 What is going on everybody? Welcome back to my channel. For those of you who are new around here, my name is Michael A.K.A. Dr. Cellini And I'm a fifth-year interventional radiology resident physician. Now on today's video We are going to be talking all about the dreaded personal statement now I personally hate writing personal statements because it's hard not to sound cheesy and You never know what to talk about and Also, I'm a terrible writer. However, I reached out to my friends and personal statement gurus over at MotivatedMD And we came up with a few tips for you all on how to write the perfect personal statement So why don't we go ahead and get on into it? Let's go All right, so let's face it personal statements are extremely difficult to write and if you're anything like me You put them off till the very last minute until you have no other choice But to sit down and write it now even though I hate writing these personal statements I've gotten pretty good at it seeing as I've written about three of them now One for getting into med school One for getting into radiology residency and another for interventional radiology fellowship Also, I may have reached out to my friends over at MotivatedMD who are not only personal statement experts and are sponsoring this video today But they sent me back some incredible tips to share with you all okay So what's the hardest thing about writing these personal statements to begin with well for one the hardest part for me Is that there is literally no format so in this video? I thought it would be best to kind of break down the personal statement paragraph by paragraph So at least you have some sort of guideline or format to follow and if you're lucky I may provide examples from my own personal statements If I can find them it's been quite a bit of time since I've written my medical school personal statement But maybe I can find my radiology one and I will embarrassingly share it Maybe so let's go ahead and get started with paragraph one the intro paragraph now at its core The personal statement is supposed to be a persuasive essay your goal is to convince the admissions committee of your worth as an applicant Both MotivatedMD and myself think you should center your essay around two main questions One why do you want to be a physician and two? Why you will be a great physician and since the ad-com or admissions committee will be reading like a bajillion essays You want to do your best to kind of stand out and capture the reader after you capture the reader's attention They need to be smoothly transitioned into the thesis and in that thesis you should answer the two aforementioned questions Why you want to be a doctor and why you will be a great doctor? So I found my application personal statement for getting into radiology residency I can't find my med school one because it's been like 10 years So I'll give you a little example of what I spoke about in my intro paragraph So basically I kind of grabbed the reader's attention, you know Like most medical students my first weeks of class were exciting and terrifying at the same time I knew that I was in for an incredible challenge But relieved to finally begin the journey then I went to talk about how I was an Economics major an undergrad and also an incidentally all-american swimmer, you know to kind of build myself up Which is oftentimes the hardest thing for people to do in personal statements and even on interviews Nobody likes to really talk about themselves well Some people do but it's hard to kind of talk about yourself and express how good you are to people because it sounds like You're bragging to them, but that essentially is what an interview is So I spoke briefly about how I went into real estate after undergrad and then switched over to medical school and why I did it And offered a few examples And then I kind of tied in how I was working in a team environment and how that's good in the radiology environment And then my final sentence Basically, I said radiologists are important and active members of management teams and central and critical assets to the clinical team I believe that I have the skill set and motivation to meet the unique demands of radiology residency program So I kind of set up the reader with this last sentence Saying that I have the assets to become a good radiology resident And now in the body paragraphs, I will expand on why that's true paragraph two The body paragraphs now the ordering of the body paragraph reflects the thesis And there are two ways to go about the body paragraph framework You can spend the first body paragraph discussing why you are interested in medicine With the subsequent two highlighting various traits that will make you a great doctor On the other hand, each body paragraph can discuss why you are interested in medicine In addition to why you will be a fantastic physician And don't forget you must add examples when talking about this They can't just simply take your word for it You have to provide examples and also the examples provided should be active Which means the writer is the one playing an active role in the story You need to show your ability and express how you demonstrate the traits to become a great doctor Not just simply saying you shadowed a doctor because that's a passive example Because anybody can really sit in a corner of a room and shadow a doctor That doesn't really explain to the reader why you are going to be a good doctor Paragraph three The conclusion now the main thing here is that the applicant should not discuss new information here Here is when you should close with a rewritten version of your original thesis to conclude your arguments about why you will be a good doctor And how you will be a good doctor. So it's kind of fresh in the mind of the reader So for example what I wrote basically I kind of summarize the prior two paragraphs in my conclusion paragraph And then I kind of tied it all together with a nice eloquent sentence So I said my goal is to become an exceptional radiologist that is confident in my abilities approachable to my colleagues and capable of delivering the best possible patient care I am fully vested in the study and practice of radiology And very much look forward to contributing to the evolution of the specialty So basically what I did there is kind of summed up everything I didn't provide any new information and kind of left them with Kind of like a motivational ending like oh this guy this guy knows what's up Or at least that's how I think I did it now. I know this is a ton of information In very overwhelming. However I have your back well Better yet my friends over at motivate md have your back my friends over at motivate md Who are sponsoring this video today have an amazing personal statement review service That I can only wish I had when I was a med student because I mean I was struggling so hard to write these personal statements. So if I just had some person to review them that knew what they were doing That'd be so useful to me I had my I think I had my mom review them And I mean she's a great writer, but she has no idea about medicine She has no idea what these applications and what these personal statements are for So it's kind of foreign land for her. 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