 all right there's no sound you got a first pass we like that's like that all right cool and i see your mail she plays innocent and then turns okay what i would watch out for like that's a massive change going from here to here so watch out in step mode like you know how is this how does she go from this to this is she kind of moving around while still looking there you mean like it's like a turn while still glancing and like oh yeah maybe and then when she's done with the body taking the step then the head turns or is this the look and then she looks over so to make sure that you you have enough breakdowns to show that um like you say here she looks she plays innocent and then turns because right now it doesn't quite read up right it's just like looking and turning but it's so fast and then the walk i mean it it's like because it's not a sneak it's almost like halfway military playful big steps type of things and if i look at it's like one two three four one and go so i think you could do something where three most count things because it fell even um so i think that could be something where just look at how you go from here to here again playing innocent so it could just be you could level blink and she looks up and then it turns around and then it's more like one step and then step step you know like have some rhythm in all of these like oh yeah and through through all of this she could look around it's like oh i'm looking around i'm not really focusing and then then she does that and i think you could take some frames out of this to go just a bit faster in that moment there and then watch out even for this this feels more like she is getting pulled just because of the speed of it if someone like something hits you i would take a couple frames out of that actually hold on let's take out the trusty quick time and uh hold on let's go back here bring this in so you can see so i would do when she goes you know she starts to communicate i'm about to turn it so probably keep this but then take out a bit much maybe i mean it's it's maybe just how long we hold things where is this here cut that and i will probably go she's here gets into this see she goes and after that okay then it will be cutting this i'm not even sure we need that to be honest i cut this out too like take out that one and to be honest even take out that one take all of this and that's your like middle in between i'm gonna say we don't need either okay maybe let's see see that and you go like that to me feels a bit better and yeah so watch out the breakdowns through there and then it's more like to that and then this would be you know where is she going here she has that i could see that impact there so take out that i'm trying to hit this controller there you go what if i take this out we got just the the initial i don't need this one either so you go straight into this and then probably don't need this one either yeah then it gets even it's even timing there cut this out where we got cut this out again there you go hmm let's be fast that's a bit too fast whoa oh not skipping frames though yeah hold on it does that sometimes it is not the best let me just take this out here let's just to play from the very beginning also i was just to export and save quick time it doesn't always play this in real time this is probably too much but if i cut this yeah that's one way or we take out that beginning till here so it's a it's a stronger impact with a slight ease out it's almost like you need it just skips that one frame there it's a bit tricky i don't know why it skips right there but i hope you get my point it's like this is your sticky frame it's too it's too fast now it's just it doesn't register to me this last frame no it does it's just too fast yeah i just want i want one more frame in there too fast all this here see how slow this is now it's kind of funny and we can give this keep that yeah still has that pause in the middle right there ah timing change i don't know it's weird i will shall blame it on quick time then it's got that flash it's just so weird but anyway that is the idea to cut out so let's watch this again right so this is the cut version versus see how slow that is so that would be my edit on this my very clumsy edit and that's about that so you're wondering when adding more in the beginning instead of having her start walking immediately i mean it could be also some pantomimey stuff there you can also have her walk from the beginning but again it's more like a small step and a bigger step looking around back to a couple small steps and then turn you mean like you can add some some layering and texturing to that beginning without this or like i said here and you have a bit of pantomimey stuff then turn into this but just watch out that it's not this was this that's why it felt so military because the poses are bit of a repeat and the rhythm is kind of similar as if it was kind of a march type of thing so that would be that all right hope that makes sense if not as always let me know thanks all right there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome all right thank you