 All right, let's check this out. You are riding here. I finally re-blocked my first shot So let's check this out Yeah, it's been a while so it's kind of neat to see this with you know Somewhat fresh eyes and my impression right now is that There's almost too much camera movement, but there's something where we feel almost too high There's a lot of epic space here where you can bring it a bit lower And I think it's almost like you have too much touching To go, you know where you twist your camera around you start this angle And then you end up in this where that could be reduced a little bit. So it's overall a bit too much on the camera Even the handheld in terms of the up and down feels a bit R or X It's a bit much. There's something about toning it down and In terms of the animation it feels like the beginning could be stronger in terms of A act initial start-off is very Almost default except for this hand. It feels like almost like a default pose same thing with With this little guy and then you get into a lower position, but then nothing happens here and then it's the jump off and Then the jump off doesn't have any extended legs like your feet are here So by this frame There would still be back there and you would have to have to have a full extension push off for a jump But what I mean is that like at the beginning it could be something where Potentially the dragon they could be higher. It could be a higher position. There's some that wings are out. Maybe it's just having Like it's standing on its back legs almost and doing something and then Comes down into position like this lands And after that, there's a slight roar up I think they're posturing basically and then when he goes down ready for the jump. It's just a more exaggerated Arms back maybe maybe his ass is up and he has like a really low head to really get into a Really a squash to get ready for then a push-off and the contact wise This guy seems so much bigger than him or her So that when they contact I'm not quite buying that the dinosaur can push them You can push them back up. It's almost like this frame would end up with the dinosaur actually, you know almost leaning back tail curled in You know, the head could still be up here in fact the draw it will be helpful But like it's just it's a move back and then the dragon continues to push this way meaning you're destroying But that dragon home I go in here from here to here the chest doesn't do anything and that would continue Continue with that so that actually You know the dragon shoulder will be here and it really pushes Forward like about because that impact the the legs kind of kick forward and the Dinosaur would have to head up here and get pushed back with the feet still kind of staying there like it would be a very distinct Pressure over to the right area. I don't know I could be totally off, but Those are the things that kind of struck struck me when I was watching this again Not quite buying the contact here the posing is a bit default Then it's a patient will be bigger could be just more going on with the dragon This feels just a bit timid I guess I do like the timing of the jump and then the rest there I just think in terms of physics and momentum It wouldn't be like this. It would be the opposite where it's the dragon Dinosaur's leaning back because the dragon is going forward again All right, let me know what you think All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you