 All right, let's watch it in full here. There is no sound Although there's an alarm clock I'm assuming that's the alarm clock and wait for it and It's gonna happen again. It's a longer clip wait wait and Bum and wait for it Bum And then done And that's that. All right So couple things here. I think generally a timing wise I think we're lingering on some moments a bit too long. Subjectively, of course, like I like this You understand sleeping This moves so I'm gonna assume that's an alarm clock. It's a really big one It would be good to see maybe the time at first. I was slightly confused, but I guess I mean it must be an alarm clock But then I was also is that a door and what is this the bed right next to the door? That's weird And wouldn't there be a night table and the alarm clock is there, but maybe that forces him to get up to turn it off But then let's see It's also interesting But like it's almost like he's reaching is that an instinctual thing of I used to be here I like I mean, I like the it's kind of fun posing and kind of going around with this I'm curious to hear maybe you can email me your thoughts on Why exactly like this because it feels very I'm looking here and I'm trying to reach something. That's not there You know, it's a fun maybe unexpected Stiffness of someone waking up and turning I like it. I'm not saying it's you know, it's horrible or wrong Don't do it. I'm just curious what your thought process was. I always like when people fall. That's fun I like that we see this first So we know that he got closer. I love that all of this is moving and then I'm slightly confused at this This feels more like I Seeing something I'm assuming that's maybe a stretching or the pain of In you know, hitting the head on the table, but we're staying on this for quite some time Especially this there is really long and if he has to get there Because of the alarm, it's almost like I was expecting him to now take this arm and then drop it to stop the clock but like the interval between the Interval between the rings is also kind of long. But anyway, this felt just really long Long long long then we get there and then Okay, he didn't do it now, but now I'm expecting that hand to arc down and stop it But then he just looks at it And then you feel like okay Well, maybe he's gonna use this arms the head hurts, but then it's not extending like he could touch it But then he's okay weird Maybe he's pulling over because we're waiting for something. He's almost looking at me here No, maybe so mad that he wants to smack the clock But then he doesn't I'm very confused, but then he rings again. He doesn't do anything about it and then Somewhat collapses backwards. So I'm slightly confused. I think in terms of What you have there and breakdowns and the animation. I think it's already a lot of fun I think my concern is mainly this section through here in terms of how long it takes like that long stare I'm not quite sure why It feels like it kind of sucks out the pacing I think we could speed things up a bit and then I'm slightly confused about the choices again I like how you have that with the drag and the roll on the chair And I like the little adjustment indicating that there are some arm rests there like all that is fun Like I'm not I'm not really concerned about the animation It's more about some of the ideas and the timing of it if that makes sense so Yes, so this is the first submission. I'm gonna leave it at that I just want to know a bit more about it. You're just writing here that it's kind of a Working-from-home sit-down assignment, and then you got kind of carried away and And then that's it. So I would love to hear more information about it It was other than that I mean, you know this point here kind of a tangent almost You know confused about the door or is there like a distance that we just don't understand because of the way it's staged Like I don't feel like that's a an important note on my end Like I can find things, but I think that would be silly, but I like the idea of The sudden wake up. I think maybe this could be played Instead of the arm again, these are all now subjective points here instead of the arm Maybe the arm is a bit lower, but then the head Shoots up a bit higher more towards us so we can see the head the face a bit more For some freak out because again, that doesn't look like he's freaking out. This feels more like okay. I got to turn this off Oh wait, but where is it? It's not there. So that's kind of That's where my mind was first going. So maybe it'll be fun to see the face a bit more Or maybe he's then super tired and then stretches Oh Waking up and then the stretch he forgot or it didn't realize that he's so close to the corner and the arm up and stretch Makes him fall down that could be an idea But again, I love all of this love all of that And it's kind of fun to come back But then it's almost like wouldn't then use then that anger to then It's almost like he wants to maybe scream of This hurt and then this interrupts that moment of relief And then he's with that anger. Bam. Then he smacks it down Because what you could do is could also fall apart and just pieces here And that's why he goes ah finally and then there's this little Just a little bit more so it's not as annoying But he didn't quite kill it and that's why he goes over To do something but then again then then it will continue again in a small piece But then he still wouldn't do anything and do that, but at least it wouldn't be The original loud noise if that makes sense, right? If he's here angry it interrupts him He smashes it to pieces and now it's just an annoying thing. It's not loud that that wake him up You know if you sleep you just kind of like a bzzz bzzz and that's why he just goes. That's annoying All right, I'm awake, but it's just kind of knowing and then it's kind of goes bzzz and falls down So it's it's more of an annoyance of what a morning versus The same loud noise that he's just not stopping That is my So what quote-a-quote concern there? I'm just come slightly confused, but I'm gonna leave it at that instead of rambling Let me know email me. I would love to discuss your thoughts and your ideas I don't want to steer you in directions that you know, I don't want to go to so let's discuss. All right, thanks All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you