 All ready so Let's play this Good stuff. Um, I am reading through your email and you are mentioning a couple poses 72 and 19 19 and then 72 You talk about the face. I think what kind of I Somewhat agree. This is for sure cute. This I'm not a massive fan about this is mouth shape And I'm not sure if that's what you're reacting to but this gives this is a weird shape and I think I think it's okay to go from a Front view to a profile. I think it's this also helps with the silhouettes the sea curve Reversals and all kinds of stuff. I think it's important to have visual contrast. So it's not always front on But when you go up here, she could also puff her cheeks open the mouth There's going to be in a different mouth shape eyes. She might be wide-eyed because it's Potentially a lot of effort. I think once you go in there, it's going to be a lot better And when I say go in there meaning adding the facial work For those moments there, I don't mind. I think it's a good change from front to side Back to front. I think that's not too bad. So I wouldn't be too worried About that because I'm not sure if in your email You're implying that you just want to keep her always in the front I don't think so. You're just asking how you can make her side view shape a bit cuter To me my reaction is this I'm just not a fan of this this mouth shape So I think once you have life in there, it's going to be a lot better Now you also talk about the camera potentially being handheld, I'm not sure I will I will keep this pretty Pretty static with just the tilt and not go to handheld here But speaking of camera, this feels like you are also translating Or maybe the pivot is in a strange position. Hold on Still coughing Yeah, I don't know this feels like the camera is here and then the pivot is here and it's kind of rotating We're getting going up but also closer to the character. I'm not sure what's going on here So I would just make sure that once you're in this position This pivot off of you know, that's your camera very old-school camera You're looking through here and your pivot and you're just pivoting up I mean you can also just pivot in the middle doesn't have to be super mechanically accurate But I will stick to rotations only not have any translates because given the perspective change here I am suspecting a translate change as well. You could have a slight TY translate up in Y on top of a pivot tilt up a little bit If you don't want her to be so from below and and massive and imposing, but maybe that's also the point So for now, I would stick to just the pivot In general the movement I saw sir, you're also talking about IK FK matching stuff like that. That's totally fine and And then you talk about some pops in the arms which I'm seeing as well I am fully on board with what you're saying So my impressions if I just ignore everything you're saying And I'm gonna ignore this. I'm just gonna look at what are you showing in this animation? There are a couple things a Watch out how These guys by guys. I mean her arms her arms just go up. They're very twins Timing is pretty much the same and the posing is the same Then that's cool. I like this and You said you added the pause there you added some frames It's cool, I would just once you're fine-tuning this You can potentially even stabilize the head even bit more and add some more but wiggle just to give more of a Pam alright, I'm gonna just and I'm gonna get up Just because this is also any reaction to this I Just have I watched this and all I'm seeing is a is a human That sounds super weird an adult an adult doing this and maybe Not saying that you have to look at animated movies for reference because they've gone through the Curcature parts, you know the stylization of it But still for inspiration. I would really look at Boss, baby just because it's the most recent with the baby There's some really really interesting movement there Obviously not when he's in full on adult mode, but there's some more baby moments in there I Think Jack Jack would just be too too young for an Incredibles reference But there's just something about Even this as she goes over there I would have her lean a bit more over this way So she goes whoa and then over there just have you a bit more contrast of baby movements with adults talk I know we talked about that before and you have some of you have some ideas about that But I would just kind of keep that in mind of it was this is super successful The locking of legs is definitely something that babies do and a bit of a wiggle there That's all great. That to me is such a great baby moment But then when she gets up here right this This hunching over with hands here and all of that is so adult so if you can make this Not say messier, but maybe the wipes are much more extreme where her arms go all the way out to here So it's much more You know, it's just not as coordinated and clean You know something like that that goes full on just really broad moves of cleaning her knees Even though her knees are technically not dirty That will be better and then when you get up through here Be mindful to not have just the one axis back rotation But you can have a little bit of over than to the side again when you go up here She might be this is too much, but you know in a In a move like this where she's slightly off-balance and then when she gets to this She gets back into a bit more stabilized posture again It doesn't have to be as far back as I just drew it But I would highly recommend to infuse the shot with more elements like this This feels full on like a baby. So moments like this. Whoa rebalance then go down Okay, now up and then whoa, but that is going to be a big deal for a baby This moment and especially this Going up like that to you know sway a little bit and then regain balance So that would be my biggest impression about this so far I think it's going to be very cute with the face shapes I think I wouldn't worry too much about the profile view to me. She's mostly this locked There I say commander in chief face depending on if you get that reference Other than that the foot stuff is cool. That's already working really well I'll be very careful about the camera and the translate is also evident in how this part here We can see how closer we get to the baby. So I think that shows us as well So if if you prefer this this view in terms of how close the baby is to the camera Then I would start here and then tilt down if you like this view then stay here and just tilt up that makes sense Alrighty, so I would say keep going and Like you said locks and matches stuff we can work on that Later because you want to block out the first thing the whole thing first So that we don't have to go into detail and then suddenly you have to make bigger changes So going through email. I agree with all of your steps and your plans. I'm looking at this right now so yeah, let me know what you think and Because I don't want to tell you to add more of the unstable baby stuff if you if you prefer to have it more of an adult thing and now we talk again we talked about that before but I'm just gonna give you always my first impressions and then you can always Overwrite it of course because it is your shot after all Alrighty, thank you All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you