 All righty, let's watch them fall. So angry. Okay, okay Cool, I like it Probably my main impression and this is also coming from your email here Where you're still working on even timing and post-to-post stuff I like what you have here. I Think the biggest post-to-post Moment for me is you go into this turn and then it really is a I mean, I know the arms continue to go up with the body, which is good But there's something about this already getting a bit and I were really just sticking to this area And then it's just such a stop I mean, I can scrub through or frame through and I see some movement here, but it's such a done and then everything Moves together to get into this pose and then with that sit down. We're also reading or getting to that extreme I mean pretty much as one more frame, but it just feels very much post-to-post here I don't mind here ish because you have You have that going on right after I think my only comment in terms of taking things out would be this moment Because I'm not sure you need it because you have a look up Huh another look down then another look and then the reaction and I think you might just go from Huh Yeah, that was not good. And then straight into that I'm not sure subjectively that you need that moment So for me the biggest thing would be And I'm I know you mentioned that that's how the reference Was with the hands, but there's something about This feeling very default in terms of that hand like the space in between the fingers the thumb up here This just feels like the hand just kind of rests on it and this just feels more like he hurt Like imagine that hand would be up here and he just cradles that elbow Then it looks like with that expression. I know I'm stopping on that one frame, but it looks like his elbow is hurt It just doesn't feel like Crossing of arms. It's just so convenient how this pose is already there with the fingers Because we are pretty much going from the fists to Just opening and then it just kind of perfectly clanks gets to that. It's almost like a toy That just has one hand pose and then you can kind of click into that pose so I personally would deviate from the reference or the way you were acting this out and just go for a full on adult way of One arm in there and then the other one, you know, how I'm acting this up for myself because so one goes in Underneath and one over so a hand here fingers there And then the other one Dives into this forearm region. So to me it would be just a regular crossing of arms This just feels really off to me And I know we talked about that before so still all very subjective, but that's just from a pose thing I'm not super sure about it. There are some technical things like slight over stretching of legs And then some pops in the knees But I think the biggest thing would be Personally and subjectively taking out that pause And then the second thing would be to get a bit more organic overlap. So it's not just stop here Getting into a stop or into that pose here And then into that even this could be You might even go from this with a Moving hold up up up up up up up up with an inhale and the nostrils go up and then percing of the lips into Whereas it whereas it into the side, but you would really go from Here to a big inhale Without that pause in the middle and I will push the shoulders up a bit more and then And then here push the shoulders down a bit more really go into that and then probably Again subjectively you might just close your eyes here to go into this Start closing eyelids close because we don't see the pupils anyway Then it gets a bit uncomfortable pose wise that we don't see this and imagine going Close close close close close close close closed And then open just the way you know, then you can stay closed here into There so that's like the last up and then into that That might just be me But I like to walk a lot. There's a good attitude little stompy guy Like there's some changes in the head. Yeah, I'm just supposed to reacting to this very clean turn Stop pose to pose and then this you might even have a moment of Here instead of that Lit down you could do maybe an iDART over like he's stomping sits and then ponders Still processing some information with some darts And then he goes into Big inhale so that you can keep this pause if you want Again, I still want to try to give you options, right? So I'm gonna dictate too much here Still your shot, but if you want to keep that pause you could have it By going up here wait with the lids, but you have maybe a bit higher So you can really see the eyes dart once or twice Just showing us he's thinking he's thinking of what just happened And then as he goes up into that inhale then you do the the lid closing because you have a lid closed and up again Because I don't mind him being like And I don't mind having that closed lid during that inhale And you don't open here. Just it's just that That inhale tired look and then closed eyes closed eyes into open Huh into that That's mainly that Now there I say if you do this and you do have the iDARTs and you know the thought process going on there I might even be inclined of keeping this because the reason why I'm taking this out is because you have a sit stare stare stare and then that But you start having sit thinking iDARTs looking around Then closed eyes closed eyes And then this this could be then this would be the first real stare without darts and then you could keep it And then you have that Anyway, I might be overthinking this just for a sit down. I think the biggest thing for you is the pose and The pose to pose aspect of all of this Up until you know here ish So it's just that that And that that's what I would focus on just because I know you having you having classes with you You are very pose to pose So I think getting out of that comfort zone of pose to pose would be really helpful And after that you can think about the menu show Do I want iDARTs? How do I want him to be here closed eyes or not? That's totally up to you Alrighty, thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you