 Still looking very cool Your internet activity over the last ten years is being scrutinized and kept in my mute vivid detail. I really like that ending with the vivid detail. I'm not super hot on the hand gestures Your internet activity over the last ten years. For instance, I Don't know the thing is he has a good threatening voice like he knows what everything's doing This is unfortunately very it's a you're wanting to get away from the W pose You know, that's your cliché W to arms out thing And I would just go from here and all you're gonna do is keep this arm open up the fingers Take this rotate the wrist around a little bit so that the pen is out this high That's all you're gonna do right since you already have the pen in there It gives you a bit of an accent and I personally actually Would not break eye contact you know, I Would have locked Your internet activity over the last ten years is being scrutinized and catalogued And the thing is what I would do is keep keep call eye contact keep it right your internet activity over the last ten Years, I need that small gesture keep this make sure he looks at him This looks like he's looking past him on this side. Keep looking at him years is being Until here right in scrutinized and then I'm not super hot on this one This is his forward move. I know there's something on this thing that goes back with the pen Feels very flourishing. I put again something you don't have to do. I'm just thinking Let's go back here. It's making step-by-step Always look at him Just make that Small move with the pent up opening the hand a bit keep eye contact keep eye contact eye contact eye contact until you get here Then when he starts In scrutinized and then scrutinized when he's go scrutinized Just for now shit some giggles just keep that arm low. He doesn't really do anything with it that pen And he's like that and he's actually looking this way. So starting being scrutinized on scrutinized on screw right you can start looking over scrutinized and cataloged Even that is such a big move With his arm. That's really distracting But imagine that's That's your post imagine that hand stays there, you know, and you can have a little swirly swirl on this Real accent, but when you get into scrutinized, right? That's how how you look over there, right? So you come down and on scrutinized you start looking over. So you're in this kind of position In my newt and Then you do this then you do my newt detail this arm detail Yeah, and that I would just not go as high You know, but you're starting to cover that the his face. So it's not so big, but you maybe just here Right, so your comes in comes out of that pose rest his arm there looks away Says all that stuff then looks back at him. Do you do this gesture? So you do this here, right? It's perfect actually there you go. There you go This pose This pose You get into here and On scrutinized and kept on scrutinized He starts to look over to be in this kind of pose head-wise and then Right, you're here And then he does that head turn to look at him here to go into in my newt That's when you want that's when you want to have eye contact again because it's threatening it He's just kind of casually telling him. Yeah, we're doing all this to you, but then my newt detail And that's great don't change that love look at that face. It's great great expression great how it is a bit with the eyebrows vivid Tell and actually I personally would go in my newt Detail cut vivid detail Actually, the thing is I would do vivid detail That face see this This guy Vivid detail hold that face don't go into this stay with All right with that look and after he's done with the detail you cut But you're really ending on a super strong And he has him in that look and even here you could have a bit wider eyes. You almost see white This is a bit Crazier a bit in the look and that way because it's such a good ending and you want to cut on that way I was was whoa, that was great And now by adding this kind of smiley look and him looking down You're adding so much more time for the audience to recover and deflate. It's kind of it takes the punch out of the shock Right and you want to have shots where you go like holy shit. That was cool boom next one and people are constantly engaged Again subjective. That's just my thought here. Let me know what you think. All right. It's very cool. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you