 All right, new version here. Let's play this in full. There is no sound. Ooh, but we haven't animated TV. I love it It's still so good Yeah, it's great. I like this. I think the main impression that I have is that It's almost as if everything is a bit in slow motion. I'm gonna go crazy Play it is at 25% faster, you know, I Hate to be the guy that goes all right take everything 25% faster, but there's something that feels That has a bit more energy A bit more contrast and even then I would tweak certain areas just to double check This is 50% faster I think in sections, I like it in sections. It's a bit too fast But it's like That and then here it's faster than like this. I'm going back and forth. You can't really I don't know if you can see it, but basically generally I like it 25% faster and I would say where I would push things Huh, I like this Then it's almost like you want this It's a bit poppy I would have you know, there's so much in terms of shapes Appearing where I would have a bottled arm Maybe a foot come in just to give us a bit of a visual softener. So I don't think It's just a lot. I don't think it will hurt you to just ease in sometimes you don't want to have like a Clean ease into shapes because then that the pop is gone like the speed and the excitement and all that But I think one frame you'll be fine. What I would do is I will give this moment maybe two three more frames as in Imagine that the rhythm is That's kind of what I'm what I would love to see obviously is also very subjective, but It has and there's also why I'm speeding things up It's everything felt kind of slow and even and I would love for him to go See speeding up and changing direction That change right there would have a bit like two three frames more and this could be him like this sliding then taking the steps or Sliding and taking a slow step and then that's the step that pushes him over and then Run run run run run run same thing here a little bit of two three frames I'm talking minimal really was two three frames of a longer slide and then back because again It's a direction change and then boom and then that's fine. So it's really just If I look at this I would love for this to slow down a bit This to slow down a bit which will give in turn this and this Automatically more speed by contrast That makes sense other than that to be honest. I think that's it Let me just see let me just look at the TV just in case All of all of the antennas That they're detached. That's great. I think you'd be okay. I Think you could you could do a because I'm looking at the TV then at the guy And I like that there's still a bit of a hop because he's looking because he heard something And now he sees it You can have a little bit here. Just a little bit. It's not completely dead Then he comes in I'm looking at the guy and About a time he's around here. We understand. Oh something's happening He wants to get in there and around here is she can easily have a little moves like tiny moves I think you have a tiny move There like that kind of wobble Just that could easily happen around here. So it's the action. It's back on and then when he looks here. I Think you could easily have another big one where the antenna detaches where it's more in this realm Something big happened. What happened? I'm moving. Okay, I want to I don't want to miss it and again a little bit here Comes in a little bit a little bit Big moment to that, you know, it's almost like a reward that he got there just in time to see the next big moment I might be looking too much into TV acting But that's what I would do It's cute though, I love I love that TV and the little the squishiness in it. I was truly super cute The guy coming in again, it just it just be a frame afterwards, but this We are still in step mode, but coming in I do like that as a nice curve lean I love that a little impatient with the shoulder in the head. Gotta go back Drag on the feet. That's great Comes in love all that. He'll drag in the popcorn. That's nice And you can take little pieces at the very end and they come off of it Get your bottle. I think that's all good. Sorry. I was suddenly distracted. Okay It clearly has capsule on so it's not going to spill would he stabilize the bottle more so it's not spilling But this is still on so the bottle is not open so he would have to open this later That was literally my train of thought when he got silence. I know if that's weird I just think about things Again, love all the little steps. I love the sliding aspect. That's so great Watch out. Once you spline this out, there might be a moment where this is gonna look to IK Because you have Even though I see the bowl angle change. There's something About the angle Man, I got the wobbliest wobbliest finger In here See this It's a long period where that angle of that hand is the same and especially when you go up here This starts to look heavy heavy heavy like an IK hand So you might have to bring it up a bit and this could also be where the risk goes up But then the bowl Gets off the palm so it's you know, you have a bit more of a Change in the wrist angle and what the hand is doing the bowl can be slightly off And then plop back down into the palm that pushes this section down again if that makes sense But that's my only concern also here. You have a lot of movement happening I feel like if we would spline this hand or this arm, there would be a nice smooth Drop While there's all this action and I'm concerned that this is going to feel again Very IK-ish where there's a bunch of stuff happening in the body moving up and down And the arm is doing its own thing So as you continue on make sure that any type of change and plop and everything Still reverberates through the hand. Not that this would be all shaking and you know pop carbon fly around But just taking away that IK curse One thing you could do just to push it again. This is all great. This is not me going. Oh, where can we push things a little bit? when he's like this And I would say if you add a couple frames, which I would suggest here just have a little bit Just a longer more stylized fast slow Imagine all that direction change the gravity is going to also pull his head back a bit All right, he's like this head forward Then it's like everything goes back. This is the more, you know, this is the part that pushes forward So this will drag a bit more So the head would be just a bit further back so that there's more contrast when you hear To bring the head forward like he wants to Crane the neck forward. I want to get there. This is a bit straight. I wish it would be maybe a push of neck craning Forward and then maybe here leave it there. It was the body catches up Then you're like that and then as he sits down, this is what I like. There's a good drag But then watch out. It feels like your body and the head Go back together And forward together even though it's a little bit of nose up. I would take that lower neck here Go back a bit more just a bit and then he goes forward Just a bit more separation feels a bit stiff Not that he has to be super floppy But it is a bit of an out of control slip and drop So you can add a little bit there and again That way there's a bit more contrast of neck back neck forward because he's really into it I think that's pretty much it. You could potentially move that ball a bit more to the right. There's a bit more separation It's not exactly touching but it's close to tangent land In terms of the knee in there and then that knuckles right where that knee is So maybe you don't want to go too far, but you know bring it towards us so that that elbow stays there But that knuckle line would be here so that you have a nice separation here and then the ball here I'm super biggie, but I will keep all those shapes clean. I like that. It Breaks through that arm silhouette there And then I would still bring maybe that ear just a bit higher You could also have a slight tilt if you want There's a bit of asymmetry but separate that ear from that shoulder line You know very little tilt that doesn't it doesn't have to be like a sideways puppy tilt of interest But maybe a little bit that would just bring that ear up just a little bit there I think that's pretty much it the other thing is in terms of polish. I don't remember if this Rig has squash in the feet as you push off this could be fun I like that the foot goes this way because he is pushing this way to go this way I wonder if there's like a flattening of the because you have you know fairly nice round shapes there Maybe it could be a little a squish in the sole there Stuff like that as you start splining and polishing things It's so fun though. I really like it. Let me just see if there's anything on the chair I haven't looked at the chair. Let's see How nice there is and on the pillow Fantastic, maybe that pillow could be bouncier and softer It doesn't have to be this could absolutely be a harder harder pillow Just throwing that out there. Just watch out. You're starting to anticipate that squash In that pillow right there With an early shape just to lay that a bit and we're good to go One thing you could do You could put this table here or Which makes maybe less sense out there. It's just we're not using the table I understand that you want this here so you can put stuff on there My concern is that as we're here you have a bit of the table out here this right there Right there on that foot this out there if there are many You know, maybe busy shapes because this is also gray and gray gray gray That would be my only thing. I don't think he gets close enough to the table So I will probably put the table here again. This is very picky Most people are also right-handed. So maybe that table would be here. I'm left-handed mine would be here And maybe as he goes by he might even brush into the table So maybe even the table has a bit of a wobble there which adds the whole chaos of I got to get there It doesn't matter if I bump into something that could be I think too Alrighty and that is that. Thank you. All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you