 Alright, let's take a look at the horse definitely better look at some reference I am slightly not too sure about this here how far in this goes and how it Breaks that ankle at this point. This seems so far inward But I'm gonna Be completely honest here, and let me look at reference. Let me just pause this So I was looking at this here Let's get this a bit bigger here And I know this is representative of all horses, but it's definitely not as broken going in It's one of the better front views that I'm seeing here So much up and down on the head. It's one of the horse references There's a lot of up and down, but you know you can look at the angles there and just not as pronounced so Looking at this Seems like it just goes way too far in yeah, watch out for that. I still think that it What's the word for that I Don't know the words a swoosh it swooshes back too far as opposed to just getting off and then moving forward. It's a bit more It's a bit too pronounced And it's a bit more direct on the real horse I think you're also breaking this a bit too much into the ankles. You want to be a bit more aligned With that upper part. I wonder if you want to take this whole thing Speed it up like 10-15% just a bit I'm looking at your your up and down these guys They seem a bit even I think it's definitely better but what you want to look at is just a bit more sense of weight and gravity meaning as This comes off and this starts to push All the weight is on one leg is going to push this whole backside up. It's gonna it's gonna be a bit slower Then the drop meaning there's so much no weight and gravity involved goes up And then as it relaxes and this goes forward This will relax and bend and the butt drops so on the up. It's a bit slower and a fast kind of like That type of thing versus a very even curve if that makes sense And the same thing here And you can probably Move the head up a bit faster has this horses have this thing of Not really the drag overlap that you would expect and it's a bit more of a Pulling up of the head just to give it some somewhat drive force I think your your ears are a bit soft there. I'm seeing this right gets my animation on there and it feels like Your motion and why of your chest going forward is a bit much It's good to be me. It's interesting. I'm a little bit how there's this big saucy section there There's just something that feels just a bit slow and spliny and Swingy in terms of how far the heck was left and right and how much the chest rotates in why I'm looking at the highlights here How much they change Nothing's gonna be just a bit more straightforward with some movement because you know legs are moving and shoulders Are activated and everything but this just being also the speed doesn't help because it's so slow that it gives it that kind of Very deliberate and left and right and left and right So I think you can have a little bit of left as it kind of wants to go up and you kind of pull that head up a little bit Of nose up and then she corrects goes up here and they might go down a bit of a less of a curve Then rope goes out. So it's asymmetry in your curvature there in your arcs Um But I think That's it so far this I mean it's gonna be some you know a few changes in your rhythm and how you Fix that section in terms of how slow is it going to be how slow are they gonna go up and then bit more faster towards the ends And how that's gonna impact everything else So I think I would just do one more pass a bit on sharpening up some some parts, right? So you want your your up up and down variation in there and bit more in the head As it kind of drives up and then you want to reduce the left and right on this Alrighty and I mean that as well since I'm drawing everywhere here your y-rotation on this And then since we're having this here watch out on your curvature like how far back those guys swing out and rotate up, right and Actually on this angle you can see how much this feels a bit broken so we'll bend the ankle right there All right, that is kind of it. Thank you All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you