 All right, a new version here always fun to watch her sound I can please do the house salad. Yeah, you got it And then I do a piece of bread on the bottom and on the top, please Okay, maybe maybe just throw in a piece of meat in the middle with with a bit with some cheese on it Yeah, why not so cheeseburger? No, I said how solid Hi just on the on the audio I have Do a piece of bread on the bottom and it feels like it switches channels As in it goes suddenly I hear it in my left ear from Headphones and then right and then suddenly in the middle and it's only almost two tracks over laid slight delay I don't know if you could check on your ends. There's something a bit. There's some cheese on it. Yeah There's some cheese on it Look there's some cheese on it like that's to me the direction of the sound So so let's watch out for that. Yeah, why not so cheeseburger biggest thing in terms of just props I said how solid? It feels a bit soft. I'm not sure I'll sell it. I Think given the stylization of everything this could easily have a salad But even more stylized hang time drop I'll sell it Especially at the end it feels kind of slows down. What's up for that? So in your email here What's the your facial expressions? Let me bring down the audio a little bit here. I I think the biggest thing was I think that expression when he says here cheeseburger I'm not sure this is now we're getting into subjective territory. He's bigger. I'm not sure if I will go that big It's like to me like he's all relaxed and then cheeseburger imagine there's no And again, this is subjective and I'm getting into into destructive notes because like for me I would take that out and everything is just Not even like in a big like take your head accent Like imagine just you know visually in your head imagine Take out all the body animation Take out the head animation. Well, I had to take it out But reduce it about like 75% and it's mostly in here I know to me it feels like a moment of No, and then he goes into that there's something that feels too big overact the a bit and again very subjective cheeseburger If you do it if you want to keep it obviously you can do what you want to do Hey, I would have a bit of a grouping pose in this it feels like That risk or at least the fingers could be a bit more out like that. I was a bit aligned That form a little bit. I feel like that feels a bit broken Can't group those fingers a bit and then on that I would You could easily crunch them up a little bit also into that kind of territory a bit less than this No, I said and then relax again. How solid Now let's go back. I could have pleased with the house. I I could have pleased with the house. I I could have pleased with the I think I will go a bit bigger with the With the expressions on the mouth. I could have Like hi, can I please like just a bit bigger? Can I please do the house? Yeah, you got it. And I'm gonna piece of bread on the bottom and on the top And for me, it's the reasoning would be Even though you might think he is a bit, you know, shy and everything and you want almost keep everything small To me, it's almost like he would mask it and overcompensate. But hi I don't know. There's something that might be worth exploring going big and then as you progress He relaxes more and more and there's they're not as big on the bottom and on the top But he it's okay like for a big accent for big contrast in moments, okay? Okay, maybe maybe just throw in a piece of meat in the middle with with a bit with some cheese on it Yeah, why not? That's fine here. So cheese gets very confident there I could have pleased with the house. Maybe it's just for me the high in the please. I could have pleased if they kind of they kind of Disappear in those shapes. Can I please do the house salad? Yeah, you got it. And I'm I can please do the house salad. Yeah That's okay. They're Careful pupils are so tiny to get kind of lost. I'll either bring them back and or make them a bit bigger You got it. And then I do And then Careful about bottom mechanics like this here when he goes and it's been a while So apologize if I if that was already there that I never mentioned anything or see that but that big jolt From here to there The couple things like in the voice and then it feels very he just kisses and um It doesn't feel like in the voice that he's moving this big body back if that makes sense but it and then So to me, that's a bit of a and it's not uncommon. You see this in TV and movies Frequently actually where it's like there's a character in a sound booth doing the voice in and the animation is Sometimes too active then the compared to the voice performance. There's no strain in this So that's just more for me a picky side, but um, it's almost like I would just reduce that Oh, I don't piece of bread and just kind of almost flow from this With a slight pause into that Again, if that was already in your previous version, I apologize. I honestly can't remember And then and I should bring it up, but you know that right now. That's what I'm seeing here So as always for free to filter all my notes and do whatever you need to do there, but That feels also be like this feels like it's really freaking out and again be losing the pupils Are is there gonna make that a bit bigger? I took piece of bread on the bottom But I think I would reduce the shock and just go into that again with losing Not here red on the bottom and on the top, please and that's all cute especially with that Little wobble. Okay. Maybe maybe Then I think okay. Maybe maybe throw I don't think it's a bit too cartoony You know like maybe but maybe that's just me. Maybe I'm leaning more towards naturalism there, but I don't know That's a subjective thing Definitely works into the shapes. What are you doing this cute babies throw in a piece of meat With with a bit with some cheese on it This again, I'm not That corporate to the voice to meet in the middle Not that he can't be that With that kind of voice, but again, I will probably reduce that like 20% just not go out Go crazy there and a piece of meat in the middle with with a bit Because this seems like very hard determinant. I don't like I feel like at that moment he is still Figuring things out finding his way into convincing Self and all that in the middle with that with a bit with some cheese like more like this I really like that area through there with a bit with some cheese and all this yeah, that to me seems more In character like and then he goes, you know, and then he figured it out and then he goes into this That's great cheeseburger. Like I said, that feels to me a bit big. No, I said how solid Cheeseburger No, I said it's only a thing here how solid I think it's the fluidness of the paper and the arms and shoulders How it just kind of goes well very soft it's To me I would add a little bit more I won't say harsher moves, but Something a bit more stop and go because now he's back to being up found me out I let my guard down and back to being slightly nervous. I know he's all defeated and stuff But to me it's I see this progression where it's hey, can I can I order this connect kind of do this and then yeah? Yeah, yeah, I figured this out. Oh, no, if I'm young and it's back into that mode But that whole ending here. I said how solid It's all rare. It's soft. I don't know that's again very subjective but how solid to me It would be something where it's how solid bit a harsher stop a bit of a harsher stop on this and not have that soft grip and soft elbow drop there and Even here could be boom like drop hold quick look, so it's not all One big arc Subjectively, I don't get any we're getting into different territory there. It's not like a spacing issue or something But it's mostly that Yeah, I'll leave it at that. I want to make sure that I'm not going too deep and overriding things where you were again the direction that you don't want to go so that will be my Feedback and then you're saying here next time we'll work on lip-sync and we'll add a waiter and stuff like that So let me know what you think But there's no switch direction you want to go obviously you can do whatever you want to do That is your shot and that is that all right. 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