 Ahoy hoy and welcome back to the channel. I'm dr. Sumerian not a real doctor and today We are going to do a reaction to an SCP animated channel, which a lot of people have been asking me to do this Today we're going to react to SCP for seven nine three Steel which I look this up and that is definitely how you pronounce that I'm gonna lead off with the proper credits this video that I'm reacting to is SCP 4793 steel by the rubber It is under a Creative Commons share like 3.0. Hey, since that's the wrong license because the article you're deriving from Yeah This video it says his credit say this video being derived from the article link is released under a Creative Commons share Like 3.0 license, but the original article is under a Creative Commons Attribution share like 3.0 license. You can't leave the attribution element out of your license declaration. It's necessary That's weird. I Don't know what that's a second channel. I've seen doing this Huh The original article because this is going to I mean I don't necessarily have to because I'm reacting to somebody else So technically there it's a it should be a series of links, but since they I'm just gonna do it anyway Who cares? SCP 4793 it was written by dyslexia on on the 15th of November 2019 You can find it at HTTP colon forward slash forward slash SCP dash wiki dot wiki dot com forward slash SCP dash 4793 And if you have problems remembering that link name don't worry. It's in the description So I read the whole article article is 16,000 where it's long roughly It's it's it's long and I didn't like it. I actually downvoted it But it's it's got a lot of it's got a lot of good things going for it It's just got also got a lot of bad things going for it. In fact the link I think works against it in that respect It's just there's just too much stuff that's it's just doesn't work for me basically anyway Too much stuff that doesn't work for me That's so that's that's just true of the SCP wiki in general. All right, let's get started Viewer discretion is advised an X06 jumps on shore she pushes her arm into its throat as it starts to claw at her She pulls a knife from her belt and stabs it three times in the neck before shoving it off. Hello, everybody I'm the rubber today. We bring you SCP foundation Euclid class object SCP 4793 SC I'm gonna pause periodically throughout the video to give you my comments, but otherwise I'll let the video play P4 793 is a male human dressed in a traditional armor of a Spartan hop drip dressed in a traditional armor You mean the that's sorry. That's a little tiny problem flight during the Golden Age of Greece 4793 appears to be in his late 20s and has been confirmed during the Golden I think you mean from the Golden Age of Greece since he is now in the current age term to be of Greek descent 4793 has demonstrated heightened cellular reproduction within his body if injured the fibroblast found within him will produce Collagen at an extremely accelerated rate usually closing the wound within two minutes. Oh They're just skipping it. So they're skipping over a lot of pseudoscience here It's not necessary to be honest with you and a single plot point that doesn't come up for the rest of the video or I should say rest of the story even on the actual article which is That when he heals if he doesn't receive additional injuries The the healing will just continue past the point where he's already healthy and cause like tumors and stuff to form That's left out of this it appears and probably for the best because it's not Important to the story at all and is sort of useless in the article 4793 was discovered by the foundation in an exploration to a mountain cave identified as SCP 4793 dash a in the south of Greece 4793 is the entity that emerged from the relief carving on 4793 a after the discovery 4793 after the Is incredibly plot important stuff that just happened that they just skipped over the chaos and surgency finds the guy and Are cartoonishly evil about it like one guy almost says I don't know if he says exactly this But something along the lines of I like hurting people. So let's hurt this guy Whilst he's going I don't want to hurt you. I'm you know, I'm I'm I'm a warrior But I don't want to be a warrior. Please don't make me hurt you and then he knocks them all unconscious immediately And the SCP foundation just so happens to be there at the time rolling my eyes at that particular plot point, but they just so happen to be there at the right time and Capture him by basically throwing their weapons down and having a negotiation The problem is is that what is it? I'm with the foundation. I'm here to we help people or something like that It's like a line of serious importance later on in the story. I don't know Well, maybe they're changing the story up enough that they won't need to have that for the callback later, but All right was transported to site 20 In the foundation director Jack Hargraves engaged in a series of program assessments and tests to explore the combat capabilities of 4793 with the hopes of adding him into MTF alpha 9 alpha 9 is the resurrection cannons version of Like a 7 I think it is but the old an MTF made up of SCPs Which it's funny because this guy is essentially a spiritual rewrite of able Okay And able was in a mega 7 and he the reason why a mega 7 doesn't exist anymore is because it killed everybody 4793 performed exceedingly well against Captain Holly shore While initially requiring motivation 4793 engaged Holly and started to cooperate in the exercise Especially when presented with a threat to Captain shore's life This is sort of skipped over but Hargraves is running like a weapons program here and he is also cartoonish leave a lot of the bad guys in this are just card like caricatures rather than characters Hargraves attaches explosives to them to him I should say Hargraves attaches explosives to 4793 during the first sparring session with Holly and And says he'll explode them if he doesn't fight back and 4793 being Sort of peaceful not wanting to fight Refuses at first