 All righty here new version. Let's play this in full By do we cut this is short? Let me see here Almost feels like I can't remember how long the old shot was, but there's a slight feeling of It's almost like because we're having that character come in and I'm starting at the end here And then those legs come forward, but it's always like you want to beat to resolve That right and this head up to look it's almost was like it would cut to Something else or be longer might just be me, but that's what it feels like. Generally speaking of feeling Maybe just because I haven't seen it for a while ish There's something about this feeling very sleepy You're going really really why didn't you tell me that before I really don't remember this transition of softness and and you know, it's like Getting up and it's about to stretch and then suddenly hey, hey, hey happy I think the only that's missing is that if you do this There would be a moment Maybe through there where the head is higher and there's something you can do in the eyes where it's suddenly seeing it If that makes sense like to me, it feels like I'm I'm Sleepy stretching and I'm suddenly active because I see this robot, but it doesn't feel hot that at any point It makes that connection and sees it. I mean it could be something where you're like this And you make that almost faster. It's kind of like, huh? And then maybe we'll head tilt and I'm totally changing the shop But and then it goes into this to get out, but even then it would have a Bit more energy on the down over. I hope that makes sense. I'm sorry if this is a weird critique. I Just don't remember how they switch like this soft So that what is this? Let me just see the old version. Let me find it. Okay, so I I looked at it It there's definitely a similar softness, but what you had let me just bring this in Here is that there was that flare that flare helped at least there was that there ready then you go But it cuts out it cuts out just as soon interesting so I I apologize for Having zero memory, but I would definitely bring back unless I said take it out. I'm super confused and I feel horrible What did I tell you to do? Right now as of now seeing this it felt like that that that flare was great Because it's you want to have a moment of alertness of oh, I'm seeing something and then does this happens These are definitely changed. It's interesting to see That's so separate definitely makes it alien-looking. I do like that though It was over there. I Think one thing that's also going to help you just this has nothing to do with the animation, but I would have Pieces rocks and stuff like that on the ground because we are also traveling Translating plus a little rotation and since this is all gray mostly gray with some lines It will help understand the rotation in the move Of the camera just have some pieces here and we understand the slide a bit more Until we see this until then it's it's not super clear All point is it cameras it's sliding because then you have now the foot that's really locked to camera So if you look at the distance here, it's staying the same a bit I think that's going to help you get selling all of that Other than that, this is a bit sharp. I think it's again in terms of weight and Direction changes so you're having this go up And since it's lifting I will probably move Shifting it a bit more over this leg so a bit of a translate over to this side, but when you go forward like this You can see how we're hitting it somewhere here. It's going. It's getting here See that feels like it hits that wall, but you are moving a lot of mass forward It's gonna ease in and ease out of that that turn and changes direction just a bit more. I Would say here. That's a bit of a sharp move That's cool. I do like the way on the start A little bit of stylized timing towards the end, but just enough time to go And then go back. I think that's cool. I think a one-frame offset Might not be enough feels a bit Like it's all at the same time you could potentially pushed out a bit more And then let me look at the silhouette. It's a tricky terms of skin I will probably also rotate this a bit over There's a flatness to this where I would I would It's almost like this side is a bit lower. We see a bit less of this side This is like rotation complexity and then maybe even here you could have it I mean, I know it it's max flat. It just feels a bit simple and it's Axis high goes down and can potentially have some more complications and Complexities there and that arm rotation And if you can here probably bring one of those Fingers down. So there's a little flat Things and then watch out. This gets a bit stiff. There's a lot of movement through there But I wish this would move a bit more compress just a bit more I know that I see stuff But it feels something here feels a bit stiff given that rear up and all that weight on it But yeah, if I told you to take that flare out, then I am I'm wrong Now, maybe I felt like I was right last time or you just wanted to take it out. I don't see anything in emails, but It helped make that Connection to something that's outside there But totally let me know like what what was going on what you were working off of And yeah, it's interesting how now it feels short But then I looked at the previous version and it was just a short. It's cute Oh, they're robot. That's the robot doing Well, no, no, no, no, no, no Maybe a bit is really leaning over maybe I mean that's really sideways. Maybe a bit less again this I'd closed it already. I don't remember what the robot was doing Maybe a bit less if there's a rotation, but definitely nice to have that complexity in there and then with that turn that's cute But then it rests a bit Long so you have a bit of a hold. It's almost like you want to do this which is cool And then rotate the body back so that by now the body like this line is not like like this But already lower and the way I stabilized just because we have such a small such small rotor blades and the body for like the way We'll be just pulling this straight down The the move back is cute The drag on the feet is cute Yeah Yeah, it's a little tiny thing on the robot. It's cute though. I'm gonna leave it at that I hope that was not super confusing And it's little things. I think the overall weight works a lot better I think what the mom or dad or whatever it is here is doing works Pretty well like all the detail you can tell it's breathing and sleeping All that stuff is really cool. I Like the fleshiness and the feel of this here all of that like it feels like there's good mass And it feels fleshier with contact like that's super cool So the biggest thing which again either we I gave you a wrong note. I was wrong you change something. It's just Something in the eyes or again the flare here and somehow bridging this Where it's not so slow and fast fast fast there's something where It would probably help you to go instead of down and it's looking and it's looking and it's looking and only now It's up. It's because it saw something It's almost like you want to do this and don't go as low and here lead with the head and the heck goes up It's the head what wants to look at the air the focus of interest. I think that might help you And if I'm talking out of my butt and saying weird stuff, let me know That's totally possible as well And watch out this feels a bit slow as well there I say for being So off balance and sliding with that mass. It's almost like at least one of those arms Would slide a bit faster into this. There's a bit of a softness in this just this section timing wise And they're probably mostly arms Yeah, I'll leave it at that. Hopefully it's helpful. Let me know if you have any questions. 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