But I like that that's in there. That's great And I like the little adjustments when she goes back that this happens through here Just be careful then once you get into this that it doesn't feels like there's this pivot here And then everything pivots off of that arm and then watch out Once you get into spline that you don't have things like this where elbows moving in the arm and the hand is not and notice It's just that moment in rough, but as you move forward. These are all those Ikea flags Be careful about that No wonder if at this point. Yeah, depending what you're gonna do with that arm Maybe bring that one a bit More to the left so that this would be I can clear on here. So then we have that elbow Ben in there Just a bit lower This would still work as a silhouette, but then that way you see a bit more of that arm Just right now. I just never just let weird connection of all those lines there I've loved you since I met you. I love you I want if through this right at the end there she goes This gets a bit now it's a neutral it's definitely not neutral But there's something where I wonder if this is a moment that you could push facially once you're going into details that moment of rejection and Panic and sadness Then into this where she goes. This is my last chance So maybe through there pushing the acting ideas here, but more just facially different back You know pushing expressions, but a change the change from here to here Was here she seems freaked out and then it's lower and then it seems like she's much less Freaked out unless you're doing lots of darts here where she's thinking what could I do now and that's my last chance So it does something to think about as you move forward just during that moment I think this could be cool a cool acting moment there So we kind of know more of what she's thinking It's kind of it's great update really really like it and that's it. Yeah, keep going. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you