 Alrighty there's sound here. Let's watch this in full first. I really hope that that we can just That we can all just forget about this and and and move on and start again Start again fresh. I Alright, it's been not a subtle time here. Now a couple of things here. Now. I'm seeing this fresh You obviously have worked on this before so I'm gonna throw out some ideas for getting into more You know frame by frame body mechanics type of stuff Just because I want to I'm curious what you think about What I think if you want to like how far do you want to go with changes? What your plan is for the shots, but I don't see it Email so if I look at this I personally would not have that pose was it's a bit of an overused pose in terms of Feeling embarrassed or comfortable holding an arm or holding the back of the the neck and whatever, you know pose You have here. So I'll be personally I would tweak that a bit in terms of a starting pose The other thing is as I'm going through you have a little bit of a change in some steps here But not much. He's he stays mainly in this box Now and I'm assuming there's no camera movement She never knows that you know on the empty scene and don't quite see what the camera is doing But if it's a static camera, it just feels like If you listen to bring back the sound if you listen to this I really hope that that we can just that we can all just forget about this and You can also hear the exhale here And move on and start again Start again for it. So the couple things you could do I feel like what if again? There's not something you have to do just bring it out there. Just to give this a bit more Imagine the characters here or off-screen. It's totally fine. Totally further away. Would he Take maybe a step or two towards the character I really hope that that we can just That we can all just forget about like he wants to work with her so that we can forget about this He's not defensive. He's not, you know, it's not super aggressive where he wants to charge the character But I say like hey, let's let's work with this, you know, let's do something together And then with that Exhale here, what if that's the moment realizes, okay? She's not quite into it and takes kind of sheepishly couple steps back Or you continue even though you could have a step a step or two forward and then when she exhales Stop not move and then again And on that swallow gets really nervous and start to take a step back again I know this is very destructive in terms of a no it's there's redoing things I just want to throw that out there just in case you are open to changes like that Where I feel like we could use the space a bit more. Let's pretend you don't Let's just say No, I'm not doing this. I'm just gonna leave them there. What if I would I would personally change this That also feels a bit too Well, look at me too exaggerated Where I'm just not quite feeling that pose in terms of what the character feels right now This I was very subjective. I'm not super smitten by this one Because you have just do the voice again There's a lot of there's a lot of like this seems almost like oh, what should I do today today's a good day But I would have a bit more fidgety things fidgeting on with fingers pulling on the sweater It's kind of more that the voice Being reflected in the actions I don't feel like whatever however he's saying in the emotion that he has and kind of fidgety is and Stuttery that that's kind of reflected in the body acting if that makes sense That one feels a bit too much to me where I feel like this is a really round Bend here Where I can just I can see it versus I can feel it I don't feel like that's the moment there to push the cartooniness in terms of bends like that again subjectively That we can all just forget about then I like the idea of centering himself going That goes into the inhale that we can all just forget about this You know, let's let's just forget about this But then you get into this and you get out of that so quickly and I feel like you might as well stay in this That we can all just forget about you can all forget about this where he just Imagine he says this in his pose arms go down flat. Maybe taps the side a bit and maybe he nods He almost wants to convince her by nodding When he says that forget about this And move on and start again and again, I feel like he doesn't quite react to her and move on and to the exhale And move on and start again Start again fresh And start again start again fresh and I think I would I would Keep that pose where Like to me Like I said, maybe not this where it's just maybe a bit lower Like a tweak on that pose or something where it's more fidgety with the fingers and to me It's all of that not so big everything kind of stays within that realm of arms together Again arms together getting into this staying straight like that Like I said before and then like this always seems to relax with the hips Like I will keep this he's so nervous that I will keep things fairly straight and actually not push Any type of contrapositor or line of action or anything where it's kind of, you know a push pose Until When he swallows it. Okay. He feels like internally. Okay. I've made my case. That's it Start again fresh so again fresh and that's when he goes That's the big contrast at the end where it's all about small business small looks Sturdy things I darts and at the end like that's his big change in the pose because he feels like alright Let's I set my thing and let's start fresh and somewhat feels awkward yet It's still trying to be relaxed if that makes sense. So anyway, I have more questions, but That's kind of yeah I'm in question terms of how far do you want to go in terms of changes and if the question is immediately answered by I'm not going to move him then it's the kind of the second after critique where that's what I would do in terms of our Movements and holding poses and stuff like that. All right. 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