Especially considering the fact that he can regenerate anyway until he realizes that the point of it isn't to hurt him It's to hurt Holly Hargraves has put the explosives in there so that there's a threat to Holly's life Which is again more caricature than character, but here we are Also, I don't think he's telling the truth about it. He's like I would never really do that, but Director Jack Hargraves has assigned captain shore to work with force Oh also at the bottom of this you can just barely tell I know that this is probably a character design choice But why can I see her midriff in her full body armor? Feels like Yeah, it feels like a bad choice the 93 on a weekly basis to establish a connection that can be utilized if needed On the 28th of December 2018 while 4793 and shore were doing their usual training a massive avian creature No, they just skipped over Hargraves weapons program just skipped over the whole thing like that that creates these monsters Okay, all right known as X 0 6 breached from its containment and broke into site 20 One of them tried to attack shore, but was shot by 4793 It then flew away through a ventilation shaft Shore and mtf up. By the way, this doesn't have to match up with the article I'm not saying it does they can do their own adaptations that makes sense. It's a good idea But if they're gonna do adaptations, I'm gonna criticize their story based on their story Not what they're pulling from the article. So they're like, I don't know man Cillian a left setting themselves up for a lot of problems later on in the story because there's a lot of important like character moments Then we're sent out to kill the creature You could have died. I can't let that happen 4793 insisted on following Shore descended the staircase and paused briefly at the door before opening it The bodies of several creatures similar to X 0 6 could be seen lying in front of it as well as several corpses clad in orange jumpsuits The hallway was clear, but a barricade made of chairs and tables sat at the end sure Okay, he did mention Epps up salon The mtf I can't remember what it is off the top of my head They're the ones who first of all recovered him and they're also the mtf That's currently like that Holly is part of because Holly's the first person that talked to him Zimmerman is a member of that mtf But he has just Apparated from nowhere Like they talked about the mtf Existing and how they're like going down here and that he's coming with them But they're only showing Holly and him and I know that this is probably an animation thing So I'm willing to give it a little bit of a pass, but if you're gonna do that why show Zimmerman at all I guess 4793 maybe has an important part to play later on and climb the barricade As they turn the corner hey, how come Zimmerman's midriff isn't showing behind makeshift barriers a mixture of d-class and security officers could be seen Pausing for a moment short turn to 4793 When we send the d-class up you're going with them What about you and Zimmerman shouldn't you wait for backup? What backup by the time another mtf shows up it'll be too late We need to blow the reactor But that's suicide This isn't about what I want anymore If I don't fight a lot more people are gonna get killed Then I'm coming with you No dying I can deal with watching you lose yourself. I can't you didn't you You didn't include that plot element Him losing himself is something you left out, which is fine, but you can't reference back so He doesn't remember who he is but he remembers like little bits and pieces from here and there And he doesn't like the person he was before but he remembers those bits and pieces when he gets into combat So what she's saying here is I don't want you to go down here and fight these things Because you might lose yourself and become that person you don't want to be there's a whole like a whole thing behind it That they don't include so this line doesn't make any sense Captain shore turned away and walked towards a security officer What's the fastest way out of here? The freight elevator the freight elevator. So there's only one Vader Well, why are at least one in the scene at the very least so unless they go somewhere else haven't you used it? We don't have cards for it if a d-class got one Yeah, I get it, but my card works. So we're getting out of here now A cheer went up from the assembled personnel A ding was heard and the freight elevator doors opened The crowd of d-class pushed inside accompanied by several security officers Get as far from this site as you can. It's going to get hot in here soon The doors closed leaving only the mtf 15 d-class an scp 4793 in the block Several wait, they're waiting. So there is just one elevator minutes past as the cable continued to reverberate Several of the d-class began to fidget The cable snapped and the elevator plummeted down the shaft After a hold on i'm gonna say this again I say this a lot and i'm really starting to like it's really starting to build up If there's only one elevator in this scene I mean, maybe they go somewhere else. Maybe that'll work They have to really like move locations so they can't just go down the hall There has to be another elevator the elevator is broken. It will not work anymore. You cut the cable on an elevator It's that's it. It's done a few seconds x06s begin to flood the room attacking from the elevator shaft in the sides The d-class and mtf members opened spot important points with the elevator has come becomes important higher Shore fires at several x06 does and turns on another when her gun emits a click She drew her handgun and started moving back towards the door to the office Four x06 crawlers begin to move towards her She terminated two of them before tripping on an unknown obstacle holly An x06 jumped on shore And she pushed her arm into its throat as it started to claw at her She pulled a knife from her belt and stabbed it three times in the neck before shoving it off An unknown force dragged shore backward Shore was pulled closer to the office door. It's me