 All right, new version. Let's check this out. Yeah, it's very cool. I'll like it. Let me check. You said something about the camera around here ish. I'm not seeing Anything that is wrong. I like how the character leads the camera all this time here. That's cool. That's cool That's cool. Same thing here Probably delay camera because it goes up with the character Pretty much the same time and it's okay. I mean, it's a cool shape But it's okay to also just quickly break frame like this and then catch up here Totally fine. Not that it's crazy tell when you watch it. It's okay because it's so fast and snappy. It's not too bad You could also just delay by a frame or two. I know it sounds super picky, but it's just a thought This makes me hungry Cool though. Let's go back Pose wise. It's also cool It's so fast that I think it's okay. I was gonna say here You can even have a slight move over so that there's more separation in the legs here Between the shin and the pants here, but it's so fast. It's pretty clear It's not too shabby Well, it's a little bit of color change there, but it could be something to do like here It's nice that be super picky this line goes right there with that shoe is forming a line tangent I will probably cheat that ring that foot lower Although this is a nice combined line. That's okay. It's gonna save and separate the foot But this actually creates a nice simplified line that I will keep I love this here with the arms Really nice shapes. They're really fun. Yeah, it's really fun to go in there frame by frame watching this Goes up here. This is something that I will probably tweak was If you look at this, right, it's all free jumping not holding on to anything except here and this doesn't quite read as As a whole like what is he doing here? He gets his hands up here But then they go right underneath Into this and since you're really stretching I think it might be okay to just keep that hand cupped over here Even this could be slightly over there a hand right and then you stretch out arms Even here you could see how fast is he It's pretty fast. I think it might just be okay to stretch and extend arms. It might not feel Too rubbery given the speed and then probably by here you can let go But I will keep hands up here up here, and then we can let go and go here That's all cool. I like that. There's just enough of pause To sense the weight and hold Getting given the speed. I think it's okay. It could be fun to experiment with this leg while it's out It's here and then here. It's actually further out and then here it might Even still be out. What is the right one? So even that might be too crazy, but out here and then Maybe maybe still out here Then he gets on there hold hold hold into push just so there's a little bit of a since we're dragging it here A little bit of a swing back in I think that could be fun as a read for a shape. It looks like we're cutting out soon What's going at the end here? Hold on? Okay, nothing. Okay. I thought it's like a weird off friend there Super cool you mentioned you left the crazy frames at the end It really is a personal preference and The funny thing is now that I've seen it before and I'm watching this again It doesn't bother me anymore just because of like this this just sets the groundwork of oh Okay, this is this is the word we live in this is stretchy and Now we're going into another one. I think it's okay to be honest. I will say I know what Drove me to the previous critique and I think it's fine now one of those things. I Think it's fine. I Also liked that you have a slight delay here that it's not completely In what those arms are doing, but there's a little bit of a hole into that settle Like the lines in your body here and I remember at the end here Just enough change Happy picky This feels like we're going pretty much straight up and down on that route and what you could do is since he is Leaning this way right he's towards what he wants and then you can have a Up where the route goes up a bit to the left and then the settle is more on Lean over this way. So he might just be you know, this knee might be here. This might be here or her With a slight broader lean over just in a way Emphasizing that That's what he wants to have and now he's not interested anymore. So now he's leaning away from me I mean he's keeping he's growing the distance between what he wanted before because he's disengaged basically Instead of just having a up and down as a patient for that settle there having it doesn't have to be much Right, so a little bit to the left. Watch out. I see some jitter here. It's a little bit of a wobble jitter and this Fingers are cool Just like offset there. I like that a little settle there at the end Yeah, it's all very cool. I think the biggest thing to me to to quote-unquote fix is This is number two and this will be Number one I'm gonna be honest. There's something that that reads as odd and it's probably for me. It's we're going this way And then we're having this here That's the path and whoa, it's only we're going higher And it's just it's such a lead into well the next frame will be here like here and he's here That's I think that's what was reacting it for seven or what? Oh, what is that a weird cut? What's going on there and watching this again? Is it there's an odd Bump there and I would say that pretty much that it's really really nice Nice and fluid. I mean you always do great work. It's always so much fun to see your work Yeah, that's up for me. Thank you. All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you