 All righty, there's sound on this let's watch this in full go to sleep Please please please go to sleep go to sleep Now the fact that we have sounds I Think it could be also fun to have a little bit of a That bottle ending hanging something in there just because it's sometimes it's off to have Some sound but then some foley or something is missing other than that I Think there's some good stuff in there Definitely love all of this here watch out. It feels sometimes a bit IK this jointed with That much moving up there, but then the wrist doesn't go up with it and then he suddenly goes up separately and Then we have a lot of movement again, but then nothing's happening. So watch out IK arm stuff Or even this like popping over one frame and it kind of almost locking to it Little things like that. It'd be kind of awesome to if like one frame before this pops open Well, it's not like he would I mean I guess he would bring down the handle to then open it But it's was more like a pop out. I'm breaking through it. I'll take it back. No handle animation since he's breaking in there my My thing would be actually watch out. You have an intersection of that handle not that you would see this in real time But please please please like he there are two ways to go about it I don't think this is wrong that he is talking to the baby But then But then talks the other Direction because he's so desperate at the same time there could also be an argument made that he will go he will go This and then the please please please really is leaning towards The baby holding on to this maybe You know like sliding down his hands like please holding on to this and almost shaking the thing and Say, please go to sleep. It's really pleading towards the baby But at the same time again, I see that please please go to sleep like the Desperation would go like just you know anybody like he's just talking almost to himself I wonder if they could be a middle line where you do this Please please please please please and he does that as he falls, you know towards the baby and then turns around That's probably my Biggest comment watching this Now for this Again, not that there's anything wrong with it. Let's want to explore options at this point I mean, I know we're pretty far and these are destructive notes but just as a Was you're mentioning here any and all feedback will do so that's why Mornings if he goes go to sleep go to sleep Like could this be like he he tried already so many things and he's tired where you start at that height Whoa, hold on And instead of Going up which I know kind of matches the energy and the sound of the voice It's more like imagine he starts here and goes go to sleep like he's tired like a Go to sleep like he's done with this whole day And then he goes out and even this Such a violent closing is so done with this that's add to me the other thing too is like It's such a forceful slam that you could Potentially already start having a bit more of a really tired angry type of Slam in there from a technical point of view watch out your spacing like as the heck goes up Goes up and it kind of locks there and then suddenly goes through the right So there's some spacing throughout that I would that I would tweak but to me generally I want to make sure that I throw out a bunch of ideas that you can obviously 100% ignore or you know Incorporate 5% but to me feels like he is he's so done with this that he would start at the top slide down Like I said here He would start here and go go to sleep and then go And even then I mean you can go how does he enter? All right, so he enters really tall. So what if he starts here and goes go to sleep, right? He starts here goes down and even the closing of this is him So he was here. He's even lower like he turns around and he's he's just hunched over You know and it's him his hunching over and leaving is What makes this close like imagine you're like this But then you turn around and you hunch over it will pull that arm over and that's what it will close it It's like he's almost collapsing. So I don't to me like in my head. I'm thinking all right He's tired tired tired. He has no more energy plan. He enters like that's how I'm visualizing this So he's tall goes lower exits even lower so that like memory wise we have The head and everything around here, but then he enters in this is big contrast of no, no, no I'm tall again Now the other thing too is totally Destroying the shop, but imagine instead of coming out here and holding on to this because this to me is almost like a Someone stole the baby kind of like where is it? Where's the where's the person blah blah versus someone who is just so tired of this Where could it be and I know this is super destructive to weirdest critique I've given probably But I'm thinking he starts here gets lower low and lower and then reenters tall Fists here one leg out No shoulders up and that's like he's so angry tired But stiff that he just opens it all like this and as he's like that that foot boom Comes down where he ends up being around here, and then it's like a gradual imagine like foot Falling on his knees Hunching over hands here, but please please be like it is this gradual breakdown towards the baby So basically kind of like that, but again towards the baby Other than that And the reason why I'm also mentioning this is you know just explain my where my thought processes when you listen to the voice Please please please go to sleep There's definitely energy to it, but in my mind it's like there's so much energy expenditure on on Breaking into this and all of this like he would be out of breath But it doesn't quite sound like it. I know I'm very picky about Just the actions on screen matching the energy level of the audio like is that person inhaling or not? Does it feel like they're out of breath does it feel like they just did this big action? That's why I'm wondering would it fit better instead of this ginomas entrance to just open it BOOM cartoony like with like, you know two frames Just the leg and then the leg snapping back down and then he would Fall in his knees and break down and do all of this here, you know You can also imagine he was standing here leg out and then Drops and as he drops turns around into this pose You know, it doesn't have to be a crazy redo But anyway, I know these are these are destructive thoughts Also if you listen to that sound It's almost like an opening and in the cracking Like it's almost like he would hold on to this and then collapse on his knees and pull out the handle But I would also add some more sound effects here Just because it doesn't match either like the intensity and the hitting of the wall. There's a sound missing That's probably again why I'm Reacting to something where like I'm not sure this fits, but it could just be you just add sound effects So make this a bit sharper and then you're totally fine Please please Yeah, I know I feel like I wanted to throw out just a couple more ideas Please please was other than that to me It's more technical like how this goes down this feels even there's a there's a thumb post change I would tweak into a bigger, you know, it might be even like a bigger round issue near of the of the wrist Roundation is that a word? But changing this so that it doesn't just go IK arm down This has a better feel there's a slight rotation in the wrist But then you got some Wobbly spacing in the knees that to me feel as feels more like chatter Then trying to put weight on this and the knees buckle under the weight and that's why it drops there So I don't that's that was intention, but I see more wobble spacing there Please please go to sleep. I do like when you have this drop here. Please go to sleep I can see that matching the sound. Please go to sleep. Please go to sleep. Yeah, that's that's definitely fine The other thing too is that I will probably it's pretend we're keeping all of this You're going down in one axis and then you come fairly straight up the same way And I think you can afford a little bit of this Instead of so straight you can have a little bit of a twist in the head and then when he comes back up with either Twist this way or even further away. You know like magic. He doesn't want to deal with the baby anymore and on the way up He turns even more away from this and we're a bit more Profile three-quarter versus three-quarter just to give this more complexity in all axis. So it's not just down and up Yeah, that's that's mainly that I think the main impression that I had when I watch this for the first time was that Okay, and then The energy and the animation all that it's just at a higher level than what's going on audio wise That's probably the very first impression that I had and that's why I went off tangent here with Different ideas and stuff, but I don't let me know then what you think again. You said any and all feedback will do So you you know I'm you can chat this obviously not part of the submission chat And you can let me know like no, no, no, you want more technical notes and no changes Do you what do you want to incorporate? From these ideas if anything 1% and then we can go from there. Alrighty. Thanks. All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you