 So looking at your email you are saying props will be replaced with higher-grade ones in the future past Boogie of flowers and a heart-shaped box of chocolate. All right, sounds like a plan It's like ginormous piece of broccoli. I love it Cauliflower though, right? It would be cauliflower So I like this I don't think I do that I do do that. It's great My only comment will be and this is up to you if you want to do that or not Then a thing with dialogue is usually kind of a waist up So I'm glad it's a bit of a different framing but the other thing that frequently happens is that People are kind of stuck in in place now I'm not saying that you just add movement for movement sake, but you can add steps to kind of reflect her Her state like her how she changes. So by that, I mean what if She is already Taking a step back. So she's already kind of moving backwards here and then finishing a step through there That's all cute and maybe you would have to start her Slightly here ish So that way she takes steps forward that doesn't look like she's just coming straight to camera So perspective wise, it would be kind of weird to see that. So you would have a little bit more movements Left to right. So she comes forward stops on that That way she does this full stop here and you do exactly what you do here They go, okay. Well, what's going on with me and then And then on this you take a tiny step back So that visually cameras here, right? She's here She comes forward a bit stops and then maybe goes back this way or maybe back away from us It's not exactly back the same spot Unless it's a minimal that it doesn't quite matter Which is probably the case but that to me will be will be an interesting just change of it. She's a bit more Casual You know, she might be waiting for the date or a cab or something but still she could stake She could take one or two steps backwards Stop on this, right? Boom like that with that move. That's your last step forward. Like this is kind of a neat look Big weight shift there, but you can kind of imagine she takes she starts here Finishes exactly to this Is that great look? It's really great. I really like it and then here they'll take a little step back And then here you can decide how far you want to push this where she potentially might get more freaked out So maybe raising the shoulders a little bit for more tension bringing that arm up Box chocolate a bit more this a little bit tighter grip and then the bouquet of flowers will be here So just just a bit more tension potentially and how far you want to push this But I think this could be interesting as of now the body Scrubbed through there is pretty similar That's my main impression if I had to say one post that one post one comment is that it's all very similar in terms of posture except, you know the changes here are minimal see-kerf changes, but I think the steps forward and back and a bit of more tension here always experiment with Do that where she's unsure and then maybe here a bit more tense brings it up a bit more more towards us then And then oh I do that that realization you would then drop the shoulders more drop this drop this drop that That could also be something where she was oh no, and that is kind of a I was a relaxation of the body But it's good. That would be the biggest gift of oh crap So that is probably it I do like that moment of thought there. He'll keep alive there And I love this little finger detail I think that could be okay where Maybe it would be the second version That she gets more insecure, and that's why she brings it up closer to the tiger tiger with the thumb Everything's just kind of tighter and closer not trying to hide it kind of like what did I do and then the opening of oh, man I did it. I wonder if you need this car This is super picky. I hear things maybe in the back this guy I hear this would just be a very loud sound So I don't know this could be something I mean you can see I don't know how props you're gonna put in there and you know different cars or just leave it at that just as Include as indication of where she is that could be fine, too. Maybe that's up. That's just enough I'm just being picky on sound But that's about it. It's a great start. Yeah, I'll take you going Actually one more thing sorry just because I'm stopping this I know it's a detailed thing But as you move forward just watch out that we have Posing on those eyes. It's always kind of you drag it I box over there. That's gonna be okay It's gonna be very buried. So I'm gonna start animating I box is separately. So it's one over It's not so cut off. It's a bit more in line with this And then it's kind of you how cross-eyed you want her to be the cliche thing that I see a lot of movies is to have women to be Be a bit more cross-eyed Just to make them maybe cute or I don't know slightly innocence To you how far you want to go It's even here So it's kind of do you how far you want to go All right, all right, this is really it. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you