stop fighting. Hold on. Hold on. There's so many things here First of all, they have abandoned the narrative conceit from the actual article itself, but kept a lot of the content The narrative conceit is is that you're this part of the video or this part of the story is being viewed from holly's Sorry holly's body camera So if you if you abandon that part of the conceit, then I don't know why she's tripping over an unknown object The idea is that you know, she she's going backwards and trips over something She can't see what it is the viewer can't see what it is because it's part of the body camera Right, so it's an unknown object, but in this version of the story. It's not unknown. You showed me what it was It was a rock Uh Wait, hold on. Let's let's play that again. It's pulled closer to the office door. It's me stop fighting Okay, so they left out the part where she's flailing and trying to stop whatever's pulling her back because she doesn't know what it is Uh, which Sets up. It's me stop fighting. It's me stop fighting. Okay Ace and I are gonna blow the reactor You won't make it there Oh, also Zimmerman's name is ace in case you didn't know that's from the article, but okay The hand of an xo62 reached up and grabbed onto the leg of a d-class personnel He looked down at it let out a swear and was pulled off his feet into the elevator shaft Zimmerman dove and grabbed his hand He managed to hold the personnel for a few seconds before being dragged into the shaft himself So Zimmerman wasn't important the plot and could have been left out entire war 793 grabbed shore and pulled her into the office Slamming the door behind them You can't save them. I have to kill all of these damn things No, Holly. Remember the first thing you said to me No, we're the foundation. We keep people safe They did They called back to a thing that they didn't show to a line that they don't have in their version of the story Oh my god Oh, wow, that's that's uh, wow. Okay Okay, here's people keep them safe. I'm sorry. That's 4793 pushed Holly and she stumbled into the elevator what elevator What the elevator's broken You went into an office and then you what come back out. It's the same hallway in the same elevator. It's broken Now it's starting to fall apart. I knew it would fall apart right around now and here it is Hold her. Don't let her out Several d-class grabbed captain shore and held her scp 4793 turned back to look at captain shore as the elevator doors closed No I'm sorry. Sorry that line reading was great. I mean the the the voice actress doing his best with what he's got here But that no, I mean I don't know. Can you deliver it? I guess but still 4793 was sitting against a wall with his sword and shield sitting to the side He picked up a camera mounted on a combat helmet Hey, Holly. I hope this message gets to you somehow It's been about two hours. Okay, hold on Are they implying that he threw Holly into the elevator and then sat down against a wall for two hours? I mean It feels very much like that's what they're implying I mean there could have been stuff that happened in between but they make absolutely zero indication that anything happened between He's just sitting and waiting for two hours Or since I last saw you I hope it isn't the last I don't know what to say So which by the way during that two hours on the actual article, there's a whole bunch of plot that happens That's again gonna be relevant later And it's starting to look like they're gonna call back through it It doesn't call back to a thing that didn't happen in their version of the story But let's say so little time I was born to a farmer and grew into a warrior I battled Aries to a standstill I won wars single-handedly Then I met my wife We were set to claim the world Two immortals who wanted to bring a chaotic world some semblance of peace And then Aries killed her because he was in love with 4793 by the way 479 there's a whole backstory to that too The the wife is from the Scottish Highlands She came down there to say hello, I guess and fought and fight the greatest fighter in the world and Did so well that he fell in love with her because apparently combats all this guy cares about But prior to that the guy had also fought Aries to a standstill and Aries fell in love with him. So okay I lost everything And now I'm here alone a drift a stranger surrounded by even stranger things But within you I see the spark I saw in her A burning desire to make the world better It makes me want to be better And I don't know if you feel the same or whether I'll get out of here But I will fight for you die if I have to I love you Suddenly a voice came from above where 4793 was sitting Welcome androclies. Did you know there's another androclies? A roman but I digress he plucked the thorn out of a lion's paw Years later when he was thrown into the arena by a cruel Caesar The lion recognized him and spared his life Why are you telling me this? I am the lion you saved my father. So I will grant you this boon you saved my father Okay, so there's a whole bunch of plot that happened in that two hours that they skipped over and now they're they're calling back to it um Hargrave Hargrave created these things they consider hargrave their father He runs into hargrave While he's fighting his way through the site and then spares his life. It's supposed to be this important moment This is important character moment, which they've completely ignored Where he forgives someone and lets them live And then these guys are supposed to be like and because of that We're letting you leave because they consider him their father. So letting hargraves are giving having mercy to hargrave earns their respect Except they didn't include that so this whole story doesn't mean anything Leave now and none of us will harm you I know you I'm really bothered by this because like They could have created a consistent and coherent narrative, but everything in this is like It's incoherent. It's a bunch of stuff strung together It's a bunch of lines pulled directly from the article in