 Alrighty this has sound let's play the whole thing no breaking the rules doesn't make you a hero What makes you a screw-up take it from me Luke one out of a million dropouts become Steve Jobs? Do you know who become losers with no jobs the other 99,000? No Here other 99,000 Watch out here that it looks like she's talking to the plant and not the cats That's the only thing at the end, but I do love I do love the other 99,000 Now definitely better also cool to see something that she can look at but again, I think overall it's sometimes a bit missing here It gets a bit too high. I can just randomly go this is good I've closed. I think this is better. It's a bit low, but this is good So just we'll kind of watch out that the island is always kind of there and correct So the couple things here no No, it's one of those where you act out words you end up in a twin position at the whole body feels just a bit mirrored so there might just be something where since you already have this it could be something where I Mean, I know you throw it away And it's there to point every now and then and you say it's an animated yet But watch out. She's really holding this like it's a hammer this thing is you know super thin and Then not thick or yes, it's somewhat fragile So even if you would be hanging like this if you animated gravity, it just I know I know she's angry But wondering if there's a bit of a different pose to hold there's something where you could have that hand like this Where she's holding it in a different way and then no no because of that tension. That's when she Squeezes that and you can see the change how how you know, it goes from whatever position. Maybe it starts Somewhat limp there because she squeezes it if the finger squeezing will move up the the rose to be there a bit a bit higher potentially, but I think No in terms of making that gesture. No, I think it's a bit too acting out words I will personally try to find something else. No Breaking the rules and then the thing is you have no gesture breaking the rules gesture And then hero gesture. I'll be careful. It's again. It gets very gesturing. So And I don't think You can easily just have her look I have a sharp look and that is breaking the rules I don't know what she's pointing at if that is breaking the rules I don't know if she needs this again It could just be something that she does the upper body shoulders in the head I Don't mind you could if you take this out and this out You could have this because what I like about this is that it almost leads Into that turn so you could almost have a gesture like that that goes like this with a slight hold maybe a little bit of a bend and then going again into into a More of a stretch not fully arm stretch But kind of almost finishing the gesture which then leads her into a turn. I think that could be interesting You a screw up. Thank you a hero. What makes you a screw up. You a hero What makes you I do like that you use space so he talked about that before we use the space in the room I think that definitely helps. I like that a lot the steps though hero What makes you a scrub? There's something about they're like tiny little not tippy-toe steps, but oh, it makes you a screw That's true. I'm I don't I'm not saying that it's wrong and I'm not saying I'm right by By being hesitant about those steps, but they're just something That's because it's time I don't know. There's something I can't quite put the finger on it. What is bugging me? Let's leave it for now I know it's a pain to move steps and all that stuff, but since this is just me having not a very smart comment here So leave it. Oh, what makes you a screw up take it from me Luke one out of a mill That's cool I like that she looks first and then goes one out of a million. This is the weird thing where she feels very squatty and and You know legs apart with that. I don't know. I'm not sure again if I'm super in love with that pose Take it from me Luke one out of a million Nothing has to be super forceful because she is somewhat not pleading but kind of explaining that this is what's going on, but It just feels like even with this shape. It feels so harsh It's almost like it would be a lean right in this one It's just a bit more like that and then you have a lean forward where it's just a bit softer in in the pose versus Bam and then with the spread legs there. I don't know one out of a million dropouts become Steve job But then you go back up and again, it's I Think it's it's potentially just The bent leg position that feels Uncomfortable to me and then when she gets up. It's not really different. You mean from this pose this pose that leg is fairly the same So maybe that's I'm reacting to what if she's more leaning over so that the leg is more like that This is over and she's leaning over there then when she gets up here the legs are straighter So she would be just a bit more tense jobs. Do you know who become losers with? That I don't mind nope. She gets a bit more upset and there's a bit of that in there. I don't mind that Even that dress all that just cracked me up again. I love this so much. It's great And I think it's totally fine. Do not that point throughout the The rose there could also be something that now that I think of it She does this and she does that and she goes up like this Maybe she could hold the rose with both hands I know or just have something where she holds the top and the the bottom part Maybe hold on a different way But there's just something about this constant hammer hand pose holding this so something else for you to think about I know it's a pain finger detail stuff But something to think about that maybe you can change some of these where it holds it like this And it could be something where she goes like that and then it's more more like one Index and the thumb and the rest of the thing is a bit more relaxed and and she holds that and you know something where maybe that How she holds a rose will change It's kind of that no Breaking the rules doesn't make you a hero. What makes you a screw up take it from me Luke one out of a million dropouts Become Steve Jobs. It's just interesting that she says all that to cats become Steve Jobs Do you know who become losers with no jobs the other 99,000 so maybe I Mean I'm assuming it just fell over and she's upset, but it could also be something or maybe that it's been broken Maybe there's some water there Do you know who become losers with no job and don't do that But I was just thinking maybe that this point the cat Loses interest and goes down and starts licking the water And that's why she gets upset because on top of that the cat's not listening I don't know it's just that idea But I'll leave it at that sort of rambles and know it's but I think it's definitely much better. Let me know what you think about those potential changes and how you want to proceed And that is that all right, thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you