 Alright new version with sound here. Let's play this in full. Of course. I have super powers. I have super strength I can fly I have laser vision all the good stuff is just you know, I got to keep it on the down low Of course, I go cool. I like it. I like the changes here and you're mentioning your email You are okay with more drastic changes I like the energy here a lot more if you scrub through you can see how There's more time spent up and then where she goes in for that big one Which is funny and then she was down again. Now there I say Since this is so good here as another suggestion Of course, I have super of course. I have of course. I have like all of that I like the playfulness of course. I have a ring of the hand. Let me just bring down the volume Of course, I have super powers. It's cute. I like that head shake Careful the only thing I would say from a technical point of view. It's a lot from this pivot up here And it's okay, but then at this point it gets a bit weird or it really pivots from here And I think you can do slightly more in the lower Necks that when she goes over like that It starts to feel straight and broken Where I would just give it a little bit more of a lean on that lower neck So that the head going over just takes that with it a bit more. It's a bit more connected It starts to feel a bit too much. She also has a really long neck It could also potentially be lower, but of course. I have super powers. I have super strength Yeah, that's me stands out with their of course. I have super powers I have soup like how the fingers come back on this. It's all nicely done. Nice shapes here powers I have super strength. I can fly I What I would tweak even though I like the offset And it might be a bit noodley or back and forth in my comments here But what I like is the the looseness here Of course, I have super powers. I have super strength, but then when she says strength It's almost too loose. I don't remember that was the previous version. I apologize I should remember right now. It strikes me as loose because I like this I can fly I have laser vision all that and how you go forward a little bounce like all that's great And I wonder at this point just how far this arm goes. I would just keep the offset, but Let's bounce and even on this one. Maybe a tiny bit mainly because It's loose here, and then it was loose again, and it loose again And I'm you know me I always look for contrast and I feel like super power can go but it works with the stronger It's more like and it's tighter like she's flexing the muscles and everything are as tight So it would be less bouncy. That's all though. That's my rationale just for that comment there We're strength. I can fly I have laser vision all And then so my bigger comment for this because I think everything is really in a really good spot But since you're willing to make some changes The good stuff is just this seems a bit flappy here that hands. I Know it's a bit of like a nervous thing of how should I tell her but maybe it's more of a She goes down and that hand doesn't go as far leaving a gap. It's it's already a bit here, and it's already She's turning here with her eyes but like my thought is what if it goes down and she has that hand just on the thigh resting a bit here and then instead of going down and That she can start a bit sooner and just do a Tap, you know like hands up or the wrist up and then that and tapping a little bit just a bit more of a visible Maybe that's too cliche a tap tap or something where it's a bit more of a nervous thing because she's realizing Hmm, how can I tell her this? This seems a bit much for me in terms of the break I would drag that wrist less. So it's not That feeling I know exaggerating with this line, but it just was a bit broken Even if even if you're rotated and that line of the thumb is here That would work. So that's all cute. You know, I gotta keep it on the down low. So here's my comment For the last part was we have that nice change you that you made that's really cool So well done on that and then what if because you have this that energy down energy and then she realizes How can I say that? You know, I gotta keep it on the down low So what if she doesn't go down again as always you don't have to lose I'm just throwing something out there to see what you think What if she does this whole move, but she ends with this on You know, I gotta keep it on the down Maybe not on downs. That's a bit too acting out or but just before so maybe in the here ish area So, you know, I gotta keep it on the down low. I gotta keep it on. It's just, you know, I gotta keep it on the down You know, I gotta keep it on the down low I mean unless you want to hit that on the down, but you mean it's almost almost like how the words are slower It's just, you know, I gotta keep it on. It's just in a down low And I'm feeling what if you replicate that with the body again Just to have her up and then as she says that in and in the body goes slower down and then down low and then again Playfulness is almost like by the end. She realized. Yeah, that's what I can tell her and it's going to be okay And then she does that wink, but she's in that on insecure unknowing state Through this whole thing going slower. So that down happens You know, I gotta keep it on the right before the down low Maybe just the thought just because I really like the changes you made here and how it feels with Just not going down just having that always upright that for contrast And maybe that would be a nice contrasting moment too of a slower move to kind of reflect Visually how she feels and how she's unsure and then when she has That you mean like that is almost the alright. I got it again. I know what to say and then she's a bit more peppy. I Think that would be it. It's careful with she goes this low here on her I know she's kind of a side thing and just there for context, but She could have a little bit of a changer just a bit to follow her eye Not that we'll see pupils, but it feels like That's okay, and then she goes down like that. She could lower her head just a tiny bit Down low Oh, oh, oh low. Oh, it's just enough with her head nod. It's not taking away too much. I keep it on the down low Maybe you watch out. Those arms are a bit floaty going up It translates seems like I get arms Of course, I have superpowers. I have super strength. I can fly and the same thing here She's a bit wavy in her body. I she's super sleepy I think it's okay to have her take a couple frames out and make the head turns a bit more active really following and have the body bit less wavy strength I can fly like those arms coming forward Bit wavy there a bit bit even in timing and they seem like they're all moving at the same time and by all I mean to Even that when she goes on this that could bring her arms back a bit sooner maybe shoulders up a bit She's a bit freaked out just a bit Same thing that arms a bit slow. Oh going up all the good stuff. It's just And I think this is a bit too soon, but she's still listening and then she waits. It's just And then she says it's just and she doesn't have contact anymore eye contact and she's waiting I think that's when you will bring her arms up. She's listening She realizes oh what's going on and then she brings her arms up I think it's a bit too soon. It doesn't quite feel like she's listening. She's just going through her acting beats That's kind of it. All right, thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up You can start whenever you want you can submit whatever beyond you get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome Alright, thank you