certain places and then changed in other places And parts are left out with no concern for how it affects the overall story You have a loved one up above and it's the number one search return for scp. So Great, I guess this is what scp has become on youtube What so you can kill everyone like not every scp article is great by the way In fact, like I said, I downloaded this one and I think it has some serious flaws, but like This is much worse This takes the good this like leaves out a lot of the good stuff like the callbacks are fun Right, like you say a thing and then later in the story that thing comes back and you're like, aha Your brain has that aha moment, but this leaves those out completely And just focuses on but still does the payoff moments without setting them up Kill my short-sighted brother. We don't wish to kill anyone As our father proclaimed we will roam the earth seeking and capturing the anomalous Why did you call me brother? Our father used your blood to create us It holds the power that allows us to multiply with such ease to grow as fast as we do We are brothers in everything but name I can't let you leave here not after seeing this How will you stop me by sacrificing yourself by losing yourself bit by bit as you track us all Except the losing you like yeah sacrificing yourself is one thing that part you can leave that in because that's just Like oh, they were deadly. We'll kill you But the losing yourself bit by bit part you didn't cover that in your version of the story He's not gonna lose himself Because he's not like worried about gate regaining all of his memories and turning into the monster warrior guy anymore scp 4793 And removed a section of so this is at the store bar with a piece of concrete. This is in the story They did it again read at the end Instantly they forgot where they were in the scene. Okay, so this is something that hasn't even been covered yet 4793 when he touches things that could be Considered it's it's hard to explain exactly what it is But considered weapons or armor turns it into a version of a weapon or armor that you can use like a sword or a shield Or a breastplate and so on So he's reaching into the wall and grabbing the sword, right? But and we're gonna scroll back real quick here. Yeah, here we go Yeah, see this he already has a sword in a shield. He didn't need to This is the same scene nothing is changed. So in this scene he's sitting here He records this message and then he looks up and has this conversation with the creature And then the creature comes down and he reaches into the wall and grabs a new sword There's no And removed a section of rebar with a piece of concrete at the end Instantly it transformed into a concrete great sword I know who I am. I am androcles beloved of aries warrior of greece But I am also androcles the protector and friend I know who I am and nothing will change this The central facility of site 20 was destroyed in a nuclear explosion of unknown magnitude In the reactor room no trace of scp 4793 was discovered So and this is a problem with uh, both the article and with the video here So i'm not going to blame it on necessarily just the video, but um, so the explosion is enough to Completely destroy 4793 but apparently not the camera on his head I don't know how that works nor the cameras of several other Uh individuals, but also it's enough to kill off all of the entities inside the site as well It makes no sense actually I mean they could have made it make sense, but just saying that It transmitted the images while they were being recorded in like a live stream sort of situation But they don't they just find the recordings afterwards somehow surviving A nuclear explosion and by the way, it's a nuclear reactor. Let me tell you something about nuclear reactors They're designed not to explode Like and even when they do explode the problem is mostly fire and or radiation spread not The kind of explosion we're talking about where they like incinerate and or, um, what's the word? Actually incinerate is pretty good vaporize Where they vaporize things like you're not going to get that out of a nuclear reactor even if you Know what you're doing and he didn't I don't know how the explosion happens either in the story on the article or in this video So anyway, that's it. I I'm starting to see some of the major problems with these things, but like they could be fixed It's just just bad writing or I should say bad adaptation If the well something bad it needs to be tightened up considerably This is not a finished product script. This is the script for this video that they put out Does not feel finished and it does not feel like it has been Like worked on in any serious way and I am sorry to whoever wrote it and whoever did the adaptation But you need to do a better job if you're going to call back to a thing that had like You don't have to stick to the article But adapt the story Oh man, just adapt the story properly Now, uh, I'm going to say this is separate from that I know a lot of these animation channels are having problems with Art tracing and just a straight-up art theft of scp content Without the realization that scp content is also even if it's art is also under creative comments share alike attribution 3.0 license so If you see something in this video from their video That is not either not credited properly on their video or just straight up was stolen Let me know so that I can at least credit you properly in my video and uh, my apologies, but Jesus Thank you very much for watching If you enjoyed the video and you would like to see more of this kind of content Let me know in the comments down below and hit the subscribe button And the notification bell next to that so you're notified when I upload new videos and then head on over to patreon.com For slash D samarian and pledge at any level like everybody here on the screen already has including Dr. J redacted and synderiki who have both pledged at a hundred dollars It's nice to know that i'm not alone out here and I will see you all again on tuesday